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MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 (Page 36)

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by roshneerakhali

omg1 they cant even survive one single day without each other.why dont they understand that its not only friendship?
OMG..thts the problm thy r so stupid naaaa
LOLLOL..just wait n read..
thnks for comenting

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by gopi06

cute and funny updt
thanks for the pm
thnku so much dear
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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

LOL fizu it ws amazing one yaar...
Just loved the chit chat on phn...LOL...specially in the last 'why r we behaving like a cheesy couple'...Mindblowing...
Even sami ws hilarious...too gud..
Cont soon...
thnku so much auro
 
glad u find it funny
i ll cont ASAP

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Nice part

loved it
thnks aloot
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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 1:32pm | IP Logged

HEY GUYS

 

I m back…but nt with a bang…its n oki update..i hope u all will enjoy it…im nt feeling well thts why ….

 

Thnku soo much all for liking previous one….

 

A VERY HAPPY VALENTINES DAY TO U ALL, MAY U HAVE ALL THE LOVE N UR LOVE ONES ALWAYS WITH U, N MAY U B LOVED MY UR LOVERS THE WAY U WANT

N faria I love ur emoticon

 

Love ya all

Fiza

 

N ya…rplyd to u all…

 

 

 



Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 February 2011 at 3:52am

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CHAPTER: 7

 

 Samrat was awake when he was busy chating with her'.he kept take glance at him'n his expression'thy were strange..he smiled at himself'.

 

Samrat: Nupur tum ko zara detail mein jana paray ga'..cya soon

 

At college:

 

Sam: bhai kya ker rahy hoo

Mayank: GPRS se osma bin laden ko talash ker raha hoon'..sarcastically

Sam: per woh tu khud tum se milny arha hai'

 

He looked at samrat with a surprise n than looked at the direction where he signal to see him through his eyes'.

 

She was standing right there 'busy chating n laughing with boys'

 

Sam: he cam behind maynk near his ear'.ohh Nupur k our bhi doost hai'LARKAY

Mayank: he gave him a dead than disgusting look'..ohh tu madam agai ..n she evn didn't bother to call me

Sam: uffuu'tum dono apni mahabarat jarhi rekho'mein ja rah hoon milny

 

Hi Nupur ..how r u

Nupur: hey sam'im fine..how ru ..hwz ur first day'did u made sum frnd..cologe kasa laga..maza aya ..

 

He was busy counting sumthing on hs finger

Sam: answer 1..im fine too..ans2'first day was fine'ans3'bhai ny kisi ko doost nhi bany diya'..ans4..colloge is cool'ans5'maza tu buhat aaya..bhai  ko tang kerny mein'.

He again checked his fingers'.i think I answered all questions right..

Nupur: oye ..mera mazak banaty hoo'.where is ur brother

Sam: there ..angry again

Nupur: uffu..nt again..tum kuch zayada narz nhi horahy hoo aj kal'..bilkul nagging wifes ke tarah..her waqt narz

Mayank: as if u care..he hits her bag..agai thi tu bata nhi sakti thi

Nupur: abhi tu aai hoon'dad ny direct cologe chor diya tha'..

He cam near n hugged her..she responded back'welcum back '.pulled her off the ground n than put her back with a jerk'.

 

 

Samrat: wah kya pyar hai'.

 

Thy bth broke a part n looked at him with anger

Samrat wht dosti mein'tum ko kya laga'.thinking he karab hai'seedha wahi jati hai'

Nupur: howz ur day

Samrat: buhat bora

Nupur: is se kis ny pocha

Mayank: porani adat hai

Samrat: wah wah doost agi tu bhai ko bhol gay'

 

Mayank: han'oki im leaving cya soon

Samrat: kaha

Nupur: us ke match practice hai aj..cya ..

