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MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 (Page 120)

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 9:44am | IP Logged
omg
who z dis man yr!!!!!!!!!

kahi samrat to nahi!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 9:50am | IP Logged
its samrat isnt it?

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 9:53am | IP Logged

Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

yayyy

me firstParty

FIZAAA

i hate uAngry ...main tujhse bilkul baat nahi karungiAngry...aur na comment karungiAngry

aisa koi karta hai kya???? Broken Heartstory ko aise suspense nahi chorte meri jaan.Ermm

jaldi update kar...nahi to main comment nahi karnewaliThumbs Down


ker rahi hoon a saba rker ...mar mat mjhy
Originally posted by -moona-

Fiza Still Suspense, Who is that Man..
and Now Mayank came to know that Nupur Loves him too..
Loved it...bt Reveal the Suspense in the Nexp Part...Evil Smile
 
thnks for liking yaar ...tum sab mjhy aj gatal kerdo gay i know tht
 
Originally posted by achoose

awesome update dear...
so mayank realized that nupur too loved him...
y keeping this suspense yaar? dont kil me with this suspense...
cant wait to read more...
thnks dear for liking
 
 
Originally posted by ridi_onasis

fiza agar tu ek ghante mein update nehi dega na toh tu dusri ff likhne ki kabil nehi rahegi...jaldi update kar...ye toh last update se bhi jaida khatarnak hey...i think i  guess who is the man...lets see...is it right or wrong...bt jaldi update kar...
agai meri jan mein agai...ker rahin hoon update
 
Originally posted by chandu-mayu

ase suspese koi chodta hai kya? I think I know the person . this is samrat right? nooo, samrat villain kyun banaya?     
 
 
Originally posted by ginny09

yeee kaun hai jo mayur ko pareshan kar raha hai 
gosh hope samrat na ho basss !!!!
who the hell is he !
 
Originally posted by mahakmev

osom want to know the man it feels like he is samrat
 
 
Originally posted by jiya_angel

fiza bahut ho gaya suspense
plzz next part mein reveal kar dena
btw... nice part

~jiya~
 
sab abto gi sab ..just 2 mins more
 
Originally posted by kheya-mayur

omg
who z dis man yr!!!!!!!!!

kahi samrat to nahi!!!!!!!!!
 
 
Originally posted by roshneerakhali

its samrat isnt it?
 
uff my readers i know it now too much of suepense but im writng n updating it ..so thts why its cuming in three parts...sorry


Edited by drfizaahmed - 30 April 2011 at 10:10am

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 9:58am | IP Logged
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tumnai bhi kiya suspense rakha hai..
.itna nai hua k thori bhi hint daido...Angry


Edited by drmaha - 30 April 2011 at 11:31am
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Here is 20 b …n 20 c today late night or 2morow I hope I can….

Sorry maat maro mjhy plss…

Hope ur enjoying it

 



Edited by drfizaahmed - 30 April 2011 at 10:11am

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged

CHAPTER 20 B

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Welcum welcum '..i was soo waiting for u dear'uff it has been years yaar'im my self was tired of playing all this'..thnks to u 'now im free to b wht I m

Nupur: tum itny gir jao gay many khabi socha bhi nhi tha,,'..jis insaan ny tumhain ita pyar diya tum us ki jan lay na chatya thy

Man: uff..plss yaar..yeah Hindi film k villain ki tarha mat sunao mjhy''aaur mein us ki jan khbai nhi layna chata tha yeah ilzama hai'.

Nupur: bs aur se saas hi tu liyna baqi reha gaya tha ..us ki jan laynay mein

Man/: thts it 'yes'I didn't wan to make him dead'wht I wanted him to die each n evry min'..n u guys made it possible'lead charcter tu tum dodno thy mereay dramy k'..kitna asan tha tum dodno ko apni isharoo per nachana''.

 

Nupur: he is ur brother God Dam Samrat'.he is your brother'he so love u'..

