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MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 (Page 130)

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drmaha

wow finally the most awaited part has been over and thgs becum cleared...phewww...
and samrat...mera dil ker raha hai tht i just slap him atleast thrice...AngryAngryAngry
Angryalthough i like him but wht he did made me crazy...Evil Smile
how could he do ths to his family...to his bro who loves him a lot.and her girlfrnd gunjan...god.yar tu nai tu usko bhi negative present kerdiya...haa haa gf thei kaisey na sath daiti apnai samrat ka...Broken Heart

mayank now knows everythg abt nupur so real game begins now...Big smile.aab pata chalay ga samii ko...Cool.samii ab tu bach ...here's mayank coming...LOLLOL

now m w8ing whn nupur and mayank will met...Day DreamingDay Dreaming i can imagine how beautiful tht moment would be...not for thm only but for all of us readers also ...m i rite...???BlushingBlushing

so thts wht Ardhaghni is all about...hmmm...gud gud..loved it janii...ClapHug

so diya apko 1 week ka break jao janii mazey karoo...ROFLROFL

aur yeh kis compitition ki baat hurahi hai ...?Confused kis mai part lairahi hai ...?? if lairahi hai tu ek aacha sa os likh...rite faria...??WinkSmile

A big for u...


love yaaa janii...


ufff thag gayei kitna baara coment kiya first time...ROFL


 
aay haay...bs tum loogog k lyan yeah hi nhi kiya...aagy sochtay hain yeah kernay ko
lolz
chill meri jan chill
rofl maha...tum bhi na...han mayank is cuming...yeah ...
 
hmm i just hope i can make it beautiful they u all have dreamed ...
 
compition k tu ab ap ko pata hai
acha tu thag gai mil zara mjhy phir batati hoon
lov ya tooo

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ginny09

terrific part loved it 
mayur ke liye bahut bura laga :(
n sam ko neg :(
hope all get sorted soon 
thnks dear
glad u liked it
evrythng will b fine
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ayesha_LuvSaJan

superb update..
thnks dear
 
Originally posted by mahakmev

osom great i sooo loved the suspence
 
hey dear
im soo glad u liked it

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

wonderful updates Fiza.
u r a grt writerClap
phle se pata hi nahi lagne dia k original culprit samrat haiClap
wonderful writtenClap
first i thot, its shilpa aunty, bt whn u updated mayu-shilpa auntywala part...then i thot, its samrat, n also he has a pharmacist GF.
Fiza, tu bhi to pharmacist hai!!! kahi tune aisa kissi k sath to nahi kia???!!!!!!Shocked
i doubt, tu aisa kar bhi sakti haiLOLLOL
bdw, its a grt update...i love d way u slowly revel d whole story.
sanu convo was grt...bt still samrat is stronger one. bt i hate him...n m very sad to hate him, cz for first time m start liking samrat...aur usne aisa kiaCry
that is the strongest part of ur writing that you cant made us supect samrat even for a secBig smile
hats offClap
bt mayu n diary part also grt...its wonderfully written,
i can feel his pain.Cry
bt i m happy, finally he knw everything. bt d worsen part going to come when he l knw abt samrat's betrayalOuch
it ll be most difficult n miserable day for him.Ouch
poor mayur...cant see them in this condition...they both crying for their love.Ouch
waiting for next updte.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.

 
thnks dear
thnks a loot for such a big compliment
 
aay meray profession ko kuch maat bol...BY god tu tu shooroo se hi meri degree k pechay pari hai...aur apny ap k asa dekhna thik hai...kisi aur profession k sth hum yeah nhi kerna chaty thy
 
thnk dear...
lolz...yupi thnks thnkuuu so much...
so glad u felt the pain ...it took so much to make it like tht ..i was soo scared yaar
will update very soon
lov ya

