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Posted: 28 April 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by vampire_girl

hey fiza apiHug
you know how much i was waiting for this partEmbarrassed..mujhe yea FF kitna pasand haiDay Dreaming
par mujhe pata tha tum busy ho isiliye update ke liye disturb nahi kiyaSmiledekho mai kitni smajdar hoonApprove

ok now coming to the update
it was so far the bestest partHugHug
you know i was totally lost whilereading the part...you took me to somewhere elseDay Dreaming
mayank theek hogayaDancingPartyDancing..i am so happyEmbarrassed
aloo paratha part was fab..!!LOL..mayank aur nupur ki nok jhokEmbarrassed..aww how much i miss themUnhappy
aur uo badminton part...uo to bas..!! kuch aur hi thaBlushing..see mai kitna blush kar rahi hoon
just loved that...kitna amazing tha uo walaDay Dreaming
what mayank chala gaya???ShockedOuch...nahiii yea nahi ho skata api..yea kya kar diya tumneAngry..mayank ko uski mom ke paas kyun bheja??..uski mom hi to uo criminal hainOuchi feel so actuallyLOL..acha agar yea theek guess kiya na maine tab mujhe pizza khilana plsROFL..apne haton se bananaEmbarrassed..ab kya hoga??Cry
par loved the whole partHeart
it was an awesomest and wowest partEmbarrassed
acha mai na bohot kuch guess kar rahi hoon..par kuch bolungi nahiROFL..tum phir se datogiUnhappy
now pls jayda intezar mat karwana..aaj kal me hi update kar doROFLROFL
continue soon plish!!Embarrassed

love
tasfia


hello meri jan
lolz thnks for liking it that much..i know i am late but u guessd right i was busy n eevn not in a mood
..aur tu mjhy disturb kab se kerny lagi ...
aaw thnk dear for liing just was making thm cum back to there old lifes
tenis wala kiya tha...hmm...
mein tum sab mein se kis ko pizaa nhi khela rahi...sab wrong hoo...tu wasy hi aja ...apny hatho se bana ker kheloo gi ..pakka
kuch nhi hoga..kitni daafa kaha hai mein hoon na
 
han abhi kerti hoon update ..ehass k tu pata nhi ...meri update chaiyay...
wil update ASAP...thnk dear

kya mai galat hoon??/ShockedShocked
ye kaise ho sakta hai???,,,nahi jhhot mat boloEvil Smile
aur apna update likh ke mera bhi likh do naEmbarrassed.ROFLROFL.mujhe update karne ka dil nahi haiUnhappy
aur pizza nahi khilna to jhoot mat bolo..mai sahi guess karti hon humeshaEvil Smile



Edited by vampire_girl - 28 April 2011 at 12:42pm

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Posted: 28 April 2011 at 3:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by Auroni.92

OMG fizu itna pyaara aur itna exciting part to maine ajtak nahi parha...Big smileBig smile
Im so soo sooo happy that finally mayank recovered.DancingDancing..I ws jumping when the doc said that his body rejected the morphin and so he is perfectly alright...Big smile
And then the hug...awww...they wr sooo happy...Embarrassed
And then my fav part...In the court yard...I can imagine the scene...The two eternal lovers in each other arms.Day DreamingDay Dreaming..Hayeee...Main mar jawa...
Par aab mujhe sachme bohut darr lag raha hain...Kahin tum ekta kapoor ke serial ki tarah kisi ache character ko bura to nahi banane wale..Shocked.Plz plz aisa mat karna...
As now mayank is leaving from nupur's home im literally sad..DisapproveDisapprove.Dnt want to see mayank in that depressed state again...Kuch bhi karke inn dono ko milwa do...
And jaldi jaldi update karo...Cant wait to know the truth...Hug
HELLO
SUCH A HUGE SMILE ON MY FACE AFTER SEEING UR DETAIL COMENT ...AA I SO MISSED IT
HAIN HIANA IM TOO ALSO VERY HAPPY...AB ACH ACHA LIKHO GII...Embarrassed
 
OYE MJHY EKTA KAPOOR MAT BOLL YARR PLZ...MEIN LIKHAN CHOR DO GI SACH MEIN
JUST WAIT A BIT DEAR
LOV YA

Ya so im BACK..Big smileLOL.I too missed giving detail cmnts yaar...
And i know u r not that ekta...Agar tum ekta hoti to main kabka yeh ff padna chod deti...U r the most adorable writer who write amazing ffs on my Mayur..Hug.How cud u be like ekta...
Aur agar tum likhna chod dogi to main tumhe pakake varta bana dungi..Evil Smile.Samjhe kya...LOL
Lov u tooo...
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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by drmaha

Originally posted by valiyah27

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Thankyou Fiza u mentioned me...im honouredSmile...!!!

