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MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 (Page 123)

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

people plz unrese else im not updating...update chaiy tum ko tu mjhy coment chiay


Accha sun tera update was rocking yaar
though i knew it was sam------- hehehehe main samjh gayi thi


but u knowwhat i m really bad for mayu and nups
they loved sam a lot
yaar how could he do this with my sweet mayur...

i just adore Sayanjk and as well as Sanu relationship

i really loved sam - but now sighhh


i hope sam will realize his mistake soon...


poor maynk wo tut jayega yaar...

oye kuch accha karna mayur ki saath


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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

people plz unrese else im not updating...update chaiy tum ko tu mjhy coment chiay

Edited Big smile...ab jaldi update karo please...!!!

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
Main acchi baccho ki tarah edit kar diya
mujhe chocolates chaiye


fizuuu now plz write a Mayur/Arti OS for d contest
pilizhhh


Edited by -Faria- - 30 April 2011 at 2:33pm

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aray baap re ..sary abhi yahin hoo..ach wait im updating ...
@ faru...u know me na these days...i dont know i'll b able to or not..thniking of suja's sugeestin..she wants me to go with wajood

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by drfizaahmed

people plz unrese else im not updating...update chaiy tum ko tu mjhy coment chiay

Edited Big smile...ab jaldi update karo please...!!!




valiyah0- bapre its a tough name...
valiyah tum mujhe koi chota sa naam bata do yaar


accha i m smiling for u - a big smile frm fiza's side... ab khush




Now happy??????????



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oki guys

as promised i here with the last part of Chapter 20 ..with this...the suspnse n i hope ur all questions are clear...
 
hope u enjoy this...
marna maat...just trust me
 
lov ya guys
fiza...
n ya as i have given three updates in a day ...tu mjhy ek week k tu off milay ga na...hainaLOL...atleast coment uthny baray honay chaiya...just joking
 
n ya ...geni...i m amazed to c ur coment tht was though empty ...but u acutally apperd here lov ya ..
 
 


Edited by drfizaahmed - 30 April 2011 at 2:40pm

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CHAPTER 20 C

Mayank…yeah kya kiya tum ny..kyun….kyun …why u left….why….i knew its isn't abt MUkTI…I know it because of me…I know u have ssen love in my eyes…I know I derve this punishment….but …kyat um rukh nhi sakty thy…emin tu kuch bhi demand nhi ker rahi thi….maynk pls…wapas ajo….akb se kam koi adrees koi no hi day tay…

Itni bari saza ….tum …….u took my soul with u ..y u left me to breth only

 

He trace the word with his hand drope sum teras on it….he can se how much she cryed tht night ..her hand wrighting n the mess of ink on this paper….she even wasn't ble to stop crying while writing …though the date on the letter is of a week after he left….he hit his head back on wall….cursing for making her cry..for god knows how many nights……

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Samart: phir shoroo hoi..dastan—e-tanhai….n laughed…two stupid people ..living with each other far away from each other….

Nupur: per tum un ko aj bhi alag nhi ker pao

Samart: ahh …such a over estimation…..dekho u are here all alone….kaha hai kaha hi …jis ko tum ny nai zindagi di…..

Nupur: aur us ki us zindagi k zimadar bhi tum hi thy hain na

Samart: he bent down..yes my love …it was me…only me….ab bata ta hoon mein ny kya kiya….

First as my love ask me to join my brother …n I just rashed towards him….n whn I went there..i found a person…acha hoa tum nhi gai..warna tum tu…..

N thn it was smiple…he was so lost in u tht us ko kuch bhiu kero us ko pata hi nhi chalta tha…..

Zayada kuch nhi …mera bhi weak horaha hai tha ..tu bs…mein us ko roz ek galss milk dayta tha….aur phir…he pretended to faint….aur bs..phir rozz…roz..bechar behosh hojata….tu obivoulsy ..i orderd him to go n see a doc…after all u asked me to take a good care of him….

