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Posted: 13 years ago
Moving on..

Next morning, naitik's getting late for the office. He's in a hurry, akshara goes to him to put up the tie. He smiles and tries to kiss her on her nech, but she say "naitik kya kar rahey hein". "apni biwi se pyar" naitik says, and akshara smiles after that. Akshara says, "Acha jaye apko der ho rahi hai na, bye", and he leaves. In the evening they go to varsha's godh bharai. Akshara manages the work, shes explaining what to do to some worker where naitik at the back stands there and watches her/adores her with a smile on his face.๐Ÿ˜Š Later on, while the rasams are going on, akshara is standing there seeing varsha. Naitik comes from the back and says "apney maa baney key sapney dekh rahi ho"(p.s i wont be using and 'aap's'.) Akshara smiles and tries to move, while naitik says,"nahin akshara, aaj nahain" They look into each others eyes, and he holds her handโ˜บ๏ธ. She closes her eyes and smiles. Akshara loks around dreamin' of herself goin' thorugh all of it....
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Posted: 13 years ago
gud part dear๐Ÿ˜Š ok 4m nw carry on here oly๐Ÿ˜Š n pm to readers so cn cm to knw dat u hav updated๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc parts.. plz pm next tym u update it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
..after the godh bharai is over, akshara, her mother and dadi are sitting in varshas room with her and talking. Naitik goes there, he stands outside the room and calls akshara, in a way that no one notices. She tells him to go away but he insists. He keeps asking her to come outside but she does not. he gives her a 'FINE' expression, and leaves.
Later, when they reach home..in the night akshara takes milk to the room.
Akshara: Naitik apka doodh.
Naitik: Nae chaiye.
Akshara: Naitik kya hua? ap aisey kyun baat kar rahey hein.
Naitik: Mujhe shauk hai, apko kya faraq parta hai.
Akshara: Lekin batyae tou, hua kya hai? ap mujhse naraz hein?
Naitik: nahin.
Akshara: mein janty hoon aap naraz hein.
Naitik: aur agar hun bhi tou apko kya faraq parta hai?
and he pretends to sleep after that. When he is pretending to sleep, akshara goes closer to him and kisses him on his forehead, and she gets up. Naitik smiles and pulls her back, they roll a bit on the bed.
Akshara: naitik, choriey mujhe.
Naitik: Shh (puts his finger on her lips). 'i love you'
Akshara smiles and puts her hands on his cheeks...*eye lock*

I know i leave it on a cliff hanger everytime, but hats how i write!๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part and thnxxx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice yr luved d *eye lock*โ˜บ๏ธ
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Posted: 13 years ago
wooow nice yaar...๐Ÿ‘ 
cont soon..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 13 years ago
wooww nyc part dear๐Ÿ˜ณ.. thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Surely will update the next part a soon a possible. You guys can share ideas as well.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
owowowow yaaaaaar๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
soooooooo nyccccc....awesome update dear..!!
continue soon nd thanks for d pm..๐Ÿ˜›