Weekend Retreat 7 Scene 8 Page 9 Road Trip Cont2 - Page 8

Superduper hit blockbuster movie loved it very-very much you are too good Suchi Before I could comment you posted 8th scene too it is more mindblowing out of world loved it too do continue soon and write more beautiful and mindblowing scene you are our hope for weekends.Edited by Cutie-NivRen - 13 years ago

I loved the way you described friendship and love. I always thought that Nivi-Sid love story was more of misunderstood friendship because none of them thought of fighting for it. Well I enjoyed this scene a lot, Nivi was expecting Viren to do something mischievous 😳 😉 but Viren always surprise her and us.😆 Well I am sure he going to make up for it pretty soon. 😉

Suchi, You Rock..  I am speechless... This 8th scene was very good. It had everything. Please continue this trip... We can never get bored of it. You capture the beauty of all the relationships and intricately are depicting NiVren....Thanks for doing this.

wow suchitra ji....that was amazing.....bahut badiya.......cant wait to read more....

Wow yaar Suchi hats off yaar

Suchi, you truly are a magician. I can't thankyou enough for this amazing retreat. I like the way you described Friendship and Love beautiful.

Actually I think you should write a book, we will all help you with proof reading and editing and if you want some suggestions too. YOu are simply amazing Suchi, think about it. If not a complete novel atleast short story you will do justice to every character you create. Don't think I am just praising you for the sake of it, these words are from my heart and you deserve it.

Suchi u are really good...will u please start a FF on nivRen.??

Suchi...wonderful parts. Yeh Viren bhi na...when Nivi was not aware of her love for him he was constantly finding excuses to touch her and now that she is his he is content to take his time. Actually this is the best part of love - like the engagement period between couples - NIvren in this state would be fantastic to read Suchi. Viren would keep Nivi hanging, she will never be sure of what he is going to do next. Thank you for making it a wonderful weekend.

Originally posted by: milee1014

Suchi, you truly are a magician. I can't thankyou enough for this amazing retreat. I like the way you described Friendship and Love beautiful.

Actually I think you should write a book, we will all help you with proof reading and editing and if you want some suggestions too. YOu are simply amazing Suchi, think about it. If not a complete novel atleast short story you will do justice to every character you create. Don't think I am just praising you for the sake of it, these words are from my heart and you deserve it.

Yeah : ) thanks,
Ok may be I will start a new FF but you know it requires a lot of time and honestly these scenes I do not look at them twice and when i do I find like million grammar errors and I go like wow !!! thats embarrassing lol

But I do research some times about few things before i write like the resort in this story is real and it exists : ) in manali.

I will practice with nivren : ) and may be just continue until I can find some time on my hands.

M

Originally posted by: Suchi-NivReniac

Yeah : ) thanks,
Ok may be I will start a new FF but you know it requires a lot of time and honestly these scenes I do not look at them twice and when i do I find like million grammar errors and I go like wow !!! thats embarrassing lol

But I do research some times about few things before i write like the resort in this story is real and it exists : ) in manali.

I will practice with nivren : ) and may be just continue until I can find some time on my hands.

M