An Awesomesttt update...the best part is Mayank cured n the culprit is unveiled to Nupur...by the way mera shaq Samrat par kyun ja raha hai...as he was the closest one to him n only the person close to u can harm u the more...i soo hope im not right...the little moments they shared in Bhushan Mansion is worth reading...his effect on her is soo evident...his praise her blush...his mischievious grin her shyness...her support to every weak step of his is just soo adorable...so simple yet intent...Great work FizaClap...i soo waited for these little moments of togetherness...thanks soo much...waise tumhare iss update ke baad ek gaana yaad aaya...parda hai parda...parde ke peche...ab kaun hai parde ke peeche yeh to tum hi bataogi naLOL...jaldi batana...!!!


valiya:
m agree wid u sumwhere i also felt tht it might be samrat as he is very close to him...but it could be his mother as well...
TU DODNO K KOI WATER COLLER NHI MILAY GA GUESS KERNY PER...ARM SE BHATOO...
EK SHOCK MILAY GA
Fiza water cooler ka kya karna n ek update hi dedo isse bada SHOCK aur kya hogaLOLROFL...!!!

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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 6:41pm | IP Logged
ooy ballay ballay shawa shawa!!!!! kya update maree hay fizza! tussi chah gay ho thaa ker kay!!!!! maza keep up the good work girl!!! n i thinkkk k tum nay shilpa aunty ya samraat ko villan banay hoga! well its assumption dekhtay hain haqeqat kya hay? till then love u!

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by komal991

ooy ballay ballay shawa shawa!!!!! kya update maree hay fizza! tussi chah gay ho thaa ker kay!!!!! maza keep up the good work girl!!! n i thinkkk k tum nay shilpa aunty ya samraat ko villan banay hoga! well its assumption dekhtay hain haqeqat kya hay? till then love u!

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thnks dear thnks aloot
i hope u will get ur answer soon
 
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Awesome
 
thnks dear
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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged

Helo guys

As promised im her with u all guys…

Chapter 20 has three parts…one is here….the other today or 2morow…inshallah by Sunday evening or Monday evening ..the whole truyh will be reveal…as it so many things n if I update this whole chapter in a go u will get bored…possibly I'll try n update 20 b n 20 c together ..if I'll write it …..

Here u go…don't get mad….u will get to know the person …tody for sure ….

Rplyd to u all

Love fiza

 



Edited by drfizaahmed - 30 April 2011 at 6:31am

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CHAPTER:20

He said good bye to evry1 nnn hugged her n took blessing from uncle'.she left the place 'saying her cell is rining'he knew she cant see him going away 'so didn't question'..

ND: mayank'yeah tumhary liyan

Mayank: yeah kiya hai'

ND: haqeeqat'reality 'I want u to read it 'but do it whn ur alone'.now its time u get to know many things u don't know'

Mayank: he looked at him in surprise ..bye uncle'.

He went out of the house n turn back to c her room'..he knew she is there'.silently walking away with a smile in sit in the cap'n wave ND''

Mayank: wht this'..the parcel seems like a book or sumthing'.he opened it'ahs no patient to wait til reaching delhi'..a tag make him bit his lip

"mayank not before u reah ur home'settle down ..thn have a look..it with u na"

 

He smiled'how much the bhushans know him'a family tht he owe n a family who owe him'.

She was still there near the window but nt of her room of his room'..clutching the curtains she closed her eyes whn his cap disappear in the way'.story ended agin n agin he left her '..wht ever she was feeling the hopes she had 'agin thy were just a mere dream'.she smile at her self'.but atleas I have him mayb only as frnd'..but thn'.there is a reality he did nt knew'.she isn't just her friend

ND: nupur'he put his hand on her shoulder'.

She turn n look helplessly to her father 'she hugged him n cryed again'.he cant anything just stroked her hairs'.

Nupur: dad I know who has done to him all this'..she broke n spoked in between her sobs..

