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MayUr OS Kuch Baatein Ankahee

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 8:19am | IP Logged

MayUr OS

 

Kuch Baatein Ankahee

 

Both of them slept facing the opposite directions'.Their backs slightly touching each other. Both of them were feeling low'no they had no fight, no tiring day or nothing as such in particular today it was just another day for both of them but the reason was the day to come. Yes, Tomorrow was something special but they didn't know whether to be happy or be sad. Both of them chose not to speak about it like they did every year since past 5 years.

 

Both of them lying on their bed wide awake, lost in their thoughts, and both knew each other's condition but it was fear of hurting the other that they avoided talking on this particular thing since last five years.

 

The other day had begun. Both of them had no sleep last night.

She stood and went to fresh up. He was also awake but as he sensed her move he pretended to be asleep. As she made her way to washroom he checked her pillow and this year again he found it to be wet. He knew that she was shedding silent tears whole night and her wet pillow just confirmed this. But he was helpless. He could do nothing about it and this was the reason he was angry with himself that why was he so helpless.

 

She came out of washroom. She did not want him to notice that she is depressed. So she was trying to act as normal as possible. He came near her and wished hed her Good morning'

 

M: Good Morning meri Jhansi ki Rani (giving a quick peck on her cheek as everyday)

 

N: Good Morning Patidev. Giving him a tight hug.

He responded back with equal love wanting to wash away all her pains.

 

N: (Getting apart) So aaj ka kya plan hai. Please ab yeh mat kehna ki Sunday ko bhi tumhe office jaana hai.

 

M: Sorry Jaan, Lekin please mujhe bas aadhe din ka kaam hai phir shaam ka pakka kuch plan banate hain..Promise. Please understand. Sincerely asking her permission.

 

N: (Being very unusual and not stretching it too far) Theek hai lekin tumhe sirf aadhe din ki ijazay milti hai. (And Dramatically) Agar usse zyaada waqt lagaya toh phir yeh jhansi ki rani dekho kya haal karti hai tumhaara.

 

M: (Knew that she is acting to be normal. So tried to cheer her up.)

Aapka hokum sar aakhon par. Waise bhi yeh ghulam rani ke aadesh ki tauheen nahi kar sakta varna mera toh katel-e-aam ho jaayega

 

N: Smiling genuinely at his gesture. Mayank tum bhi naa. Ab jaldi se tayaar hoke aa jao mein tumhare favourite aaloo ke parathe banati hoon.

 

M: Nahi aaj aaloo ke nahi gobi parathe khane ka man kar raha hain kya mil sakte hain.

 

N: Kyun nahi.( She knew the reason behind his demand). Jo mere patidev chahe.

 

M: Thank U. Waise gunjan ka phone aaya tha who todhi der mein aa rahi hain.

 

N: Theek hai. Chalo muhje company toh mil jaayegi. Chalo ab jaldi se ready ho jaao.

 

Mayank had his breakfast and left for his work. While Gunjan arrived in a while. Both the sisters were having their usual talks when nupur asked her'

 

N: Gunjan tune aaj bauji ko phone toh kiya tha naa?

 

G: (Trying to avoid this thing) Di waise aaj aapne jiju ko kaam pe jaane ki permission kaise de di. Itni meherbani kaise?

 

N: Tum dono ko kya mein Bachchi lagti hoon. Usse yeh nahi pata ki pichle 5 saal se aaj ke din woh kaunsa kaam karne jaata hain yeh mujhe pata hai aur mujhe yeh bhi pakka yakin hai ki tujhe usine phone karke mere paas aane ke liye kaha hain. So please stop fooling me and answer my question Bauji se baat huyi?

 

G: (Feeling helpless and being trapped) Haan unhain Happy Birthday wish Karne ke liye phone kiya tha.

 

N: Kaise hain woh? Unki tabiyat toh theek hain naa? Tune unse puchcha ki apni sehat ka khayal rakhte hain ki nahi, apni dawaiyaan time se lete hain ki nahi?

 

G: Bas di. Aaram se. Haan woh bilkul theek hain. Bui se bhi baat huyi thi aur unhone bataya ki unki sehat theek hain aur dawaiyaan bhi time se lete hain.

