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FF-MGt~2~*My Dark Lover*part 35 pg 104 note pg117 (Page 120)

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a beautifully written end...the pain put me in tears...
 
Geet got what all she wanted from her life here and after...
and she left beautiful memories for Maan
 
P.S. though it was beautifully written, i cant bear tragic love stories...it took me a while to be out of my gloomy mood. Truly, you conveyed the Maan's pain to readers

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this lineā€¦ i have re read.. idk.. how much i love this
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Maan- no... No... It's today. I know. I know it's today. He managed to speak out in his old voice. The handsome maan sing khurana was replaced with a new skin. A new age. Who devoted his life waiting for his geet. His wife. His love. His jaan. He devoted his life to her... Never let anyone take her place... How could they? It was impossible... No one was Geet... There was only one Geet... The old maan closed his eyes for the last time. Never to reopen but to open to find his youth... to Find his love...


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Maan slowly walks up the stair. He feels the stairs. It was golden. There was cloud everywhere. Rainbows showing the purity of his essence. He looks at his hand. It's back to normal or shall I say his youth. Was he dreaming?... No of course no. He could never dream this. This was real. Very real. As he walked along the stair everyone greeted him and whispered she is waiting for you. She is. She is looking beautiful today. One by one everyone pointed at the direction where a bride stood there outside a gate. A golden gate with key in her hand. She indeed was beautiful. The most beautiful girl in the world. The most gentle pure... The girl who have lost everything but yet gained everything... His GEET. His wife GEET... She slowly took her hand out...
Geet- it's time for us to go hunny... She gently whispered... Tears rolled down my eyes. Tears of joy. Tears of happiness. It's my Geet. I cupped her face...
Maan- you are back... You are back... I smiled.
Geet- I never left... Geet rests her hand on his chest... I was here forever...
Maan- we are to gather forever? Maan asked. He wanted to here it from Geet. He wanted to here it from geets mouth...
Geet nodes with a teary eyes- yes. We are to gather forever. Maan couldn't take it anymore his non stop tears eventually ended. He took her lips in his and kissed... It was his Geet... Just his... Like she promised... This sinful soul is your maan. Only yours.

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 8:55am | IP Logged
My Dark
Lover
i just cry. . . Ofter. . What painful truth. .
1st i though happy end hota to?
But Than i thing this is oly end. . I am realy sad 4 geet. . But she is totaly right on her place. . . .   I just cry just cry 4 maaneet. . . Thank you wonderful ff. . Tooo good. . God bless you . I am stil sad crying Cry geet left beautiful
memories for Maan not her pain Cry

Edited by Kalikak - 28 June 2011 at 9:06am

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i love ur writing style..this is the first ff that really made me cry...GREAT JOB!!

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