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dmg_roks_antara Goldie

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged
awesome part cont soon n plzz pm me on d next prt

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natashu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged


Chapter 6
I thought Abhay would be the one doing the 'saving' bit. Never mind.
...Sasha comes to the rescue!LOL
I dunno why, but I'm liking her! She's got this whole thing about her, not exactly evil.
So, I totally understand why Piya felt the way she did; safe.
"Piya!" Abhay exclaimed, the thirst which had brought him here being replaced by concern. His fangs disappeared, and his eyes turned to their moonlight blue shade.
. . .You gotta love Abhay! This guy completely overrides his vampire appetite for what lays in front of him - his Piya! Goes to show how powerful our feelings can be.

'Stupid Saas-Bahu dramas!' he thought 'Why do women like watching these stuff anyway? Weird!'

. . .And, you also gotta love Aarav! The dude's hilarious!ROFL
He cracks me up, everytime! I love the comic relief his character provides =D
All in all, awesome stuff! (:
Chapter 7
Aarav's a cutie!<3
I'm lOving thus guy =D
I understand him, though.
Although he loves to argue w/ Abhay, I sense that Aarav wouldn't step over the line, he actually does listen to him. Like it's obvious, both would look death in the face for the other. Complicated relationship, yes! But both care for each other, nonetheless.
And, I think there's a lot that both share in common; both lost a loved one.
Now, about Aarav-Piya. I'm liking their interaction. I had expected it, what with Aarav 'yuck'-ing away at Abhay-Piya. LMAO.
And, finally. Our AbhIya have a conversation. YAY!LOLEmbarrassed
I could go on and on. But, I really really liked it. Loved it, to be honest! (:
Abhay fighting to control his feelings. Piya questioning her feelings. And, Abhay almost, almost touched on the subject. He did mention vampires. Which, according to me was like, huge!
And, that cinderalla thing was cute! <3 
"What if you don't find the prince? What if you end up finding the bad guy?" Abhay asked, fingering the bed sheet "What would you do then?"

"Then I would love him, just the way he is" Piya said fiercely.

. . .I want to give both of them a big, fat hug! Abhay's honesty just gets to me... a sucker-punch in the gut for him, when Piya replies with the same level of sincerity, only more intense!
Ooo and you almost had them kiss. Almost. Sigh. LOL
It's totally cool though. I don't even think it was needed. Although physical intimacy is definitely a part of any relationship, it shouldn't be a pre-requisite to loving someone.
As for that lady in the end, I knew it was Trishna/Sasha! HA!LOL
Once again, you've done an amazing job! Hug

Edited by natashu - 17 January 2011 at 5:03pm

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-Destiny- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
"Thank you!" Piya said happily as she sat on the bed next to Abhay."Its like we ate having a night out or something. Exciting!"
"I know! Now we can paint each other's fingernails pink, drool over Hrithik's hot bod, Bitch about people, and talk about boys! Yay! How exciting!" Aarav said clapping his hands together in sarcastic excitement.
"Are you always this irritating?" Piya snapped.
"Are you always this rude?" Aarav snapped back.
"I hate you" Piya said, glaring at Aarav.
"Aww…You do? " Aarav said in fake sweetness, with a hand over his heart "I love you too! Lets get married! Bhag ke shaadi karen?".

Lmao.This para cracked me up. So typically Aarav ROFL

he may look a lil mean but he's sure a sweetypie.

Baba abhay chand is awesome.

Sasha ki ghar me entry yayyyyyy. Can't wait to see piya react to her presence


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sushups IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
nice one

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..Mari.. Senior Member

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 2:54pm | IP Logged
Hey...just catched up with some partsThumbs UpClap....on the last one:
OMG....i loved the Aarav-Piya nok jok...superb....can totally imagine Piya in that convo,lol...wish we will get an arnav in the show too,lol
the Abhay/Piya cutielicious:)....wish Abhay will become this lively in a convo sometime soon in the show too:)...i guess our Piya will get him there:)
bottom line...the Aarav-Piya-Abhay trio rocked!.....this Sasha aspect is really intresting too...hope too read more soon:)

Edited by ..Mari.. - 16 January 2011 at 4:52pm

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sups2222 Goldie

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
u should nev put ur fingers croosed dear........i really njy reading ff n fall in love wid aarav more n such a cutipie n romantic abhiya secen yaar........loved it totally fantablulous.....n soo aarav's mysteruious waoman has cujm though.......waiting eagerly for ur mnext update......n best luick for ur xams....n yup i was acytive in dmg forum till yuna went overboard loved yuna n kash.........update soon.

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arhi-raizada Goldie

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 6:04am | IP Logged
i loved the chap keep updating me please

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0o.Leah.o0 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 6:07am | IP Logged
@ Trishap - Thank you!!Big smile
@ madmaxine - Coming from an author whose OS's I greatly admire, thats a great compliment. Thank you!
@ Antara - Thank you!
@ Tashu - Edit your post soon!!
@ Lekha - Thank you so much jaani! I am glad I could make you laugh. I love Aarav too!Wink
@sushups - Thank you!
@ Mari - You think so? Thank you! I am really glad you like my FF!
@ Sups - Yeah. I think I remember seeing you in the YuNa Island! I love YuNa too ! Thank you for your wonderful comment !
@ - Thank you!Big smile

Edited by 0o.Leah.o0 - 17 January 2011 at 6:17am

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