Samrat: oh pls nupur'..i dnt care if he loved me or not ' I always hated him..always'..evry thing ths was mine'.why he take it always han..if he soo loved me'my mom'.haa'.does she a single min behave liked my mom'.mayank tu un k pyar beta aur mein kiya hoo'

My dad'.he so hates him..insults him'but even than mayank he un k sab kuch'..un k hasal kerny k liyan mein ny un k kam bhi apnya 'phir bhi pyara kaun raha mayank'..

N last but not the least..my love '..his love''tum 'yaad hai..skool mein tumhara ek dost tha'.yaad aya '..glasses lagaya hoa'dara'.dara'.S square whom u use to call'.whn I came in front of u after years..in an urge to take u in my arms n tell u how much I missed u '.tum ny tu  mjhy pechana bhi nhi'..yeah kaun hai mayank'.us waqt us waqt mjhy jitna dard hota tha na'us k samay yeah buhat kam hai'..

 

She was taken a back'.she still can't remember his any skool frnd'..she was shocked to see samart ..her support '.who she loves from depth as a brother'was standing in front of her as the only reason 'she is in so much pain

Nupur: phir humain pyar k ehass day ker itna bara ehassan kyun'.

Samrat: another mistake'..it was in my benfit'..if I wouldn't have made u bth realize ur fellings 'thn now or thn u will get to know'but at tht moment mayank would have been too sure of his feelings'n u ..ur feelings hold so much depth even at tht moment'phir tum dono k koi alag nhi ker pata'pyar ho'ikrar na ho'.per judai ho jay'haayyy'kya dard milta hai'wah

 

''''''''''''''

Uff maynk aj  beach per..yeah kya jo tum poch rahy thy aur jo mein sun rahi thi sab sach tha'..aj jo'.pls mayank saaf saf bolona'.pls'mein suna  chati honn'.kya kal tum kuch kahny waly ho'kya kal kuch hony wala hai'uff yeah raat kab kahtam hogi''.

                       

Maynk mayank mayank'..dil cha raha hai 'zoor se boly k'.no  ..itni jaldi nhi stupid Sharma'bhata na tu tumhain pary ga..on ur knees in fornt of me'..aj asa laga jas humari zindagi koi film ho ..aur mein aur tum us mein bulkul kho gaya honn'.acha  tum dad ko tum manlo gay'.very funny mr.sharam'..pehly mjhy tu mano'..aj mein itni khush hoon itni khus k'..

''''''.

Tum dono k mein ny ek dossoray k lyan itna pagal kerdiya k rah hi na sako ek dosary k bhagir'..mein ny kya kiya'.sirf ehass dilaya'..mayank ki zindagi tu wasay hi tum se shooro hoti tum per kahtam'.ek din us ny tum se bat nhi ki thi aur us k hal yeah tha k sms ker k tum ko batay k sab thik hai''.baqi God was helping me 'adhiraj k is tarha tumhary sath batmeezi kerna'.mayank k possessive hona'.mjhy tu pora plot mil gaya'aur phir us din stage per us ny sab kuch bol diya'.

But thn woh tu tumahin dheer dher confess kerny laga'.tht was not part of the story'.he didn't even told me n planned a date  for u '.tht day he made me worried ..islyan I went to ur house n whn u return I got to know yaha baat date tak agai'.

N thn the best part'he lost the champion ship'.awwhhh'thts was it'.he has to'..us k electrolyte intake ko simple flavored  water se replace kediya'result cramps'..

''''''..

