Posted: 17 May 2011 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by valiyah27
Fiza how r u now...take good care...n get well soon dear...!!!
Coming to update so let me tell... u always underestimate urself
...its the cutest sweetest n naughtiest update till date... i was smiling like a fool throughout the update
...i was like scrolling up n down to read each sentence several times...abhi bhi is update ka bukhar nahi utra sar se
...n u say its a filler...this particular update was actually needed as after such heavy moments they truly needed some light ones...its not necessary to give intense romantic moments always... some light sweet n cute moments bhi jaruri hai...these little moments makes life more beautiful...n the way u roped in her dad was the best part...!!!
U bring out each emotions so well through ur words...he was so reluctant to believe that he was actually living this moment...she feared for him as he was not in good state to handle any turmoil anymore...she clutches his shirt n he feels her fear of leaving agn...the way he assures her by entwining their fingers is just BEAUTIFUL
...they truly don't need words their mere gestures r enough for each other to understand...this is the BEAUTY of their relation...his tight embrace n her cuddling more closer was enough to convey their feelings that how much they longed for this moment to live...now comes the Sasur ji...arre baba Dad hi to hai Mogambo thori yeh Nupur bhi na samajhti nahi...bechara he was soo not in mood to leave her
...i soo love this Sasur n Damad i tell u...so adorable...the way sasur ji screamed n Damad accused what if he fall...following to memory loss n 30 more chapters was hilarious
...then comes another 2 ghante se kya karrahe the n his witty n naughty answer of don't be that good for nothing FIL was super hilarious i was literally laughing like crazy ...now comes unkl se dad ka safar n his answer in 2-3 ghante mein was soo funny
...not to forget miss confusion wala punch how u manage to do this i wonder...bechare sasurji n Jiya tumne dono ko confuse kar dala
...now sasurji in mood to praise his daughter as Sanskari n accuse damad as muh phattu to which sasurji is being caught to clarify to whose side he is was dammnn funny
...agn the breakfast scenario was soo much fun to read...Mayank soo bhukkar damad yaar n his live commentry of hockey with beans was soo funny...bechari Nupur...yeh sasur-damad na always ready to pull legs...tang khichao jodi by god
...sasurji blesses n damad give words to his bless...truly adorable bond they share...it feels soo good to see Mayank back to himself...yesss he is back to his jovial kind...the sweetest..cutest...naughtiest...romantic...witty...adorable...n muh phattu...damad ever...!!!
I think ab tak tumhe pata chal gaya hoga how much i LOVED this update...if u can give such sweet update even when down with fever to atleast itna comment to banta hai na yaar
...accha ab jaldi se thik ho jao agar DR...aise bimar honge to hamare jaiso ka kya hoga
OMG ...i almost droped my jaw on the length of ur coment ...
was reding it on my work desk ...so my window was small to hide it from boss...
...but i was reading smiling n my mouth was hunging open...i just want to hugg u sooo tide jani...ur coment was aww..love ya
oki now to ur rply
n yes im fine was down in fever..but now prtty better
yaar its inst i under estimate...but this ff is so much to mean...k mera bus nhi chalta mein dekha doo sab...n time i feel i can do better...or mayb u guys must b expecting more...
i loved it ...u were smiling gr8
soo sweet ...
hey tht so gr8 to know...whn ur readers pointed out why u actually wrote like..this...i wont to exprsee how he is cuming back n makin her cum back tooo
aww i blushing reading ur coments..amn thnkuuu sooo much
lolz..jiya wala part tu i actully planned ones i read her coments...i love to see smiled on ur face yaar...thts so gr8 to know u all liked it
i wanna gave u tons of hugs for this coment...mera fever bhag gaya ...
but ya doent mean im not geting short coments after this ...oki...
thnk a looot n looot