 

They roam around the cologe n went to canteen as Nupur was tired n was nt feeling like attending any lecture..after having sumthing they start moving towards the cori door

 

Nupur: so sam'did u like it here

Samrat: yup college is cool'..more over 'I really love ur n bhai's friendship

Nupur: smiled ..thnks

Samrat: u guys cant just live without each other a day'

Nupur: yaar actually '..we don't have any body apart from each other'.mayank ko tu tum janaty hoo'he don't talk to much'don't make frnds'.kuch bolna ho tu mjhy us nikal wana parhta hai'.aur mjhy kuch bolna ho tum mein us se khay baghai rah nhi sakti..so thts like perfect for us

 

Samrat: wasay woh bhi ap se kuch bolay bhagir rah nhi saktay

Nupur: she turned around sensing wht he is upto'.oye round about k round round kyun ghoom rahy hoo'kahna kiya cha rahy hoo

Samrat: actually 'ap aur bhai 'I mean'.

Nupur: just friend

Samrat: bolloywood walay

Nupur: tumhain pitna hai''..rishto mein milawat nhi hoti mr.sharma

Samrat: is mein milawat kya hai'.yeah tu promotion hai'yeah tu single scoop choclate ice cream per ek scoop extra hai'..

 

Nupur: hann'.jo waqt k sath melt hoga'aur phley waly scope ko bhi sath lay ker gir jay ga'.aur bachy ga kya'khali glass..

Samrat: zaroori tu nhi '.agar ice cream melt honay se pehly kah li jay tu'.double scop k double maza'.

Nupur: aur agar ice cream k flavour hi ap ko pasand na ho

Samrat: laay'.yeah flavour kis ko pasand nhi'it's the most deliocous one'

 

Nupur: achaaa'..tu kitni bar kiya hai ap ny yeah flvour taste haan'zara hamin bhi batay'

Smarat: very funny '.ur change topic

Nupur: u have started a stupid topic'.ek sec yeah tum apny bhai k samany bool k dkho

Samrat: mjhy apni jaan buhat pyari hai'

 

Nupur: hey wht ths

Smarat: wht

 

Notice board

Celbrating EID festival'.." cultural day"

 

Nupur: yeah bhi koi din hoa

Myanak: aur nhi tu kya'..

 

She looked at him'.he was looking dam hot'all wet in sweat '..in a track n vest'.his hairs wet with water droping from them'..he shock his head hard to make these droplets fall on her face

 

Nupur: mayankkk'tumhain pata hai na mjy giila (wet) kitna bora lag ta hai na'

Mayank: tu kya kerta'.tum kholay amm mjhy ghoor rahin thi'wht u where checking me'

Nupur: ofcourse  iwas'.yeah hai kya jeei'..kam se kam apny choty bhi k hi khayal ker laytay

 

Mayank: wht' he looked down at his shoulder to find a lipstick mark' ooh yeah'ab kya kero if people want to feel blessd

Samrat: bhai'

Mayank: tu apni ankhein band rkh

Smarat: maa ko pata chaly ga tu un per kya guzaray gi'..woh tu tum ko apna srawankumar samhjti thi..bhi tum ny yeah kya kerdiya

 

Nupur: kalyug hai bhi ..kalyug

Mayank: shut p bth of u

Nupur: maynakkkk'.y r u blushing '

 

Samrat: bhai tumari first thi kya'woh bhi shoulder per'had hogai'sharma khandan k naam doobo diya

 

Nupur: oye..teri kaha kaha thi ..han hann'

Smarat: kasai baatein kerti hu tum yaar'.aray yeah cultural day sound s good na

nupur; wht s so gud

Mayank: obivoulsy'.lariyoon k liyan hai yeah tu'..tu asay taiyar ho nhi sakti

 

Nupur: kyun nhi hosakti'.her saal..aur her special day bst costume k prize mera hota hai'tu is muslim culture day k bhi mera hoga'.u doubt

Samrat: I don't

 

Mayank: tu flirt ker rah hai is k sath

Samrat: kyun tum kero tu chalta hai'mein kero tu problem hai'

 

 

CULTURAL DAY:

 

The whole collloge was decorated with everything tht inspire the festive of Eid..n muslim culture'.most of the girls where either in a churidar or a simple shalwar kameez..n boys where in shalwar kameez too'

 

But one was there who didn't followed it'n tht was mayank ofcourse

Mayank: kya shadi mein aaya hoon'k sherwani pehan ker aao'.

