Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai


Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai
Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai

Eternal lovers. FanFic. 1 to 6 Updated. (Page 6)

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Firstly, i'd like to thank all of you for the comments and apologize for being so so soo late. I was unable to update for some reason but here i am doing it now.

So it goes like..
Next morning, akshara gets a call from her mother who wants her to come over and meet all of them. She tells her everyones missing her, she tells her mother that she'll ask naitik and tell her in a while. Its sunday morning and naitik gets up late. Akshara gets her tea and breakfast in their room. Hes sitting on the bed where akshara gives her tea and serves her breakfast dish 'wah', he says, 'sunday morning, aur biwi k haathon ki chai aur nashta, i'm the luckiset man to have the best wife' and winks at her. She smile while shes shy at the same time. After a few moments Akshara tells naitik that her mother had called in the morning and she wants her to come over. She says 'naitik, mein jaun?'
Naitik: 'akshara, aaj jana zaruri hai kya? Dekhye aj mein free hoon aur mujhe kahin jana bhi nahin hai. Humein saath rehne k liye kuch time bhi mil jayega. Aap, kal chaley jayeiga.'
Akshara: par naitik kal tou ghar par bauji dadu kaka koi bhi nae hoga. maan chahti hai k mein aaj ka din un sab k saath bitaun'
Naitik: Akshara pleasee. aaj nahin?
Akshara: Ok ( in a very low tone)
She then gets up and leaves, shes working in the kitchen. Naitik realizes that shes sad and he should do something.
He goes to the kitchen, he hugs akshara from the back and tries to romance. Akshara, whereas, is not in a really good mood and she tells him to let her do her work and go. Naitik tries a lot but she refuses to listen that pisses him off.
After a while naitik is sitting in the room, he sees akshara coming and tries to ignore. When akshara enters she sees that hes upset and goes to him.
Akshara: Naitik app yahan aise kyun bethe hein, aap naraz hein?
Naitik: HAAN.
Akshara: Lekin kyun?
Naitik: Dil kar raha tha mera, maza ata hai mujhe.
She understand what hes trying to do.
Akshara: achaa, theek hai, agar apko yehi acha lagta hai tou theek hai.
She gets up and goes to the cupboard smiling. Naitik makes a confused face and looks at what shes doing.
Naitik: Haan waisey bhi aapko tou aapki rasoi mein maza ata hai na. Jaiyey jakey SAAABB ki shewa kijye. Waise bhi meri kisko pari hai.
Akshara: Arey, tou aapko bura nae lagega?
Naitik: Tou wo meri problem hai na, us sey aapko kya farq parta hai?
Akshara: Naitik bas na ab.
Naitik: Mein solution bhi khud hi dhoond lunga aapko kya.
Akshara: NAITIKK.
Akshara: Aap nahin manengay.
She makes a gesture of getting up while he says
'maan sakta hoon'
Akshara: kya?
Naitik: haan, itna mushkil nahin hai. 
Akshara: matlab?
Naitik: Simple, aap sirf i love you keh dijye.
Akshara. Acha, Iii...Kya? Naitik.
Naitik: Jee?
Akshara: Mein jitni bholi lagti hun na utni hoon nae. ( and she gets up)
He holds her arm and goes closer to her.
Naitik: achaa, soch lijye.
Akshara: soch liya. He gets colser and closer the start to feel each other. She tries to hold him.
Akshara: naitik.
Naitik: akshara.
Akshara: naitik, koi jayega. 
Naitik: aaney dijye. meine tou aapse kaha tha. Abhi bhi kehsati hein aap.
Akshara: (in her normal very very slow way she says i love you)
Naitik: (turns her around and hugs her)
Akshara: aap bauhat burey hein.
Naitik: jaanta hoon.

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_Rasha_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
Lovely part.i luvd ur is simply ausumn.w8ing 4 nxt part.
anveshasharma Goldie

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
superb part di.i read all 6 parts together.these r fabClap
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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hinakshara

Lovely part.i luvd ur is simply ausumn.w8ing 4 nxt part.
aww, i'm glad you liked it. i'll try and update more.
Simx Groupbie

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anveshasharma

superb part di.i read all 6 parts together.these r fabClap
thankyou so much anvesha. you'll get to
Rachu.m Goldie

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
very nice parts di i read all at a time cont soon
saman.17 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 8:25pm | IP Logged
al the parts r nice...Clap plzzz cont soonSmile
pvlaks IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
Woww...all parts  are  very  nice...update  soon...keep  it  up

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