 

N: (With teary eyes) That's great. Achcha yeh bata tujhe is saal tofhe mein kya mila?

 

G: Pata nahi di. Maine Bauji se puchcha toh kehte hain ki surprise hain jab mein morena jaaungi tab mujhe milega.

 

N: Tears started rolling down her cheeks. Yaad hain gunjan kis tarah hum har saal hum isi din ka wait karte the. Kaise bauji ko kaun pehle wish karega iski shart lagate the aur tu hamesha haar jaati thi. Kaise unka kamra sajate the. Kaise unki gifts ka wait karte the. Aur yaad hain Kaise... unable to speak further as she started crying very badly.

 

G: Hugging her tightly. Yaad hain di sab yaad hain. Aura b har saal mein yehi pray karti hoon ki aap phir se woh shart jeet jaaye. Phir se woh purane din, purani khusiyaan laut aaye. Please di royie mat. Sab theek ho jayega.

 

N: (Breaking apart, Wiping her tears and composing herself) Ab toh maine ye  ummeed chod di hai. Bas tujhse unki khariyat ka pata chal jaata hain toh ussise apne dil ki tasalli kar leti hu. But kya kabhi inn 5 saalon mein unhone ek baar bhi mere baare mein tujhse nahi puchcha. Kabhi unhein meri yaad nahi aati. Itni badi kaunsi galti kardi maine Gunjan?

 

G: (She knew her di's pain but she also could do nothing to reduce that. She had tried convincing her father n number of times but he was and is being too stubborn.) Aisa kuch nahi hain di. Dekhna ek na ek din unhein apne iss faisle pe bahut pachtava hoga.

 

N: Chal chod yeh sab. Aur bata Gobi parathe khayegi? Mayank ki farmaish par bane hain

 

G : Lekin Mayank ko toh Aaloo ke'

 

N : Janti hoon par gobi ke parathe Bauji ke favourite hain naa.Isi liye mujhse banvaye. Usse lagta hain main nahi janti ki woh bhi ye din kabhi nahi bhoolta aur hamesha mujhse bauji ki manpasand cheezein banvaata hai. Ab dekhna shaam ko yaa toh khud unki manpasand cheezein banaega yaa toh phir mujhe kisi Punjabi Restaurant mein le jaayega. Bauji ka Birthday woh har saal kisi na kisi tarah se celebrate karta hain but usse lagta hain ki mujhe ye baat pata nahi hain.

 

G : Sachchi ? Aur haan aap kuch keh rahi thi naa ki jiju aaj office nahi balki kahin aur gaye hain Matlab ?

 

N : tujhe pata hain naa ki bauji har saal morena mein jo anath aashram hain waha apne janam din par kuch waqt un bachcho ke saath bitate the toh yeh baat mayank ko ek din aise hi baaton baaton mein pata chali toh ab har saal yahan ke anath aashram mein kuch amount donate karta hain aur thoda time un bachchon ke saath spend karta hai. Woh toh ek baar aashram ka peon donation ki receipt dene ghar aa gaya tha toh mujhe pata chala.

Main janti hoon ki woh yeh sab karta hain kyunki bhale hi bauji usse apna damad naa mane lekin mayank sachche dil se unhein apna pitah manta hai Aur bas ek bete ka farz nibha raha hain aur agar woh yeh baat jatana nahi chahta toh naa sahi lekin usse iske liye Thanks kehkar main uske gesture ki, Uske feelings ki insult nahi karna chahti. Kuch baatein agar ankahee rahe toh zyaada behtar hota hain Issliye maine bhi kabhi usse iss baare mein nahi puchcha.

 

G : She had tears in her eyes and said to herself. Kaash Bauji yeh sab dekh paaye aur samjhe.

 

N: Chal ab bahut ho gayi yeh emotional baatein aur haan mayank ko

 

G: (Before nupur could complete her sentence) Nahi bataungi. Theek hain.

 

N: Bilkul theek.

 

Mayank returned home by the afternoon and the trio was having their usual chats.

