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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by milee1014

Suchi, you truly are a magician. I can't thankyou enough for this amazing retreat. I like the way you described Friendship and Love beautiful.
Actually I think you should write a book, we will all help you with proof reading and editing and if you want some suggestions too. YOu are simply amazing Suchi, think about it. If not a complete novel atleast short story you will do justice to every character you create. Don't think I am just praising you for the sake of it, these words are from my heart and you deserve it.


Yeah : ) thanks,
Ok may be I will start a new FF but you know it requires a lot of time and honestly these scenes I do not look at them twice and when i do I find like million grammar errors and I go like wow !!! thats embarrassing lol

But I do research some times about few things before i write like the resort in this story is real and it exists : ) in manali.

I will practice with nivren : ) and may be just continue until I can find some time on my hands.

M

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Suchi-NivReniac

Originally posted by milee1014

Suchi, you truly are a magician. I can't thankyou enough for this amazing retreat. I like the way you described Friendship and Love beautiful.
Actually I think you should write a book, we will all help you with proof reading and editing and if you want some suggestions too. YOu are simply amazing Suchi, think about it. If not a complete novel atleast short story you will do justice to every character you create. Don't think I am just praising you for the sake of it, these words are from my heart and you deserve it.


Yeah : ) thanks,
Ok may be I will start a new FF but you know it requires a lot of time and honestly these scenes I do not look at them twice and when i do I find like million grammar errors and I go like wow !!! thats embarrassing lol

But I do research some times about few things before i write like the resort in this story is real and it exists : ) in manali.

I will practice with nivren : ) and may be just continue until I can find some time on my hands.

M
No dear we have to thanks to you. Actually I really thought of writing about you researching but something or the other I forgot. But being a writer research is a must right? Don't you worry about grammar errors we all are friends and we can understand typo errors and all.
Yes, practice with NivRen and then you can create your own characters and write up a short story or a novel.
 
 
Special thanks to you from myside for taking me back in time. Really appreciate it. Special thanks to your kids who are so good that you have time to write. Hugs to your little ones from me.

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:39pm | IP Logged
Wow! As always loved your Weekend Retreat.

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
You are truly amazing!! Suchi your style of writing is magnificant! And the way you describe a character or scene feels as if I am present and can see it all happening. You have created a new NIVREN world for all of us. Thank you so much, Im always looking forward to your updates. Sometimes i visit the forum 10 times a day to see if you've updated the retreat lol. But i understand the amount of time that goes into writing each scene. THANK YOU, YOUR AMAZING!!!!Smile

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
Suchi !!!! I woke up so early in the morn because even in my dreams I was refreshing the IF page for the next scene !! lolzzzzzzzzzz !!! Just woke up and the first thing I did was read your last scene !! Haiii it was worth dreaming about !!! LOL I loved this scene so much for so many reasons ! I laughed out when Divya goes like Sid told me the history of this place !!! LOL I was like, that is so like Sid !! And Viren's reaction was so expected, gosh he really needs to sit his bro down and teach Sid how to romance his wife !! LOL U know why I used to love Bidaai so much ? Everyone used to watch it for one jodi or other, but I used to love the foursome scenes more then any Jodi scenes !! And that is another reason why I love your retreat so much, because I get to read the relationship. the masti and teasing between the four which we never get to see in the show !! So thank you soooo much for that !! *hugs*

And NivRen, awwww loved how Nivi expected Viren to romance her again but our Viren Sood always does the exact opposite !!! LOL And the part about the lip glass, I again was blushing like crazy !! But it was hell cute, because it is just like Viren to remind Nivi about the kiss without doing or saying anything directly !!! EmbarrassedLOL Thank you sooooooooo much !! U truly made our weekend with your retreat sweetie !!! *hugs*

I have to agree with Milee, I would also love if you wrote a book or even a short story !! Start with an FF about NivRen like Milee suggested and then write something of your own later !!! We will help you in whatever way we can !! *hugs*

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
wrong post Embarrassed


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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
amazing suchi loved it cont soon

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
You are an AWESOME writer...Tongue

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