Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 (Page 17)

MyInspirationz IF-Sizzlerz
MyInspirationz
MyInspirationz

Joined: 30 October 2009
Posts: 15940

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Fiza... I loved the way Nupur is taking control of the situation...
 
Beautifully written...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

abb01

drfizaahmed IF-Sizzlerz
drfizaahmed
drfizaahmed

Joined: 16 March 2010
Posts: 23949

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 9:44am | IP Logged

 

 

Chapter:4

 

 

Past

Present

 

Nupur: jo mein kaho gi jasa mein kaho gi wasa kero gay'.. she fowrd her hand for assurance

N he simply gave into his in her

Thts like it'.

 

Come in..i called the Barbour n asked him to make him look the way he use to'

Mayank: Nupur no'.he clutch my hand

Nupur: wht happen mayank'its nt gonna harm u..

Mayank: mjhy is se'.

 He is scared'.oh God now its getting harder for me to control or even feel the pain'.

Nupur: if u trust me just close ur eyes'..im here' I took a hold on his hands'.

Reluctantly he closed hi eyes'n he shaved him'

 

Whistle'..

Nurse: u look handsome Mr. Sharma

She left'..I smiled ..n he got embarrassed

Nupur: array wah..tum ny yeah sharmana kab se shooro kiya' he gave hs old dead look'.chalo atlest sumthing is the same'..chalo tumahri fan list mein ek aur k ezafaa(increment) '.wasay aj kal k kiya score hai

Mayank: zero

Nupur: wht'impossible'..ek tu yeah hogai..aur

Myank: Nupur..i don't cant care

 

 

Strange it is 'he use to care'care how many girls are after him'.he use to enjoy it at most'.

 

Mayank: running n settle next to her'uff

Nupur: kaha thy janab'n why r u smiling like an idiot

 

Maynk:  stretching his arms'ahh'cause I have such wonderful time'.n loads of fun

Nupur: raising her eyebrow'fun with whom

Mayank: with priya ..man..encircling his arms around her..n saying dreamingly'she is so hot

Nupur: took his hands off'get away..she hits him..ur such a jerk

 

Mayank: wht '..why 'I just

Nupur: had fun..mimicing him'..define fun

Mayank: u really want me to define fun..he cam close to her

Nupur: she hit him tight..stay away'im nt one of ur girlfriends plz'.stay away'yuck..ur so'ahhhh..how could u

Mayank: laughed '..wht 'why r u feeling so disgusting 'y u girls feels so..when u all urself change ur boyfriends like tht'n enjoy

Nupur: we atleast don't have FUN

Mayank: wht..u do'u use ur boyfirneds money'enjoy free k diner on dates..gifts'and

Nupur: and have FUN

Mayank: kiyaa'aay helloo'wht else as fun'ek sec ek sec he turns towards her'.do u mean tht 'OMG'have u lost it'.hello madam I m never been kissed even

Nupur: raising her eyebrows'.really'.n even haven't

Mayank: ya'actually nt'I had did once

Nupur: wht'surprisingly

Mayank: kissd yaar..woh bhi cheek per'why ur behaving like my mother '.

Nupur: to whom

Mayank: he came close n pecked her cheeks'u

Nupur: she rub her cheeks'ahh'u know I hate ths'

He laughed out loud'rolling on ground'

Mayank: I actually cant belive u thought I had FUNNN..teasingly

Nupur: very funny'.her hafaty larki badlo gay tu asay hi sochi gi''tum shadi k bad tu confuse hojay gay'..darmticaly..just imagine'.wedding night'..tum ny apni biwi k ghonghat uthaya'aur tum ny us say kaha..priya''n u received a tight slap'mein priya nhi sheee naaa honn

Mayank: itna pagal nhi hon jo sheeenaaa'na baba na'

Nupur: she was lughing

Mayank: very funy..meri choro'.just imagine urs'.by chance if u got married'.by chnce if u found n idiot'.than sum1 enter the room like an hero'sit beside the person in veil'came close n took off the veil'.n wht they found'rol reversal'the husband is siting with the veil on'just imagine

 

He said that n run away to save his life'

Nupur: mayank k bacha'ruk ..tu rukh zara..im gonna kill u

Mayank: laughed just think sweet heart

 

 

Mayank: y ru smiling

Nupur: u remember priya..

