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MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 (Page 47)

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged

Hello guys

As promised I am here ….this time very early …n hope so with next also I'll b here quiker..bth chapters are  ready and as soon as I will found all my readers have read this chapter will update 10  chapter too..

 

Thnks a toon fro ur appreciation on previous one……..

 

Rply to u all..

 

I hope u enjoy this chapter too…pls leave ur comments..as the matter a loooot to me

N pls remember me in ur prayers too

 

Love ya looot

 

fiza

 

 



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CHAPTER:9

 

Day ONE

 

Nupur: hey sami''mayank kaha hai

 

Smarat:  laga teer neeshany per'.lo bhai k GPRS link tu tumhary pass hai'.mera bhai kaha hain Nupur jawab do'..

 

Nupur: tum sach mein mayank k bhai ho'.uff

Samrat: Nupur'.pls'.aj kah diya hai ainda maat kahana'.woh mera bhai hai'aur bs itna hi sach hai

Nupur: array yaar'..i really didn't mean it'.mjhy tu yaad bhi nhi tha islyan yeah boola..sorry if I hurt u '..ab yeah bata mayank kaha hai

 

Samrat: I don't know 'subha tu nikal gaya tha'.

 

Nupur: strange '.asa tu pehly khabi nhi kiya'.subha mjhy call bhi nhi kiya'layny bhi nhi aay'text kerdiya aur mein call kiya tu uthaya bhi nhi''.woh thik than a

 

Samrat:  array yaar thik hi hogaya..

Nupur: is k kya matlab hai'.

Samrat: kal mein ghusay mein kuch zayada bool gaya aur phir woh room chor k chal gaya'..phir late aaya ..i was asleep'n meray uthny se pehly hi left

 

Nupur: KYA'.woh raat mein itni dhand mein bahar gaya'tjhy pata hai woh bemar hoja ta hai'.aur us ko itna boolna ke kiya zarrorat thi'...mein bool chuki thi na'

 

Smart: yaar ek tu mein tumhari side lay rah tha'..

Nupur: us k reaction thik tha but

Samrat: but kya'yaar tu dono k mjhy samhj nhi aata..ek dosray ko jo chay kaho'koi aur kahay tu musibaat'..

 

Nupur: kisi ko yeah haq nhi '.samhjay

Samrart: kyun 'yeah haq kis aur ko kyun nhi'..yaar acha hai bhai ki koi girlfriend nhi'.warna bechari insecurity ke mari hoti

 

Nupur: laughed'tera bhai ki ab tak 26 Gf hain 'tension maat lo colloge khatam hotay hotay 56 hojay gi'.

Samrat: woh sachi mein grilfrnds thi????'.un mein se kisi ko bhai  ny khud ko dayny k security di'..yeah haq tu sirf ap ka pass hai'.

 

Nupur: tu phir shooro hogaya

Samrat: innocently'.kya kya'mein ny kya kaha

Nupur: forget it'..shrama khandan k blood mein hi problem hai'ek se bar k ek namoona

Samrat: aaahhhh'khoon(blood) per maat jana '.warna yaha khoon bahadoo ga'

Nupur:  aaah ..dramy baaz..side day..teray bhai ko mano ja k'.kahin konay mein bacho ki tarha moo latkay bahta hoga '..

 

She went to find him'.no she knew where he must be'..he gone there to hide himself from her'.forgeting she knows him way too well'.

 

He was on collge roof top'lost sum where in sami's words..n fighting with his inner feel tooo'.

 

Mayank: see..i can stay away from her'.i dint die without her'.neither im going restless' touchimg his heart  my heart beat is fine'.no symptoms like tht in shahrukh films'.so im nt at all sumwhere near love'.feww'so relieved'''

 

Haarat ke baat hai us ny mjhy dhoonda bhi nhi'..hmmm'class chal rahi hogi islyan'but asa tu khabhi nhi hoa'she always cum upto me''sami must have caught her..us ny jan booj ker anay nhi diya hoga''hmmm''.must b

 

 He closed his eyes 'feeling the cold wind on his face

 

Mayank: achoooo

N recived a tight slap at his head'

 

Myank: neehcya giray gi kiya'.though he didn't looked back to know who it is'.

Nupur: tu ek baar hi gir ja na'..raat bhar bahar ..phr aj yaha dhand mein upper'khud khushi k pora plan hai tera kiya'..

Myank: koi nahi

Nupur: tu subha se kaha hai'aur mjhy laynay kyun nhi aaya'phn kyun nhi utha rah

Myank: meri marzi'ek din tjhy se baat na kero '..tu kuch hojay ga

Nupur: haan..tera murder'.comon yaar kal k lyan ab tak naraz hai'

Acha baba sorry ..ab chal yaha se'class mein

Mayank: mera mood nhi hai'.

Nupur: kyun..tu theekh hai na'.uncle se kuch baat hoi kiya'

Mayank: nhi

Nupur: tu devdas kyun bana hai'

Mayank: mein koi devdas nhi ban hoon'aur na hi mjhy kisi se pyar hoa hai'.

