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MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 (Page 105)

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ginny09

wowwwwwww !!!!
great friendship :D
n now a beautiful relation too :D
thnku
so glad u adore there relation
lov ya

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samiralovemayur

glad shilpa can't take away mayu now
i really loved mayur moments on the window
it was sweet n heartwarming
fabulous update Fiza
thanks for the pm
ya im glad tht u all relifed now
lovely to know u connected with the emotions
lov ya
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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Amazing part fiza

loved it

cont soon
thnks dear
glad u liked it
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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

Amazing update...
Im so glad that now she has full rights on him...
And mayank is also recovering slowly...Im happy shappy...
Now cont soon...
hey dear
 
 
im so glad uliked it
n ur talking out time to read it
though im missing ur elaborated coments
but nver mind
thnku so much

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Originally posted by komal991

 hey fizza dear!
tumhare update bilkul tumhare jaise hay romantic n sweeeeeeet! now nupur has alrights on mayank!! its coool i like the way ur story progress! its intresting keep up the good work girl!

love u
komalHeart
hey dear glad ot see ya after so long
hey thnks dear for liking
thnks for ur wishes
 
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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

thnku so much to all my readersHug for making this possible....we completed 100 pages .....
waooooooo
 
congratulations to all of us....for making this possible Party
 
lova ya soooooo much
 
thnks valiyah ....for remebring it....n marking it first ....thnku soo much ....



Finuuuuuuuuuu my januuuuuuuuuuuu

congrats
yeeeeeeeeeeeeee partyyyyyyyyyyyyy time
mera cake kaha hai???????????
 
 
thnku janu ....
its just because of u all
ur love n support
lov ya
n keep loving me like this
 
 
 
 
Originally posted by valiyah27

cant post long comnt seems probOuch.......!!!
 
 
no prblm dear
Originally posted by valiyah27

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

thnku so much to all my readersHug for making this possible....we completed 100 pages .....
waooooooo
 
congratulations to all of us....for making this possible Party
 
lova ya soooooo much
 
thnks valiyah ....for remebring it....n marking it first ....thnku soo much ....


No need to thnx yaar...............btw Fari is right its party time..............so what say lets celebrate with an awesome updateWink.................!!!
 
acha waht party u want
faru se nhi pocho gi ek os mang lay gi....
yaar i'll ive u an update cant say an awesum neOuch
 
 
Originally posted by DhanakZ

Congrates
u deserve it
Clap
thnks dear
 
thnks a lootEmbarrassed
 
Originally posted by samiralovemayur

congratulations Fiza Party
thnks dear
all beacuse of u all
 
 
Originally posted by drmaha

Originally posted by valiyah27

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

thnku so much to all my readersHug for making this possible....we completed 100 pages .....
waooooooo
 
congratulations to all of us....for making this possible Party
 
lova ya soooooo much
 
thnks valiyah ....for remebring it....n marking it first ....thnku soo much ....


No need to thnx yaar...............btw Fari is right its party time..............so what say lets celebrate with an awesome updateWink.................!!!


Congras dearest for completing the 100pgs.........HugHug

tum tu office mai do treat........mai tu nai chorni wali.........WinkParty

thnks jani
koi party nhi mil rahi office mein


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Hello guys

Lovely to c ur comments at previous post 'really u guys honored me'tht I have completed 100 pges tht I never thought

This is almost a filler 'as I want to introduce a new charctr tht will help in certain part''dnt worry im nt gonna strtch this story 'hopefull in next update he'll b back to home'..

Rply to u all

Hope u feel like reading this too

Lov ya loads

Fiza

 



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CHAPTER 17

 

CHAPTER;18                                                      

Nupur: kaha jana hai ap ko'

Mayank: bs asy hi'.kahin bhi..

Nupur: kahin bhi kaha

Mayank': nupur..

