Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai

India-Forums

   
Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai
Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai

Eternal lovers. FanFic. 1 to 6 Updated.

Simx Groupbie
Simx
Simx

Joined: 07 August 2009
Posts: 91

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
This is my first FF so i'd like to keep it short simple.


It starts of from 12 in the night. Its valentines day, naitik is sitting outside in the lawn. Where he hears some footsteps, he looks back and sees aksh standing there, fully dressed. He goes to her, looks into her eyes. Holds her hand and kisses it. Akshara starts looking here and there and is uncomfortable. Naitik takes out a payal from his pocket and puts it on aksharas feet and says "ye payal mujhe hamesha apse jorey rakhey gi, aur mujhe hamesha batayegi kay mera pyaar kahan hai". Having said that, he goes even more closer and tries to kiss her, she smiles and tries to go away. But he holds her hand and says,"nahin, akshara kabhi naitik se door nahin ja sakti, kabhi nahin. akshars hair come on her face due to the wind, she tries to remove them but naitik holds her hand and moves her hair. *a little eye-lock session*. Naitik lifts her p and takes her to the room, they look into each others eyes...

You can suggest any ways of making it better, please comment.

INDEX:
Parrt1-page 1.
Part2- page 2.
Part3- page 2.
Part4- page 4.
Part5- page 5.
Part6- page 6.


Edited by Simx - 18 May 2011 at 1:01pm

The following 11 member(s) liked the above post:

aneesfathima15vim916Rachu.m_deepshi__Dipsi__Rasha_..Akaisha..-.Shriya.--Stutz-agirlhasnoname._Divya_

Priyanshi_143 Senior Member
Priyanshi_143
Priyanshi_143

Joined: 09 August 2010
Posts: 275

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
nyc start...............cont soon

-.Shriya.- IF-Sizzlerz
-.Shriya.-
-.Shriya.-

Joined: 11 June 2010
Posts: 10689

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
ohh another 1 new FFBig smile nyc start do cont..Smile like itt
_Divya_ IF-Stunnerz
_Divya_
_Divya_

Joined: 10 November 2009
Posts: 30128

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
wow.....nyc part buddy
cont soon......PM nxt tym plz
shithy Groupbie
shithy
shithy

Joined: 08 August 2007
Posts: 158

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
hey its rly nice yaar...cntnue...Smile
agirlhasnoname. IF-Stunnerz
agirlhasnoname.
agirlhasnoname.

Joined: 04 December 2010
Posts: 28029

Posted: 08 January 2011 at 1:00am | IP Logged
nyc yr continue soon n gudjob Clap
Simx Groupbie
Simx
Simx

Joined: 07 August 2009
Posts: 91

Posted: 08 January 2011 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Thanks alot guys. Thankyou for the appreciation. Heres the part2 link http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1584854#37902097
sameera_naksh Goldie
sameera_naksh
sameera_naksh

Joined: 09 September 2010
Posts: 1946

Posted: 08 January 2011 at 1:54am | IP Logged
NICE PART PLS CONTINUE...... NEXT PART SOON

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Naksh -Ek Ehsaas Pyaar ka- ff updated@pg126

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 129 130

Author: pree4ru   Replies: 1035   Views: 129106

pree4ru 1035 129106 09 December 2012 at 9:17am by ..Laxmi..
hamaara pyaar...part-10..pg-37..updated

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 38 39

Author: Xx.Phoenix.xX   Replies: 310   Views: 26982

Xx.Phoenix.xX 310 26982 03 October 2010 at 6:41am by Asawari_naksh
Request to Naksha lovers and YR fans

Author: RaSia   Replies: 2   Views: 814

RaSia 2 814 11 March 2010 at 11:31pm by moonlight08
FF MohIni's Eternal Love Story...Day 6 Updated!!!

2 3 4 5

Author: rising_starr   Replies: 36   Views: 3252

rising_starr 36 3252 19 January 2010 at 8:47am by rising_starr
climbing the steps to eternal love :)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 11 12

Author: shanta123123   Replies: 95   Views: 6700

shanta123123 95 6700 30 September 2009 at 7:59pm by shanta123123

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index