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--Mahima-- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 3:27am | IP Logged
chp 13-
gr8 job

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love.mayurarti IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5702

Posted: 16 May 2011 at 8:35am | IP Logged

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 16 March 2010
Posts: 30360

Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

Originally posted by DhanakZ

Wao Jia That was really So cute and beautiful 
Finally we got some really so sweet Mayur moments
u Know I loved This FF from core of my heart
I really loved susur and damad conversation.
Plz plz update Next part soon.


Thanks for pm

Gul yeh FF maine nahi likhaEmbarrassed... mujhe credit kyun de rahi ho??LOL
lay ja mera yeah credit bhi lay ja...ek hi tu ff hai meray pass bechara sa...woh bhi lay jaCry
--Mahima-- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged
chp 14 to chp 17-
so touching
mayur bond is gr8
i so love it yaar
mayu signed the papers without even questioning nups

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 16 May 2011 at 11:16am
_TheJoker- IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 35582

Posted: 17 May 2011 at 5:02am | IP Logged

edited my commentSmile

Edited by vampire_girl - 17 May 2011 at 5:04am

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by achoose

what a peaceful update dear...without any tensions...
i was smiling thru the whole update...
the dad-son in law convo was 2 cute...
and the mayur was moment was so sweet...
i loved the commentary part of nupur playing with beans...
over all the update was superb dear...
and as u said its nearing to its end...dont want this to be end..
but there is no point of dragging also...
so my sweety...pls update the next part soon...and my comments will be late till june 6th bocz am going to dubai on this 17th...and what happnd to u dear? u alrite? pls tc of ur health 1st..everything comes after that...
hey im so gald to read ur first line
u knwo wht tht was exactly wht i want u guys to feel n usaid tht...lov ya ashu..u awalys hit the target
thnks for liking ther jori...
oye i'll miss u yaar...specially whn next parts are soo much close to mee...but never mind..i wont end it until ur last chp i can t wait to read ur coment...
im fien now...bit fever as i told u
lov ya
n happy holidays

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 16 March 2010
Posts: 30360

Posted: 17 May 2011 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by valiyah27


Fiza how r u now...take good care...n get well soon dear...!!!

Coming to update so let me tell... u always underestimate urselfConfused...its the cutest sweetest n naughtiest update till date... i was smiling like a fool throughout the updateBig smile...i was like scrolling up n down to read each sentence several times...abhi bhi is update ka bukhar nahi utra sar seLOLROFL...n u say its a filler...this particular update was actually needed as after such heavy moments they truly needed some light ones...its not necessary to give intense romantic moments always... some light sweet n cute moments bhi jaruri hai...these little moments makes life more beautiful...n the way u roped in her dad was the best part...!!!

U bring out each emotions so well through ur words...he was so reluctant to believe that he was actually living this moment...she feared for him as he was not in good state to handle any turmoil anymore...she clutches his shirt n he feels her fear of leaving agn...the way he assures her by entwining their fingers is just BEAUTIFULEmbarrassed...they truly don't need words their mere gestures r enough for each other to understand...this is the BEAUTY  of their relation...his tight embrace n her cuddling more closer was enough to convey their feelings that how much they longed for this moment to comes the Sasur ji...arre baba Dad hi to hai Mogambo thori yeh Nupur bhi na samajhti nahi...bechara he was soo not in mood to leave herLOL...i soo love this Sasur n Damad i tell adorable...the way sasur ji screamed n Damad accused what if he fall...following to memory loss n 30 more chapters was hilarious ROFL...then comes another 2 ghante se kya karrahe the n his witty n naughty answer of don't be that good for nothing FIL was super hilarious i was literally laughing like crazy comes unkl se dad ka safar n his answer in 2-3 ghante mein was soo funnyLOL...not to forget miss confusion wala punch how u manage to do this i wonder...bechare sasurji n Jiya tumne dono ko confuse kar sasurji in mood to praise his daughter as Sanskari n accuse damad as muh phattu to which sasurji is being caught to clarify to whose side he is was dammnn funnyROFL...agn the breakfast scenario was soo much fun to read...Mayank soo bhukkar damad yaar n his live commentry of hockey with beans was soo funny...bechari Nupur...yeh sasur-damad na always ready to pull legs...tang khichao jodi by godLOL...sasurji blesses n damad give words to his bless...truly adorable bond they feels soo good to see Mayank back to himself...yesss he is back to his jovial  kind...the sweetest..cutest...naughtiest...romantic...witty...adorable...n muh phattu...damad ever...!!!

I think ab tak tumhe pata chal gaya hoga how much i LOVED this update...if u can give such sweet update even when down with fever to atleast itna comment to banta hai na yaarBig smile...accha ab jaldi se thik ho jao agar DR...aise bimar honge to hamare jaiso ka kya hogaWinkLOL...!!!
OMG ...i almost droped my jaw on the length of ur coment ...
was reding it on my work desk my window was small to hide it from boss...LOLWink...but i was reading smiling n my mouth was hunging open...i just want to hugg u sooo tide jani...ur coment was ya
oki now to ur rply
n yes im fine was down in fever..but now prtty better
yaar its inst i under estimate...but this ff is so much to mean...k mera bus nhi chalta mein dekha doo sab...n time i feel i can do better...or mayb u guys must b expecting more...
i loved it ...u were smiling gr8
soo sweet ...
hey tht so gr8 to know...whn ur readers pointed out why u actually wrote like..this...i wont to exprsee how he is cuming back n makin her cum back tooo
aww i blushing reading ur coments..amn thnkuuu sooo much
lolz..jiya wala part tu i actully planned ones i read her coments...i love to see smiled on ur face yaar...thts so gr8 to know u all liked it
i wanna gave u tons of hugs for this coment...mera fever bhag gaya ...
but ya doent mean im not geting short coments after this ...oki...
thnk a looot n looot

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 30360

Posted: 17 May 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

it was nice update...Star
finally nupur and mayank spend sum time...Wink
sasur damad conversation was awsome...LOLLOL

u should write sum special. sweet moments of togetherness for both of thm...SmileWink

loved it...Clap

how u feeling now?
hey sweet heart
thnks for liking
yup finally they r spending quality time
ohh hoo specail monets ..u knwo im on it ..wait kero ..besharm

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