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: tum yaha '.hospital mein kya ker rhi hoo

Nupur:wah..how mean'.im here for u n u r saying ths

Mayank: uffu stupid'.i mean the first day 'wht u where doing here

Nupur: batao gi waqt anay per

Mayank: who kab aay ga'.mjhy abhi batao.

Nupur: utho'

Mayak: pehly saawal k jawab do'..

Nupur: I'll 'pehlay chalo tu

Mayank: ur always stubborn '.never ans my question

Nupur: n u alwys estimate me wrong 'if u will cum with u'll get ur answer

Mayank: do u really feel I haven't estimate u right'..he questioned with guilt'

Nupur: haan'.n she smiled ..nhi baba 'acha ab chalo

Mamaynk: u feel like tht 'he pouted ..

Nupur: acha..thn for wht u think u have estimated me wrong '.bolo'.with evry question n feeling in her heart she looked at him to make him scared n pained'.

Mayank: abt ur

Smarat: hello guys'.

There questioning eye session was disturbed by smarat voice'he too found himself intruder

Samrat: kya mein galat time per agaya '.

Nupur: nhi'.

Smart: encircling his arms'.so bhai n bhai k frnd'how r u '

Mayank: fine'..tu suna 'yaha kya ker raha hai

Smart: kyun ab kya bhai k pass a bhi nhi sakta had hai yaar''

Bth of thm smile

Mayank: seedha seedha line per aa'..subha hi aay that u '

Nupur: hmm aur kuch kehna bhi tha ap ko

Smarat: ap logo ko kisi se milwana hai''

Nupur: she puted her hand on his shoulder'.kisi se 'hmmm'teasingly

She raise her eyebrow in questions '.

Samrat: ek min'..gunjan'

A girl in her  25, very modern ..high figh'.typical samrat type

Samrat: yeah hai gunjan

Mayank; hey gunjan how ru 'india mein kasay

Gunjan: hai bhaiya 'ap kasay hain

Mayank: much better

Nupur: hello koi mjhy bhi batay ga '.mein bhi hoon yaha

Gunjan: ur nupur '..right she almost shouted

Nupur: ya'but how cum u know

Gujan: as u r soo popular in Sharams'I tell u

Nupur: ohhh'..with wht reference

Gunjan: u n bhai

Samrat: r the bst of frnds na '..he control her tongue as she was about to say sumthing else

Mayank: so ru done with ur internship

Gujna: ya bhai'I was doing my intership at city hospitals pharmacy 'done with it'socha apni country aker kuch kero..

Nupur: soo ru pharmacist'

Gujna: yes iam '

Nupur: so why don't u help us at our pharmacy 'see how can we improve it ..pls

Gujan: di pls don't say pls''I'll love too'n I hope I can call u di

Nupur: ofcource u can'.

Samrat: come on I'll show u ur new work place'..

Gujna: bye cya'

Mayank/nupur: bye

Nupur; yeah itni pyari larki is ko kaha se mil gai

Mayank: wht do u mean'my bro is gem at heart 'samhji

Nupur: ya ya'I so knew sharmss'.n wht u use to tell her abt me haan''.

Mayank: I told her tht india mein ek larki hai jo thori pagal hai'.full on masti hai'.aur full of life hai''yeah sab nhi kaha mein nay 'ahan yeah zarror kaha tha k k agar badariya ko dekhna ho jo baatein kerti hoo non stop'.u must cum to india

Nupur: acha 'us ny stupid shram ko dekh ker yeah nhi kaha 'ek Bandar tu meray samany hai '

Mayank: ms nupur mjhy bahar jana hai'if u have forgotten u promised me'.

Nupur: I never forgot wht I promise'.samjhy

Mayank: y ur mocking at me

Nupur: I am not '.chalo..ab ..is se pehly mera mood change hojay'

Mayank: im not going on tht'I can walk by my self samji..pointing toward wheel chair

Nupur: pakka..u 'll be able to'.but hum zayada door nhi jarahy bs yahin tak..i wanan show u sumthing,,,,

Mayank: oki'dispointly '.