 

He said so abruptly shocking Nupur'.he slaped himself in mind'..ek baat bhi nhi chopa sakta tu'ab shooro us k 525 sawal

 

Nupur: yeah kya kaha tu ny'tjhy pyar hogaya hai '

Mayank: tera deemagh karab hogay hai kiya

Nupur: idhar dekh

Mayank: he looked straight towards her 'kya

Nupur: haan ab thik hai'tu thik thak tu hai

Mayank: h e turn towards her n said'..hain na..meri shakal bulkily thik hai na..mjhy kuch nhi hoa hai

Nupur: haan ..per asy kyun poch raha hai'

Mayank: woh asay hi'.chal class mein chlaty hai

 

He stood up n turn around to see sami on door of stirs'grining at him'.

 

Mayank: Nupur mein ja rahoon tu ajana'.saying this he run away nt only frm there but also frm colloge '.it was bst way to avoid her

 

At class'nupur find mayank no where

Nupur: yeah is ko kiya hogay hai,,,khud tu pagal hai'mjhy bhi keray ga..is k deemagh mein kuch tu chal raha hai'

 

Beep beep 'text message

 

Nt feeling well'so going home'dnt worry ..i am fine..tension na lay'na tjhy se naraz hoon'na ghussa'bs thori dhaand lagai hai'dhhant maaat pls'aur hostel any k lyan gate keeper ko bribe kerny ki zaroorat nhi'.na sami ko batana..us ki alag Ram Khani shooro hojay gi'..tc

 

She smiled n felt relived'.from morning to now..for the first time he behaved normally.. he too felt the same'.making her worried n beahiving so weird left him restless too'..ths was the best way too tell her'.n make her reaxed as sami will nt get to know it

At evening :

Smarat: yeah lo tumharay lectures'

Mayank: thanks''. Doost ho tu asi..love ya

Samrat: wht did u said haan'..

Mayank: completely ignoring his question he went off too bed n slept '''

Day TWO:

 

Samrat: bhai ur playing the bet unfair''ruuning away from colloge is nt done'

Mayank: ok fine'..u want me to be at colloge I'll n show u I m right

 

He went in class n for the first time he took the seat beside sum1 else thn Nupur'.he set beside priya'..nupur looked at him in a disgusting look'ignoring his act as she know he flirting with her'

 

Lecture started n bth of them start yawning 'soon Nupur was engross in lecture but mayank was just trying to concentrate on lecture'but all in vain'.he was missing the masti they use to do'the way she use tickle her ..the way he use to push her pen while she is writng or pulling her notepad'.caressing her hand n getting tight slap n dead looks'.or making fun of teacher'doing chating by writing on paper'..he looked at her she was busy in lecture but looked at him n turn the face again away'he was "what yaar"' n she was " beta tu bahar aa"'..

 

The bell rung n he found himself relived the class ended but the day didn't'.he came out n she came behind hiting him with his beg'..

 

Nupur: wht 'tu aj meri jaga priya k sath baihta'..

Mayank: haan tu 'tu kyun jealous hoti hai..

Nupur: jealous hoti hai meri joti'dkh 'ainda asay kam HER ROZ kerna'aj tuhy pata hai mein ny kitny arm se lecture uthra'.

 

They were wlking n mayank just frozed ther

Mayank: acha tu tjhy meray baghir maza aata hai'..thik hai ..tu mein teri life se hi chala jata hoon'aram se jina fine'..

N it was nupurs turn to froze'..

 

Nupur: shakal achi na ho tu baaat ach kerliya ker''tu ja ker tu dkha ..meri yaad mein deewana na bandiya tu mera naam badlday na

Mayank: aay hello'.chal chal'.mein tere baghir rah nhi sakta kiya'

Nupur: haan

Mayank: bet

Nupur: bet

She left the other way n he to other '..no they weren't following the bet but he was going o practice n she needs to meet prince for sum colloge festia arangments'..

 

She was moving to prince room whn adi appears infront of her'.

 

Adi: hey sweety'kaha hoo

 

Mayank heard the voice n turn around to c him taking to her with a gring'.moving fwd to him '.he complelty ignore wht nups is saying ..wht only he listen was'.

 

Nupur: its ok adiraj..forget it

Adi left n Nupur turn to find a fuming mayank infront of her'.she was hell scared..mayank wa nt a person to become so angery but these days his mood swings where diificult to control'..

He didn't say a word n turn back to move away'.

 

Nupur: mayank meri baat tu sunn'

 

Mayank: turn to her'..pointing his finger..is waqt mjhy kuch nhi suna..tu mjhy se door ra..warna mjhy nhi pata mein kiya kero gaa..JUST STaY AWAY>'.