Mayank; do u remember'he said plainly right see through her eyes

 

There were questions in his eyes'question he wants me to anwers ..question I don't have answer too

Nupur: wht do u thought I forgot everything

Mayank: no'..i just thought u forget me

 

I knew it will cum'..but seeing him like tht never I thought ths will cum so early'.

Nupur: I cant never..u know tht

Mayank: where were '

 

The door open n this incomplete question remained incomplete'im thnkuful to the person who enterd'

 

 

Shilpa: nupur'.

 

I turned around to face her'.i so love her'seeing her after soo long ..i just want to embrace her'but infront of him I don't want to break..he needs me as strong as I can be'.

 

But instead of me she came to me n hugged me tight..caresing my hairs lovingly'

 

Nupur: whispered everything will b fine anty'

 

She broked away n look straight in my eyes'Gosh why all these people r making it more n more hard for me'.

Shilpa: he will be'.ur ok

 

Ahh I m nt tht weak any more'though I was never'but I use to be more expressive

 

Shilpa: u have changed a lot ..she said caressing my face with love

 

 

Nupur: I smiled..i have grown up anty

Shilpa: I never want u and him to grow like tht..u bth have changed..God knows wht u have done to urself'.

Nupur: im fine..its just ur seeing me after so long'abhi tu ap inhay dkhy

 

She look once toward him n just kept looking  towardshim..she went twds him n trace his face lovingly

 

Shlpa: u look so handsome'.just like my son'

Nupur: haina'.ab insaan lag raha hai'.

Shilpa: she touched her face

Nupur: anty im leaving ..im outside..have sum work

 

I left the room..n she sum how follow me..guesing may be I need to talk to her

She put her hand on my shoulder signaling me to sit down

 

Nupur: anty everything will b fine'I talked with doctors'thy r positive

Shilpa: from past 6 mths im fed up of listening all this..he is nt willing to

Nupur: he is..he will'I'll make him'..i want to know wht had happened ..y he is like this

 

Shilpa: me myself don't know Nupur''. U know he don't stay with us'..even after college'.he back from London like ths'.she was sobbing..like ths'complelty nt my son'even at tht time he was quite better'but soon as he didn't find these drugs he strted to behve wired..thn these withdrawl therapies'.he has bcome violent..nt only tht most of the time he remain quite'.

 

Woh wasa nhi rah Nupur jasa hota tha'..itna khamoshi'itna khali'6 mths se mein ny is ke hasi bhi nhi suni'.she started crying

 

Nupur: anty plz'..per kya woh London mein akela tha

Shilpa: han but samrat bhi England mein hi tha'.dono miltay rahty thy ek dosray se'but us ko bhi asa kuch nhi pata tha'Hum mein se kisi ko nhi pata chal k yeah kis tarf jar aha hai..

 

I wasn't able to be his mother Nupur'I was'nt'.he never shared with me wht was going inside him tht made him so weak tht he took such a lame support''I was'nt able to b his mother '

Nupur: aunty plz'..dont say that..u know how much he loves u n samrat '.he never evr can think like tht'.he hates his own father but nt u'.woh thk hojay ga'.ap ny us ko aj dkha na'woh khoshi ker raha hai

 

She hold her hand tightly

 

Shilpa: han mein ny dekha'.aj tu mjhy mera beta dkha'warna koi aur hi dkhta tha'..promise me..u'll stay by him'.you know apart from u he doesn't listen to any1..you can make him do '.even what he hates thhe most'promise me

 

Nupur: relax anty 'I am here'I cant leave him like tht'.u know'.he as important for me as he is for u

Shilpa: I know'.n ur as special to me as he is'.tm bhi buhat thaki hoi lag rahi hoon'pat nhi tum dono k kiya kero'.jao take rest ..

 

Nupur: jee anty..ek bar us ko bata do

 

I enterd the room with my bag on my shoulder

Mayank: so tum ja rahi hoo

Nupur: I'll cum back 2morow..

Mayank: tu mjhy chor k jarahi hoo

Nupur: mayank..mein tumhain chor k khabhi nhi jao gi'.