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire_girl

yea kya kar diya api??!! ShockedShocked
mujhe hear attack de diya tumne...dhoka kiya tumneCryCry
samrat ko aisa kaise bana diyaCry
mai to sachi ro rahi hoonEvil Smile
ekta kapoor kahiki...kis ka character kab change kar do pata hi nahi chaltaROFLROFL
mai na kabhi maaf nahi karungi tumneOuchConfusedDeadCry

par nupur is now truly truly going to suffer
uo mayank ko batayegi..mayank bharosa nahi karega
then uo papers dekhaigi..then ..then then...mai to pagal hogayi hoonWacko
shai nahi kiya yea tumne api...shock nahi heart attck de diya tha mujhe..agar mai mar jati to?ShockedShocked
dekho ab mujhe kisi bhi kism ka twist nahi chahie bas...
continue soonEmbarrassed

love
tasfia

oye meri jaan
asi baatein nhi keraty
mary teray dhusman
kya kero agar sami ko asa nhi dekhti tu tum logog ko maza aata..
i know u all have loved him ...thts y u can hate him soo uch n can feel there pain
lol...tu apny deemagh per zoor na dal...mein ekta kapoor nhi hoon samhji...bs ab thora sa intezar...
i'll update soon
 

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged

Helo guys

Im so glad n honored the way u responded to the last chapter..trust me it was a huge fear for me to write n present it ..as it was most awited ….n m so glad to read ur coments

 

I have rplyd to all..but if have missed sum1 tu im soo sorry

I dont know wht ur gonna feel abt this part…but I ..i dnt know

Pls coment waitng for it

Lova ya all

fiza

 



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 chapter 21:

The night seems to be the longest  n sleep was far away from mayank'..his first night after his return to home will such he never thought'..with  the thought he came here was gone now'he just want to knw howz she'.he looked at his phone..n realized he even didn't call her after reaching here'he was so lost in his world'.tht forgots abt the person whom he is the whole world'..

He thought wht so knew ..his love has always been self fish n hers always selfless'..he took the phone n dail the other no'.he wants to do sumthing 'suthning for her''

SA: tu kya yeah thik ker rah hai  is waqt'kuch din rukh ja us ko sambhal ny tu day

Mayank: ab rukh tu zindagi kho do ga'pls maa mera sath doo'.

SA: im always with u dear always'.

'''''''

Nupur  was sleeping cudling her self'..it was morning but she didn't knew'after the heavy night she was so tired n torn of crying tht she went into slumber almost in the morning'.her sobs n hiscups where still there in between of her sleep'..she was taking deep breths to cover the brethlees crying session she has'

 

The door of her room open n a man entered'.with heavy n silent steps he went near her'.settling himself on his knees..he was absorbing her'.she was looking the same as he saw her last time he made her suffer'.yea it was mayank '.he came back as he did red a chapter in her diary '.wch says

Dekho mayank aj kitan ajeeb din hai'..aj woh din jo meri zindagi mein kahbhi aay ga ..asa mein ny soch bhi nhi tha'..aj tumhay andaza bhi nhi hai tum ny kis cheez per sign kiya'.jantay hai woh kiya tha'

Humara marriage certificate..

His heart stoped right there'his breth remain in his throat'.he was choking in shock n pain'

Kitni ajeeb baat hai na'aj se mein sirf tumhari hoon sirf tumahri'per asa mein bool bhi nhi sakti'.lolz'tumahin pata hai aj meri wedding night hai'.chalo baht jao..tumhi kahty thy na mein ghooght utho gi'utho tumahra'

He smiled when his tears where now nt stoping..

Dekha mil gaya mjhy ek stupid jis k naam mjhy se chor gaya'.per mein tum se kuch nhi mang rahi sach mein'.shayad tumhain kahbi pata bhi na chaly'.per mein is pal  ko cheena jati hoon'dil khol ker'.yeah ek kaghaz k piece mjhy kitna precious hai tum andaza bhi nhi kertay'.aj agar sab kuch thik hota tu 'shayd aj hum ek'..nhi mein tum se ko demand nhi kerna chti'.sirf tumhain khud per haq dayan chati hoon'

 

He still cant imagine the person lying in front of him is his wife'.his nupur'he slowly went up n set on the edge of bed'n kept looking at her with all the love he hold for her '.spreading  his hand lovingly in her hairs'.he just want to know the moment is real or not 'with just a touch she woke up with a jerk n fear

Nupur: ahh'she was breathing heavly n was looking blankly  at the figure in front of

Mayank: nupur

The voice was familiar but her mind n ear cant synchronized to register it as reality'.