Smarat: tu tum colloge kyun aay hoo

Mayank: tum per has any'.dkho tu tjhy..asa lag rah hai teri shadi hai ajj'sirf ek roomal aur sehary ki kami hai'.

 

He was laughing out loud..when his laughter ceased at a sight in front of him'.NUPUR'he shouted stunned

 

She was wearing a white gha-ra-ra(kind of lehnga)'.her head covered with a dupata'.no jewllery simple khol in her eyes'.she was looking truly mesmerizing

 

Samrat: beautiful

Mayank: he looked at hs brother a bit angry'but than return back to where he was'

Nupur: kya hua sharams..lost it

Samrat: ur looking absoulty mesmerizing'im short of adjectives

 

Mayank: he stod up'n wlk to wards her'MASHA ALLH ..he said was leaving

Nupur: she smiled at hs compleiment'stop flirting shrama'.rokho tumhara costume kaha hai..

Samrat; wch sharam pls define

Nupur: ur looking cool smarat'aur tumhar bhai hamesha ke tarha zidi'

Samrat: so whts say'my date..

Nupur: sure ..y not

 

They move around the colloge , together enjoying n tesing each n evry girl n boy'..mayank was busy at his practice so didn't joined them'.

 

Adi: hey Nupur'mayank ko chor ker kisi aur k sath

Nupur: mind ur own business'..jerk

Adi: this my business'.u know how much I care for u

Samrat was about to came fwd when Nupur signal she can handle him'.

 

Adi cam fwd n touched the scarf wch was lying on her head'..he moved his hands down when his hands were caught'.by mayank..

 

Nupur got scared, she knew whts cuming now'.

 

Mayank pushed him back '.only to colloide him with the pillar,,,, he grap his collar n punched him tight'.with so much of anger he start biting him tht even sami n nupur couldn't uter a word'.

He was n extreme clam person'n it was first time they have seen him like ths

 

When things started to get out of the hold'n when she got in her senses tht nt only adi but mayank is bleeding ..she went near him n grap his arm

 

Nupur: mayank choro us ko '.

He didn't repond

Mayank: door hato tum

Nupur: mayank pls'choro us ko'

 

With a jerk she got pushed away, at wch sami found it the best moment to divert mayank's attention..

 

Sami: Nupur'tum thik hona

He turn towards her'as sami was infront of her, he couldn't get a look at her'.he rushd towards her leaving adi'n adi ran away..

 

Mayank: sorry 'tum thik ho'

Nupur: she was perfect'deemagh karab hogaya hai tumahra 'itn gusaa kyun'.hav eu lost it ..

Mayank: he realize there tactics'n become more angry whn looked bak n adi was no where '..tum    pointing at sami'..kisi lyan thy is k sath'how dare he touched her

Nupur: mayank'.she put her hand on hs shoulder

Mayank: don't '.saying tht he left the place.. n Nupur followed her'leaving a confused, rather firmed sami'.

 

 

 

 



Edited by drfizaahmed - 23 February 2011 at 9:45am

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
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Wah wah Fiza - tu gin kar rakha kya
main bhul gayi lekin tu nehi bhli.LOL
waise thanx me a lot for reminding abt it..



accha sun ab tere update kaisa tha
waise it was not good update

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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww- aise muh maat banao




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i m telling u the truth - sacchi it was not a good update

becoz it was fantabulous update - totally awesome
Haye sami- he is really very sweet person

i loved sanu convo- and icecram wala part was just WOW

Nad my Mayu- BY GOD he was so possessive yaar-hona he chaiye after all he is our hero mayank.
accha lesson diya Mayu us dusht logo ko

overall it was xcellent update jaanu
simply beautiful.........

lekin plz reveal their past soon= why myaank is suffering frm mental disorder
yaar jaldi kar na- itna satata kyun hai

aur ha jaldi jaldi update kar

take care
 







Edited by -Faria- - 21 February 2011 at 9:53am

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
it was damm cool yar......specially the dialogue between samrat and nupur in canteen.......LOL
and that icecream wala part......Big smile awsome..........
loved it ..........Clap


Edited by drmaha - 13 February 2011 at 5:58am

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