 

M: So saali sahiba aaj meri kya kya complains aayi hain aapki di ki taraf se.

 

G: Aapka zulm yeh hain ki aap Sundays ko bhi meri di ko akela chod kar kaam pe jaate hain.

 

M: (Holding his ears and looking at both of them turn by turn) Sorry.. Sorry.. lekin sach mein bahut important kaam tha isliye.

 

G: Both sisters looked at each other and give "we know it" look to each other and gunjan said theek hain aapko maaf kiya.

She stood in order to take their leave and said achcha ab main chalti hoon main aap dono ka Sunday kharab nahi karna chahti

 

N: Kya gunjan tu bhi' Aaj ab tu dinner karke hi jaana

 

M: haan haan Gunjan. Bahut time ho gaya hain humein saath mein iss tarah time spend kiye. Aur Aaj ka special dinner chef mayank ke haaton ka. Toh kaisa laga idea?

 

G: Great aur mein chef mayank ki assistant. What say? And both mayank and gunjan hi fived each other.

 

N: So jeeja saali ne plan bana liya ek hone ka. Ab mayank ko toh mil gaya mauka meri behen ko mere khilaaaf bhadkane ka. Haina?

 

M: Aur nahi toh kya? Tumne toh apni complains pesh kardi ab meri baari hain. Ab Gunjan meri complains sunegi

 

N : Haan Haan tum jeeja saali milegi jitni meri khilaaf planning karni hain karlo main bhi apne best friend ko phone karke bulati hoon. Phir dekhte hain.

 

G: Gunjan was watching them and was so much in awe of their cute nok-zhok. But she decided to cut them in between and said theek hain tum jaake phone karo aur hum khana banate hain.

 

In the kitchen'

 

M: gunjan, Thank U. Aaj ka din nupur ke saath rehne ke liye. Mujhe sach mein bahut important kaam tha. Aur aaj ke din main nahi chahta tha ki woh akeli rahe. Usse lagta hain ki main nahi janta ki woh saari raat soyi nahi aur ro rahi thi. Mujhe yeh bhi pata hain ki jab bhi usse bauji ki yaad aati hain woh raat ko mere sone ke baad balcony mein roti rehti hain. Usne apne pillow ke neeche bauji ki tasveer bhi rakhi hain. Lekin main usse kabhi nahi puchchta kyunki agar usko pata chal gaya ki main yeh sab jaanta hoon toh apna dard andar hi andar dabaayein rakhegi aur usse aur takleef hogi. Toh achcha hai ki ro kar woh apna kuch dard toh halka kar leti hai. Isliye main manta hoon ki kuch baatein agar ankahee rahen toh zyaada behtar hota hain.

 

G: She was completely speechless. She was unable to understand that how were they both able to understand their silence so perfectly. She could just wish that her Bauji could see their love for him and for each other. She was lost in her thoughts wen mayank said..

M: Gunjan, please nupur ko yeh mat batana ke maine hi tumhe phone karke bulaaya tha. Please..
 
G: Nahi batungi jiju...Ab apne dishes pe dhyaan de please varne khaana jhal jaayega aur aapki mallika naaraz ho jaayegi
 
M: Woh risk main nahi le sakta
And both started laughing.  

Samrat also arrived and they had their Dinner. And as nupur had told gunjan, mayank had cook her bauji's favourite receipies.

 

Later that night, in their bedroom..

 

Her head was on his arm and he was gently stoking her hair. And as usual she was loving this.

 

N: Mayank..

 

M: Hmmmm

 

N: I love you

 

M: He was little taken aback with this coming so unexpected but he responded I love you too and claimed her lips. Both conveying each other all the love they had for each other.

 

Both thought "Hamare beech jo baatein ankahee hain who agar ankahee hi rahen toh zyaada behtar hain."

 

 

I Know its too long and boring But still waiting for ur comments.

Criticism is welcome but please do share your views.

 

Sorry for the mistakes. I Have posted this in hurry.
-Prachi

Edited by preitygal99 - 08 January 2011 at 9:06am

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very nice os

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It ws nice and emotional...Do write more...
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amazing OS prachi...loved it lots......do write more.........

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