Mayank: kyun'.kyun kiya tum ny yeah sab han'.why '.why u did tht much for me'.he just can saw surprised nupure rather thn shocked one

Sliding his hands lovingly on her cheeks..feeling her skin ..he cuped her face'wch made her shievr'..it was feeling sumthing different today'sumthing was ozzing out from his eyes'immense pain , joy , passion..guilt..so much combined tht it was difficult to figure out wht exactly he holds for her '..

Mayank: Why u feel so deeply for me whn I don't desrve even ur pity on me'.why nupur'.why u scarified ur whole life ur self for me'..

 

She was still looking at him cant just figure out wht he is saying n why'.

Mayank: asay kiya dekh rahi hoo'..he took out her diary'.n she closed her in regret n thn opened thm in shocked n looked at him'

Nupur: tumhin

Mayank: sab pata hai'.hann'..

Nupur: tu tum mjhy per

Mayank: his grip tighten 'don't u dare say tht im feeling pity on u '.dont u dare say tht for my feeling ..i know thy r not intense as ur'.but still '.he paused 'I feel same for u '..

She closed her eyes n let the fresh tears 'it seems like a life time she has spended to hear it'she cryed a bit louder n lower hr head'.he griped her face n tried to make her looke up'touching his forehead with her he too strt sheding sum tears'.her hands went up to her cheeks to hold his hands  as her'ages passed..n so as the hope of this

This feeling tht thy bth though thy will never feel'.from others warmth n affection 'but God did what HE shud'they had them self with them ..in them'holding them

Wiping off her tears'.wch were not stoping now..he slowly move forward to claim her his..hi only '..placing his lips on her forehead..making her gasp on the moment '.. her lost the grip on his hand with the shiver' n he kept lingering there for too long ..he him self doenst want the feeling to end'.doesnt wnt himself to be deattched from her'.

'..she tightly closed her eyes'.clutching her fist'.wht she was feeling was far beyond one can describe  his first love touch'was making her forgot her pains 'herself 'moving away he relectanly n slowly 'he  saw her eyes closed'he wiped off her tears'n she hugged him tight'nearing him more n more towards herself..tighting her arms around him''.he too tighting his grip n hide him self in her neck '.the moment was so serne for thm tht thy don't want it to end'.

Broking her aprt from himself'.he looked at her'who was still not looking at him'wch was making him restles'..he thought of cuming back to the way thy where

Mayank: laughed

She looked at him in between her hiccups n glared at him like a child

Nupur: hass kyun rahy hoo

Mayank: ms nupur bhushan'.u landed  with me'the stupid Sharma'.unbelievable'.he chuckled again n she smiled

Nupur: ya unbelievable'.

Mayank: tum ny tu pora plane banaya tha mjhy dump kerny ka haina'..

Nupur: she just said a word'.

Mayank: par pata nhi kasy mjhy pata nhi chla'ya shayd mein ny yaqeen nhi kiya'..u know if we walk back at our colloge days'how we were'.phir hum asay '.he laughed

N this time she joined him to n laughed with him

Nupur: deemagh karab hai na mera'.

Mayanj: aur nhi tu kiya'is stupid sharam k sath'u actually end up'haaa'tumhari kismet

Nupur: aur tumhari

Mayank: khush kismati '.

Nupur: stop acting so chessy

Mayaank: ya now v r actually acting'no no we r actually a chessy couple'..

Laughingly he took her in his embrace agin..stroke her hairs with one hand ..griping her with other 'he was just feeling her so close..he was busy moving his face n playing with her hairs with his lips..but suddenly he got sumthing   n broke aprt in excitement

Mayank: ary samrat ko bata tay hain'.woh tu itna khush hoga

The moment she ws losst so in his touch'.in his intimacy..she was not even able to register his words for a min'Her smile , her fear free mind'.choked'she just cant figure out wht to say n how to say'..as soon as she realized wht he has said'.she still donot know he knew she is her wife

though mayank ...in real knows evrything but he just want to know from her tht miracle tht has happened way before ''.

 



Edited by drfizaahmed - 06 May 2011 at 1:52pm

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