----------------------

 

Mayank: MUKTI '..he didn't shouted but whispered in pain n joy '

How much he have dreamed n wishe to see mukti 'his only dream 'standing in front of him tall n alive''he was feeling like..screming in joy '..with tears welling up in his eyes '.he was siting right in front of his mothers wish 'which she asked him to fulllfil'n wch he was nt able to'..

Sliding her hand on his ..she held it tight'capturing the space between her fingers 'as if tht was perfect for his accommodation..he sequence her hand tight

Mayank: I even was'nt able to do this'..wht I am nupur'where I stand 'nowhere'I am not more than losser'.so why the hell u r with me'

Nupur; to gave u a tight slap'.right on ur face'u know wht..u always proved me tht I named u right'.stupid Sharma'.

Mayank: he laughed pitfully '..i so wanna do this'

Nupur: ya so wanna do this'even for this '.for peoples I know means a lot ..but who aren't alive'.u made others alone'left everything '.for just a mere reason '

Mayank: im sorry'

Nupur: wh for exactly'.wht exactly ur sorry for '.leaving everything n running away from god knows wht

Mayank: ahh'.i wish apart from God ..any1 would have know'.how u made this possible

Nupur: I didn't u did tht

Mayank: stop joking around me trying to make me a hero'.tht I m not nupur

Nupur: u know wht if once'if just once u have trusted ur self na'.thn u would have know wht u can'this Mukti the state of the art hospital has been financed by mayank sharam..mr'

Mayank: stoped nupur'..if u don't want me to tell truth 'forget it

Nupur: u will get to know the truth if u will wait to listen'do u remember u have bought sum shares from the first price money of tensis championship'.

Mayank: tht can made this'it was of few lakhs..

Nupur: yes'whn thy get to a good price I sold them'thnk GOD'..atleast sumwhere u did right'.those shares where under my pozation'..i sold thm n bought sum more'from tht '.we get tht amout tht we can bought a land here'..thn I applied for laon tht got approved'as god was helping '.n than the construction of OPD (out pateient area) strted n it strted functioning'..from tht earing slowly within 2 years mukti as a whole came in to being'..so who is the owner..ahh''

He was looking at her with lost, numbed n surprise'.he was just string at her during her whole talks'..wht I have with me'.a person tht made my dream her dream'.my life her life'

He hugged her tight'.hiding his face in her'..

Mayank: why u did ths'.why u made my responsibility urs'..why nupur..why u always need to do this'.

Nupur: she wished she can tell him wht she feels'.but his expressions n his gestures are leaving her speechless'she can feel her shoulder a bt mosit'.

He broke apart n cupped her face..

Mayank: can u promise me one thing'u'll nevr leave no matter how much I try..promise me pls'

Nupur: her tears finally made there way out'n helplessly she said'..I never left u maynk ..i nevr will 'her hand where holding his hand on her cheeks'.

She was sobbing ''.she rested her head on his shoulder'

Nupur: u left me'everything'she broke n lokked at him'.u u where the person who left me'.u never evr thought once abt me'

Mayank: I am sorry'.i am really sorry '..his head was lowered ''but I have no choice

Nupur: n thn wht did to urself hann'..tell'me'kis kis cheez k lyan maafi mango gay..khus se kasy mango gay'.tum ny kiya kerdiya

wht ..she hited him'.

Mayank: n wht r u ding to me right now'.beating me haan

Nupur: aur marro gi '.agar ab asi koi harqat ki samjhy

He grap her hand 'n hold it near himself

Mayank: nhi kero ga '..i have turned too selfish to leave u'he looked at her with utmost love'.the proximity was killing her'.was dissolving her boundaries'.she buried herself in his arms'closinh her eyes''leaving her apprehensions behind'..



Edited by drfizaahmed - 27 April 2011 at 10:26am

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