ND: wht'.whom'.

Wiping her tears 'she put the dvd n played it'..the shock tht appers on his face was more of fear'.

ND: why she

Nupur: she is not the one'..she is doing all this for sum1 else'.

ND: why u didn't told mayank thn

Nupur: woh mar jay ga'..yeah jan ker'.woh jitna pyar in se kerta hai..khud se bhi nhi kerta'..i need to talk to her '..

ND: be very careful'

Nupur: I have nthing to loss'

ND: but I have dear'.he hugeed her '..jao'

--''''''''''

Nupur: chalo aj k movie dekh tay hain..she said rage full in her eyes'

Girl: kaun se '

Nupur: let me play it '.

She played it n the girls was numb her face become paled n she was sweating like hell

Girl: yeah sab mein ny nhi kiya

Nupur: ach 'tu tumhari hum shakaql hai yeah'.sach sach bolo'.warna I'll call plice right now'.thn jis k lyan tu ny yeah sab kiya 'woh bhi nhi bacha pay gat u ko'..

Girl: u know evry thing thn y r u asking''mein majboor thi'..mein kiya kerti '..i was not left with any choice'.

Nupur: us ko bata do k I knew evry thng'.n im cuming to him'mein bhi tu jano 'akhir us ny yeah kiya kyun

''''''.

Girl: unhain sab pata chal gay hai'.she is cuming to u

Man: wht'.laughed../no problem'she cant do anything'.she loves him too much'.she cant disclose it to him'aur tum ek kam bhi dhang se nhi hota tum se'such a useless person ur ''go to hell'.im sending u tickets..get out f the city ..idiot

Girl: pls God help her'.mein sirf itni he madat ker sakti thi'

''''''''''.

Delhi

Maynk reach the huge shrama mansion'it has been years he hasn't been home'.even today he did nt want to'..but have to'he wants to tell sumthng to his mom'take her permission before proceeding to words his biggest desire'..cuming out of the car he found a red carpet'.he laughed

Mayank: maa'.mein kya celebrity hon'yeah zaroor thi' tumhary betay ny kiya higa

Shilpa: han ..tum mera beta kisi celebrity se kam hai kiya'..

She did the prayers..n he bent tn took her blessing n huged her tight'..she strt sobbing

Mayank: maa'.ab tu mein thik hon'tumhary pass hoon'phir kyun roo rahi hai'..he wiped her tears'.bahr he rekho gi kiya'.chalo andar chalein'..he put his hand around her shoulder n went inside'

Evry thing was same'.the grand villa'.the claasy furtuners'the huge pictures of the family'.his father him n samrat 's'.the picture of his father again increase his anger inside'

SA: aj nhi beta'..just for me'.dont do it tday'he himself was very worried for u'.was always there with u in hospital..if u don't trust me ask nupur'ur father use to take each n evry information from her'.

 

He looked at her in surprise'nupur didn't told him'ohh so even she strt hiding things from me'.

Spending sum joyous moment with his mother//lying in her lap n dicusing the past years'he was laughing n enjoying''the warmth n peace tht was so missing in his life has finally came back'thnks to his love , his life'he smiled'tht was not ignored by his mther

SA: oohhooo..yeah koi kis ki soch mein muskara rah hai'hmm

He got embarssed as he was caught

Mayank: mein kaha smile ker raha hoon'mein tu tumhari baatien soch raha tha

SA: sab pata hai mjhy samhjy'..abhi tu maaf ker rahin hoon'subha kan pkro gi tumhary samhj'.mjh se apny dil k baat chup'

He looke at her In surprise n thn lower his head n smiled'.

SA: sh ruffled his hair'ja arm ker'..warna teri dost 'phir se tujhy wapas bola lay gi

Mayank: hitler hai'the bth laughd he left for his room'..

The time he was waiting for s long has arrived 'he rushed to his bag n put out tht parcel '.opeing the inner cover he was surprised

It was the same diary she snatch from his hand tht day'..he open it to find an other surprise with wch a huge smile appears on his face '.