 

Saying tht he left 'a man stoped him in the middle of colloridoor n gave him n envolpe'.he snatched it n went away

He opened it n crashed it in his fist 'throwing it away

 

He was practicing in court from last two hours'he was sweating 'exhausted but was putting his anger on the ball '.when sum word where echoing in his ear '

 

Beta Myank;

 

Mjhy pata hai tumhain meray tareeqay achay nhi lagtay'..per yeah sach koi nhi badal sakta k tum meray betay hoo'.Suhana ke akhair neeshani'.pls ghar wapas ajao'is ghar ko..apny sarbara( leader)..aur is baap ko apny betay k zaroorat hai'..mjhy tumhari zaroorat hai..ek baar sab bhoola ker wapas ajao'

 

Vivek Sharam'

 

MayankPOV:

 

Kash yeah sach mein badal sakta'k mein ap k beta hoon' hits  ball'kash apko pata hota maa ap se jitna pyar kerti thi ..uthi hi ap k tarreqoo se nafrat'. Hits the ball more fourcefully'..ap ki in saab baatao ke wajha se hum ny maa ko khoodiya..aur mein ny mama (shilpa anty) ko'..ap ny sab kuch barbad kerdiya'..n u say forget it '.

 

Its ok adi..forget it'.i hate ths word'.

 

 Kneel down 'throwing his racket on floor he was compllety  tired'he stood up n took shower dried himself n rush to beach to get sum peace

 

This was the letter every mth he recievd..n ths was the reaction he always give'

Nupur has always been there to support him'.n divert his anger n attention 'but today he was alone n free to fatigue himself'..

 

 

Walking on th beach 'he found himself alone'..no one to share his pain '..geting a push from a boy n girl ..

Mayank: heyy..watch it

Boy: sorry dude'.rukh tujhy choro ga nhi

Girl: pehly pakar tu

 

He smiled at them'.they were splashing water n enjoying atmost'..remebering the time he spend here with her..he laughed inside remebring her face 'she hates getting wet n he use to pick her up n throw in water''

 

He took a deep breath

Mayank: mein us ko kyun yaad ker raha hoon'its ok adi..how can she said tht

 

He was missing  her'missing her shoulder to cry on'missing her tantrums ..wch she through to make him laugh in his most miserable times..missing her smile wch makes him smile..misiing her eyes where he can see..his real self'

 

Closing his eyes with a smile'.her face appears ..he was remembering each n every moment spended with her''she splashed water on his face'.n he hided his face with a reflex'..sliding his hands down he opened his eyes n found her no where..he looked here n there..n stood there for sum moments collecting himself on his changed feel'.

 

Mayank: I m nt getting restless ..if she is nt around..its just I spended to much time here with her'..

 

Denying once again he left the place'when his heart hs now start taking dominance  over his denials '''.

 

 
 


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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 4:52am | IP Logged
another awesome update fiza....
i hope he will realize soon that it is not just friendship...
fab update...
thnx for the pm fiza

Edited by -moona- - 28 February 2011 at 12:00am

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged
awesome update dear...........
loved the way mayank ignoring nupur but still making her comfortable....
 sam is toooo cute yaar...................
hmm. its really getting interesting....
lloved it sooo much..
love yaa..tc

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Posted: 27 February 2011 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Fizuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
la la la la la la la la la la la ......lalalalalalalalalala

Yeeeeeeeeeee update mil gayi- thank u so much dear for r awesomest upate
heheheheehe so maynk was trying to avoid nups-bechara tak tak- nups ki bina use rehna nehi ata pher koshish kyun karte hai..............

hehehehehe he was trying to console himself that he can live without her.lol
ye tu mera maynk oops nups ki mayank ki kya halat bana diya- bechara he was in dilemma.

 

Mayank: see..i can stay away from her….i dint die without her….neither im going restless… touchimg his heart  my heart beat is fine….no symptoms like tht in shahrukh films….so im nt at all sumwhere near love….feww…so relieved………

 

Haarat ke baat hai us ny mjhy dhoonda bhi nhi…..hmmm…class chal rahi hogi islyan…but asa tu khabhi nhi hoa…she always cum upto me……sami must have caught her..us ny jan booj ker anay nhi diya hoga……hmmm…….must b..


ye hain usko avoid krne ki namuna..........

but thanx GOD nups found her and gave him a tight slap on his head- buddhu mere nups ko avoid karna chati hai....

i loved their convo yaar- and i also loved maynks hide n seek  game.lol

hmmmmm maynk got a msg frm his dad- i felt sad for him

kash nups waha hota-pher wo mayk ki sambhal leti

mayank was missing nups and remembering her badly

hey fiza bahut hogaya- jaida maat satao use. main janti hu, tu bi janti hai aur ab sam bhi- ki use nups pyaar hai.

i hope mayu will realize it soon


fantastic update sweet heart

too good

loved it so much

keep it up








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Originally posted by -Faria-

res but no res.LOL

marna hai tujhy meray hatho tu bata dayy

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Beautiful udate
i loved it
 
do continue soon

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Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by -Faria-

res but no res.LOL

marna hai tujhy meray hatho tu bata dayy


ha ha i know- u'll kill me .
dekh liya teri dosti, dekh liya teri pyar.....



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