Yeah aj tumahin kya hogaya mayank'..u thought im 'I am the person responsible for making u loss'..i never thought u will regret 'the moments tht r life for me'I was right u nevr felt anything for me'.it was just the simple friendly gesture u did tht day to make me  fel good bs'else u wouldn't have said wht u said 'y mayank 'evry breath of mine pray for ur success n well being 'thn y u thought''

Im sooory ..im soory mayank'I never was able to give u anything except regrets'im sorry 'I made u do tht '.i m sorry

Mayank: nupurrr'.asa kuch nhi tha 'mein tu khud ko ilazam day raha tha'agar tum ny meri baat pori suni hoti'mjhy per atebaar tu kiya hota..mein tumhary sath guzar haoy lamhay regret kero ga'..jo mjhy aj tak saas layny mein maddat kertay hai'woh ehassa woh pal mery sath na hotya tu ..tumahra yeah stupid sharam kab ka maar gaya hota'..yeah kiya kerdiya hum ny 'kya kerdiya '..

 

'''''''..

Samrat: n than'.looha garam tha'tu I did my last thing'..the phone call tht mayank listen to '.i wasn't talking to any 1'haa'im so gud na

Nupur: phone call'.

Samrat: opps'I'll tell u..i pretend to talk to sum1 n said "u never want to mix frndship with love'I MADE u believ its ok..waran tum tu aj bhi us saaza k sath ho'.." u mix relation '.u shud live alone whole life" 'n tht was it'..but even thn he wanted to clearfy it with u'but dumb head is my brother'.he asked in such a way tht..u felt the opposite'.

Nupur close her eyes in pain'.a tear drop from her eyes

Smart" ohhoo..no pls dear he tried to wipe the tear but she shriek his hand of'..mjhy dard hota hai tumhary asshoon se'.nhi ..dont cry ..abhi agay bhi itni lami kahani hai'.wah zayda dard naak hai'.

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Aj sab kuch kahtam hogaya mayank'sab kuch'.aj tumhain meri sari umeedain meray sary khawab kahtam kerdiya'.samrat k de hoi umeedo aur tumhar gesture ny mjhy jaha pochyaya tha'.aj tumhary ek sawal ny mjhy zameen per l ke gira diya'.tu  tum aj bhi is risht k koi aur naam nhi dayna chaty '..

He hited his head with bth his hand

Wht the hell'..  yeah hum ker kya rahy thy..pagal hogay thy'v we turn blind'we knew each other so well'if once just once we would have talked to each other '..we would have been together '..mein kya poch raha tha..tum se kya poch lya'.

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Smart: n thn 'ur belove left'.i asked him to went to London'.until he finds courage to face u'n my loving brother did the honours'.n even I asked him not to tell u before leaving'

 

Nhai us ko mat bato'tu us k samny ja nhi paao gay'woh tumhain rukh lay gi '.aur tum us ko na nhi kah sakty '.yaha raho gay tu dosti bhi nhi bacha pao gay'

Mayannk: per mein ek baar us ko dekhna chata ho smarat'sirf ek nazr'.kafi hai meray liyan'zindagi bhar k lyan'.

Tht night he went to ur house through ur back door '.n went to ur bed room u where sleep

He was siting near her bed 'n was absorbing ech n evry expression in him inside'.he carefull n lightly touhed her hairs n smiled with his tear whn she frown '.n hold his hand 'putting it under her head'.he closed his eyes in pain'.

Mayank: I so wish I can hug u one last time'.i so wish I ca claim u  as mine'.but I don't want to hurt u or hate me for doing all this..im leaving u alone as im selfish '.

He slided his hand from her grip'.n bent don to kiss her'but move back '.he has no such right'with back step he left the room'.n went away for ever''''..

 

N YA VALIYH U WHERE RIGHT DEAR'FROM THE STRT'TU WATER COLER AP K HUA

Precap: life in London, gujans role in all this'mayank's father'n a truth tht smart knew abt nupur'..

 

 



Edited by drfizaahmed - 30 April 2011 at 10:20am

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
part 20
was awesome..
part 20 b
amazing
continue soon..

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 10:32am | IP Logged
goddd ye kya !
damn mujhe lag hi raha tha 
but sam ko neg nahi yaar !
i love sayank bond 
gosh !!!!! :(

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