Letters to mayank'

Mayank: oohh'tum ap ny humain letters bhi likhay'he hurdly turn the page to chk the frist leter'it ws from there cologe days '

Hello stupid Sharma,

Ohh tu ap ko laga ta hai mein larki nhi hoon'jab mein tiayr ho ker aao gi na tu hosh ur jay gay'..aur uper se yeah tumhara bhai'tumhain hi tu koi aqal nhi dayta..mjhy gayan bat ta phir ta hai''tumhari dosti doti nhi kuch au rhai'..is ko smjha lo warna is k guoon(murder) hogay meray hatho tu na boll na'..uff yeah tumhara hi phne hai'chain tu hai nh na tum ko'.

Bye

 

He laughed out loud'.uff itna irrite hoi thi woh smart ki baato se 'smart bhi tu na'hum dono k bechay hi parh gaya tha'.par yeah us ki ka ehassan hai 'k aj mein tumhary liyan itna feel kerta hoon'.he turns a the page '.

Celebrations:

By god shrams aj tu ap k hosh hi ur gay'tumhain andaz bhi nhi hai tumahri is nazar ko dkeh ker mjhy kiya mahsoos hoa hai'.tumhar is tarha se mjhy dekhna meray andar kiya kerjata hai '..per us k bad jo hoa'.tumhain as nhi kerna chiay tha'.tumhain andaza bhi kitna dard hota hai tumhain asy dekh ker..mjh kuch nhi hota per'tumhain'stupid idiot'.ullu'..

Asa mat kiya kero buhat dard hota hai'khud ko takleef na doo'aur na hi mjh se narz ho'

 

He looked at this letter with surprise n restlessness'n agin read it'

Jo mein soch raha hoon..does these words means the same'woh mjhy se..tab se'..with his increasing heart beats he turn to read another'.

Asa kyun ker rahy ho'.

Na mjhy se thik se baat kertay hoo'na sath rehaty hoon'.mein ny tu asa kuch ni kiya'smarat ki baato ki saaz mjhy kyun day rahy ho'..mayank mjhy dard hota hai..kya tum dekh nhi sakty'..jasy tumhain hoa tha mjhy adhiraj k sath dekh ker''pls as mat kero'tumhara indifferent behviur meri jan lay lay ga'pls'pls'mjhy kuch nhi chiay ..bus meray sath raho'..chay kisi bhi rishty se'.

 

He closed his eyes..in pain'n rested his head back on the wall'

Nupur..he only managed to speak tht much to himself''.

Mein janti hoon aj jo kuch bhi hoa woh galat tha tumhary liyan'..par meray liyan meri zindagi guzarany k lyan yeah k pal kafi tha'aj tum ny stage per kiya '..aj tum ny na sirf mjhy apan kaha per apna mana sab k samny'..aj tumahri baatein 'tumhara gesture'sab se bhar k tumhari ankein'.sach kaha tum ny'mjhy per sirf tumhar haq hai'.apna haq tu mein wasy hi withdraw ker chuki hoon'.shyad smarat thik kahata hai'.tum bhi mjhy se'..pata nhi'per aj tumhar itny kareeb khud ko '..to loss my self in ur arms'the warmth ur touch gave to me'my hands are stil shivering'.im still blushing'.this a moment in wch I can life'.my whole life 'thnku..thnku ''''.

 

A lone tear droped from his eye'.he moved his hand in his hairs''

He has no words to say'she was in ''''..n 'wht I did'.in an urge not to make her hurt'.i almost detoryed her'..

 

'''''''''''''.

Welcum welcum '..i was soo waitng for u dear'uff it has been years yaar'im my self was tired of playing all this'..thnks to u 'now im free to b wht I m

Nupur: tum itny gir jao gay many khabi socha bhi nhi tha,,'..jis insaan ny tumhain ita pyar diya tum us ki jan lay na chatya thy

Man: uff..plss yaar..yeah Hindi film k villain ki tarha mat sunao mjhy''aaur mein us ki jan khbai nhi layna chata tha yeah ilzama hai'.

Nupur: bs aur se saas hi tu liyna baqi reha gaya tha ..us ki jan laynay mein

Man/: thts it 'yes'I didn't wan to make him dead'wht I wanted him to die each n evry min'..n u guys made it possible'lead charcter tu tum dodno thy mereay dramy k'..kitna asan tha tum dodno ko apni isharoo per nachana''.

 

 



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FIZAAA

i hate uAngry ...main tujhse bilkul baat nahi karungiAngry...aur na comment karungiAngry

aisa koi karta hai kya???? Broken Heartstory ko aise suspense nahi chorte meri jaan.Ermm

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