Mayank: promise

Nupur: han'.stupid

Mayank: bye

 

 

I went home all lost in myself n him too'.could'nt even realize what is waiting for me there

 

I rung the bell'hoping my maid will open'but whom I saw'.i lost my all inhibitions'.i hugged him tight n cryed out loud'.in an urge to find sum peace in his arms'..

 

 

 

 Chapter 5



Edited by drfizaahmed - 27 January 2011 at 9:08am

The following 39 member(s) liked the above post:

salma009drkhoobsooratmayur247mangaloriansupriyamnfankrish_artikomal991JaeeDevRathoreginny09Nirvrithivalliyahcutiepie12Asmara.mayur-ki-diwaniaysha1989hazra66abb01kirti123DhanakZcrazymayuriandrmahaBhawna_arti-Symphony-Wings-of-Fire-firebird-sreevijayanzarfishanzahidlove.mayurartisariska_mnarti.SilentPrincess-Samira---jiya---Anila-Faria.dynamic_dollMyInspirationzshafy_MN_TheJoker-annie07

sreevijayan IF-Rockerz
sreevijayan
sreevijayan

Joined: 12 February 2009
Posts: 8247

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 9:50am | IP Logged

yupie......after a long time ..am the 1st to commentBig smileBig smileBig smileBig smile

and now coming to the update......u know what fiza?? mayur'spast talk juz reminds me of the talk btw me and my friend amit..................i was juz laughing thru the whole convo
 
nupur's and shilpa aunty's conversation was hearttouching........i think some mystery is there with mayank..but what was the end part??? to whom did nupur hug??????waiting 4 the next update dear....
loved..pls continue soon sweety


Edited by achoose - 25 January 2011 at 3:53am

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

abb01drfizaahmed

DhanakZ IF-Dazzler
DhanakZ
DhanakZ

Joined: 18 June 2010
Posts: 3583

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Wao dear Lovely part
flash backs are so funny
But what happen with Mayur now
hope every thing will be fine doon
thankd for pm and cont soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

drfizaahmed

MyInspirationz IF-Sizzlerz
MyInspirationz
MyInspirationz

Joined: 30 October 2009
Posts: 15940

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
such a sad part.. wht happened to mayank???? why is he like this? and why drugs.. of all the things in the world?
 
but, very nice update

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

drfizaahmed

Bhawna_arti IF-Dazzler
Bhawna_arti
Bhawna_arti

Joined: 02 December 2010
Posts: 3436

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
nice part.Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

drfizaahmed

Wings-of-Fire IF-Rockerz
Wings-of-Fire
Wings-of-Fire

Joined: 04 June 2010
Posts: 8667

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
i hope that someone is her father or brother or friend!!!!!!!!! dont want any third person in their lives. i'm waiting eagerly to mayur get married as your ff title is 'ardhangini''

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

drfizaahmed

hazra66 IF-Dazzler
hazra66
hazra66

Joined: 17 February 2010
Posts: 3014

Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
aussum...
loved it....
 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

drfizaahmed

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
ArSh l Tum Mile: Drop in message/Pg 56

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 56 57

Author: U-No-Poo   Replies: 454   Views: 68689

U-No-Poo 454 68689 07 August 2014 at 5:11am by A.Kh_20
ar rm aa when destiny meets love(note on pg 94)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 93 94

Author: mithilalovesksg   Replies: 745   Views: 73130

mithilalovesksg 745 73130 05 February 2013 at 7:46am by amandadsouza95
Adolescence of Love - Chap15/Pg136 (11/29)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 141 142

Author: spln   Replies: 1135   Views: 116639

spln 1135 116639 08 May 2012 at 4:34am by roshni_A
BroKen EndS-MayUr Part-21 , Page-148 12/aug

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 151 152

Author: Let-It-Go   Replies: 1210   Views: 72430

Let-It-Go 1210 72430 13 December 2011 at 7:19am by Angels_Ring
'Sum-I' Shots(on Rajeev)FairyTale Princess (pg-15)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 18 19

Author: Sumi_162710   Replies: 146   Views: 13143

Sumi_162710 146 13143 25 May 2011 at 6:15am by Mahak Sinha

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index