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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

rofl
us ny coment kiya kafi nhi ha kiya

ss tu us ny read bhi nhi kiya😭😭

mein itni bori hoon

now let me rply her

m really very sorry sisters😭

i am really very busy ths days.........as my working days r going more hectic day by day

sorry Fiza, tu buri nahi hai............buri to main hun, main hi time pe comment nahi kar pati ......m really very sorry😭😭

bt i read ur ss..........n commented tooo........i thot u overlooked.

nw m going to read ur next update.

@ fari : i didnt aspect this from u..........as u knw very well, hw is my days nw! my mother is seriously ill in home n here i am tied with my works.

anywz Fiza, m going to read ur update, then comment.

ab thik hai??????????

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516247

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Posted: 13 years ago

it was wonderful update again.👏

nw m going to read mayur present, which is more interesting than thier past.😃

bt still u didnt show, what happened in mayank's past.

n i thot, it was d right way to glued ur readers with ur ff.⭐️

applause gal👏👏

very nicely written.👏

nw m realized, what she felt after saw him at mukti!

it was miserable.😭

i love d scene, when mayank gets attack............it was beautifully written.⭐️

i could imagine his situation.⭐️

thats called a gud writer😃

nups-father convo was grt.😊

her father is a gem............hw easily he realized nups dried tears..........n hw sweely he concoled her.😃

mayu-nups father scene was also gud.😊

mayank realized his mistake...........its a gud sign😊.

bt u gv me d shock😲

mayank himself didnt knw anything abt d drugs?????????😲

then how he was effected?????😲

someone slow poisoned him????????😲

who was he/she?????😲

bt most important q is what was the motive?????😲

mayank was so vulnerable...........he totally lost his confidence............n himself too😭

cant see mayank like that😭

it was so painful to see him like this😭

ok............nw enof 🤢

nw m stop.

i knw, m talking toooo much.........asking toooooo many q's!!!!🤢

update soon,😊

thanks for the pm.😊

plz dnt mind if i'll reply late.

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bhargavi

@gopi06

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

nice updt
thanks for the pm

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

back to present 😃

awesome update Fiza!

poor Mayank 😭

continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

So sorry yaar for d late comments

d update was really gud

I actually thought he was a mental patient

bUt drugs?strange!!!

Mayur scene was awesum

really awesum

cont soon

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-
Editttttttttttttttttttttttt

Hi Fizaaaaaaaaaaaaa

By GOD finally u updated mayors present part

Yeeeeeeee now going to get present situation of Mayur.

Wow finuuuuuuuuuuuu wht a beautiful update dear

Amazinggggggggggggg

Too good

Awesome

Hey fiza

I thought that Mayank is a mental patient''

But now I have found he is not mental patient- he is only drug addicted

But how he doesn't know abt it???? Strange!!!!!!!!!!!

Who gave him drug and how??

Its totally mysterious'''''..

I loved mayur part- awwwwwwww they missed each other loads

They suffered a lot W*H each other presence

I loved Nupur- the way she was trying to cure mayu is really very nice'..

Mayu and nups dad convo was very touching

I loved their relation'

And the last part was emotional too

Ahhhhhh my nups was crying

Hope everything will be fine soon

Wanna c them together

yupi

yes after so long i m back to present

thnks jani for loving it

ur words matter to me soo much

tu na

kya present k second chapt bhool gai us mein hi tha k he is a drug addict

hmm

i told u there loads more strangest things....one of wch is cuming in next part

thy r together.....dont u think sooo

thnks for liking it dear

will update soon

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis
if mayank didn't take the drugs then how could doc find the drugs in his blood? i'm so confused........but i hope nups will make everything all right.......

lolz

my ridi is confused

n im planning to make u more confuse......

n thn u all r gona hit ur head.....😆😆

joking ....its a mystry...wch will b resolve very soon

nups will make him cum back

dont worry

PS loved ur dp

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti
@Fiza

OMGGG..beautiful update

i loved every bit of it

do continue sis....

hey maria

thnks aloot dear

glad u liked it

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chandu-mayu
mindblowing. thanx for pm me

thnks a loot

glad u liked it

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DhanakZ
Wao that was great update
So the present come again

but What Mayuank dont Know what happened to him

Thats strange

Waiting for next Part

Thanks for Pm

cont soon

yes the present is presented😆

hey thnks dear for liking it

hm tht is ...mayank mystry is strange..n im so glad tht u all r finding it strange

thnks aloot

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