N thn doc gave him wht nthing….but I have my sweet innocent girl friend as a pharmacist….bring morphine for me….n thn the game began …n ther u was waiting for him on the inauguration of MUKHTI…..

………………………..

Hi  mayank,

Pata nhi kasay ho…per tumhary liya …I have a good news…after so much of my bla bla the bank agreed on the loan….hmmthy were right in a sense I don't have any big persob to take my guarantee….dekha ab tu duniya ko bhi mjhy per ateebar na raha….tum sath nhi hona…aj ek aur mazy ki baat hoi..adhiraj propsed to me…n I soo missed ur expression…use too love tht possiseve expression on ur face…..colloge finally khatam ho gya…aura b mjhy us jaga nhi rehna pary ga..jaha tum nhi ho….

Aj shayd koi dino bad is roof top per a ker bhati hoon….is hawa mein aj bhi wohi baat hi….woh asay hi jhoti hai jasy tum…..wohi ehassa hai jasy tum…

 

He closed the diary..it was getting hard to read more….itna dard diya na mein itna zayda…mjhy se parha nhi ja raha aur tum tu

He opened agin n

Congrats mayank…aj tu mein ny tumhary door jany ki wajah bhi meeta di…ab tu koi wajah hi nhi door rehny ki….dekho na…mukti tumhary samnay hai….aj mein ny tumhara jitna itezar kiya utna khabi nhi kiya…her news paper her trv channel…yaha tak k internationally b us ki inguration announce ki thi…per tum nhi aay….aj boori rrat mein yahin thi …is intezar mein k shayad tum meray liyan nhi Mukti k lyan tu luto gay….

 

Per mein galat thi ..shayd zindgai mein tumhain kuch aur zayada important mil gaya hai….

Mayank: kash nupur mein apny hosh mein hota us waqt….tu tumahry sath hota,,,is pal ko hum ny sath meinjiya hota….hum ny khud ko ek dosray k sath jiya hota

…………………..

Samrta: aur un bana mayank drug addict …woh bhi morphine…..per masla tu tab ho jab meri baap..arrived…aur morphine band kerna pri …bhai ki halat karab…aur dad us ko indi lay gi..wohi bhi waha k sab se bary hospital mukti..haa…I soo hate this…..phr se plan muskil hogaya…per woh dard bhi kafi tha jo tumhain diya mayank ko asy dekh ker

 

Nupur: aur phir hum sath hogaya…she smiled..u failed samrat

Smart: no my sweet heart….tumhain kiya lagata ….tumhar aek sach sirf tmhary laywer aur merya dad k bech hai…

So most suprising think was this…..meri maa k itni muskil se mein ny is baat k lyan manaya…tht ur the culprit …n sumhow she agreed..n she was abt to take him away whn…my dad agin arrived..uff…..n he did wht I never thought he will

……………………..

Aj tu ek ajeeb baat hoi mayank

Uncle whom we misunderstood loves u like anything…..u know wht he bring u to mukti n now he is helping me to claim u mine…anty ko pata nhi kiay hoa hai…woh tumhain hospital se lay jana chati hai….mein dobara tumahin us taraf nhi jany day sakti ….mjhy nhi pata yeah sahi hai k galat ..mjhy aur koi rassta nhi dekh raha..pata nhi tum kya socho gay…

 

Mayank: as kya nupur…aur ma any asa kaha..abhi tu woh tumhary baray mein…..kiya kiya tum ny nupur ….plss..batao…khud aur kis muskil mein daal liya

……………………………

Samrat: aj mein ap ko kis naam se pukaro…nupur bhuhsan..ya Nupur Mayank Sharam

The whole world around her …strted to spin….tumhain

Samrat: mjhy kasay pata..yahi na…..bhabi jan….meray gahr mein bhat ker ..lawyer se paper bana way..phir meray hi gahr mein bhat ker sighn kero gi…aur mjhy pata bhi na chlay….jab k mein ny tumhari HER EK HERAQT PER NAZAR THI HAN…per yeah baat bhi tumhary hi par rekho ga nupur sharam……

Dad told  u abt the clause in his will tht after him if anybody has right on mayank is his wife….n u who was dying for tht…within a day made papers n …bhai se sighn kerna tu tumhary liyan koi baat hi nhi thi….aur us ullu ny bena kuch dekh sign bhi keridya…ahh…I so hate these lovers

Nupur: ab tum kuch nhi kersakty samrat kuch bhi nhi …

 

He closed the diary n put it near his heart …his cryed where now louder …he just cant imagine just cant imagine…wht she has done for him

…………….

Samrat: tumahri bhool hai yeah…..kya bato gi mayank ko kya kiya…us ko nafarat hai dhokay se….aur phir us ko yeah kasay bato gi k us k itna pyara bhai yani mein …is the culprit han…ek sach k sath dosra sach tum nhi tu mein bata do ga…..us ki jan hi chali jay gi…janti hoo na…us ki halat kasi hai…..batao na ja kay….meri jan tum us se kuch nhi kah sakti kuch bhi nhi…

Sorry …

Nupur as standing there numb ,..he was right she cant tell him..he will die if we will get know wht she has done for him…he will die in guilt…n above it whn he will know samrat has done all this …thn …she just even can imagine the depth of his pain…

Samrat: pyar houa ikrar..nhi ho sakta…..pyar se hi tu darta hai dill…he laughed out loud n left a dead nuppur alone to cry n sob….

Khuda ya way …ishaq hai kasa yeah ajeeb re…

Dil k kareeb aya ….dil k naseeb rahy …..

 

She droped herself on floor n sobbed on her luck…she owe herself to the person she loves madly …she cant claim him…she know who  made thm sufer she cant make him suffer….the only person whos gonaa sufer is herself …herself….she cryed lying on the floor…

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He has nthing to say …he just cryed out loud lying on the floor….holding her words closed to his heart as much as he can…he curdle himself..

Mayank: kyun…kyun kerti ho itna pyar ..kyun nupur….ek bar na tu koi sawal na koi haq manga…sirf dayti rahi..why u love me so madly ….u spended whole life fullfiling my dreams my hopes my duties…..n wht I gave u nthing ..just tears n a wait of whole life…wao wht a love I have for u…..

Tum ny ek bar bhi apni zindagi k baray mein nhi socha…ek abr bhi ni…mjhy pata  bhi nhi chalany diya….u really behave as my soul mate…nafraat ho rahi hai mjhy khud se …..mein ny tumse khabi payr kiya hi nhi….i don't even deaire ur sucj intese feeling…

The whole night the two soul again cryed but this time not for there pain…but for each others pain…for nupur was agin a helplss night she spended in her home

N for mayank its was a shock n realization for wht decision he made n not only he suffered but he made her suffered too…thy more he wants her to gave her peace n happiness …the more he ends up giving her tears …just tears…..

 

 

Totay khawabo k mazar per mera jaha chal diya ….

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So finaaly guys u get to know y this ff was called Ardhangini…..waiting for ur coments….as im finished with the most awaited chapter n the whole plot of this ff…few…..i hope u liked it ….

 

 

 



Edited by drfizaahmed - 30 April 2011 at 2:43pm

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Cascade-------------- My Janu

kamal ka update yaar

yaar as i already told u  taht- i knew it was samrat
but pher bhi i hav had a lil hope that may be its not sam
par kya kare- jiska daar tha wohi saach nikla


anyway i feel sad for my Mayur...

they really loved sam a lot, but sam betrayed with them...

GOSH mau dont know abt his betrayal- jab use pata chalega tab kya hoga ..

i just hope nups use sambhal legi
my heart ached when mayur were crying---- it was so touchy yaar

the best part was -  where nups and mayu signed d marriage paper
 now nups is his better half- and no one can deny this fact

it was awesome, mind-blowing update...
just too good
waiting for next part





Edited by -Faria- - 01 May 2011 at 7:51am

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