Posted: 22 December 2005 at 5:02pm | IP Logged
Hi people I thought I'd rite a new-fan-fic for u all so u can enjoy I'm gonna rite parts these fan fics I rite r gonna b short wiv like bout 10 parts or summit so I can rite different 1nsfor u 2 enjoy based on different films wiv a-k init!!!! Heres the 1'stt story. ENJOY!
DULHAN HUM LE JAYENGE
The camera takes us inside a house when the big door opens of the beautiful house and we see a women sat on the sofa lost in her thoughts wen the maid madhubala comes in the hall.
Madhu- madam ap ki chaye. ( wen she gets no answer she sez madam agen the women replies who is none other then naina)
Naina- are han madhu thnx.
Madhu- madam ap uske bare mein hi soch rahin thi na.
Naina- han madhu. Mein angad ki shaddi ke bare mein hi soch rahi thi kab mera bacha shaadi kar ke bahu lekar aega.
Dilip- han bhai mujhe bhi usi din ka intezaar hai. Lekin who tabnhi ho ga na jab koi ladki mile gi.
Madhu- waise madam mere dimagh mein ek ladki hai. Bohut hi khoobsurat aur suljhi hui hai.
Naina- madhu kya. Kaun hai who?
Madhu- well madam mein unke ghar mein pehle kam karti thi. Yeh dekhye iski photo! (she starts telling the story and we see it happening with all the characters shes on about and like all wot happened)
We see a beautiful girl helping her brother wen she turns around we see tis none other then kripa. She is old fashioned with her long hair in to plaits like little kids and is wearing a white chooridar. She is really beautifull. Then we see her going to her oldest brother sujal and giving him the file.
Kripa- here bahiya ap ki file khana table pe madhuballa ne laga diya hai so ap jaldi kar len. (madhu is telling this story wen she woz wiv them in their house by the way.)
Sujal- thnx bacha. (And he goes to the table and sits down to eat breakfast)
Then we see the second older doing exercise and making kripa go on the tredmill.
Prithvi- come on kripa 10 minutes aur.
Kripa-(out of breath still on the treadmill) bhaiya…apne 10 mint 1 ghante pehle bhi kaha tha. Please ab aur nahin.
Prithvi- kripa keep going aj ke zamane mein ladkiyon ko yeh sab karna chahiye ke apne ap ke liye lad sake jab zaroorat ho to.
Madhu- oh god! Bless the poor child. Kab yeh log is bechari ko choden ge.
Then we see kripa just fall of the tread mill an on he floor. After a while wen kripa is comind down stairs she sees the youngest brother of her and there is loud music playing and he just grabs kripa and starts 2 dance!
Kripa- bhayia(while dancing) ye hap kya kar rahen hein.
Rishi- dance kar raha hoon dear. Come on do this step.
They both are dancing and kripa really enjoiys being wiv rishi because he makes her happy but still she feels she is too much stuck in her house. She is hardly allowed to go out of the house incase nething happens. If a boy looks at her the 3 brothers bash him up and kripa is really worried.
Madhu- kya kya sahe gi yeh bach in logon ke bich mein.
Then we see all brothers ordering their fave food and like 1 wants Chinese, 1 wants non-veg and 1 wants veg. they r all about to eat when madhu comes in.
Madhu- are khud tum log khane beth gaye aur us bechari ka bhool gaye.
Sujal- are han waise kripa kahan hai.
Madhu- kamre mein hai jao uske paas.
Rishi- han chalo sab log.
Prithvi- han han theek hai chalo.
They all go in kripa's room and they see kripa sitting there opn the bed hugging her pillow. They come and sit around her.
Sujal- kripa kya hua aj khana khane ke liye nahin aao gi mujhe pata hai tum meri pasand khao gi non veg.
Rishi- er nahin nahin who niche aa ke veg khaye gi bohut maza aae ga meri pasand to zaroor khae gi hena bacha.
Prithvi- are tum dono sochte raho par kripa to sirf meri pasand ka khana khaye gi aur who hai Chinese less oil. Tabhi to fit rahe gi.
Rishi- nahin who meri pasand khaye gi.
Sujal- are sapne mat dekho meri pasand khaye gi.
Prithvi- tum dono lado hum niche jaa ke Chinese khate hein.
They all start fighting and kripa is trying to stop them but they don't listen then kripa gives up and..
They all go quite as kripa screams.
Kripa- ap log samajhte kyon nahin. Mein ap sab ki pasand janti hoon lekin kabhi kisi ne meri pasand jan ne ki koshish ki. Nahin mein azad hona chati hoon apni pasand ki chize krna chati hoon. Mein tang aa chuki hoon.
Sujal- are kripa magar hum teeno to bas…
Kripa- kya bhaiya. Please elave me alone.
They all go and then next morning kripa is sat at front of the dressing table and looking at herself and then madhu comes in.
Madhu- kya dekh rahi ho kripa
Kripa- madhu. Mein apni zindagi jeena chati hoon. Mein janti hoon ke oonhon ne kabhi mujhe mama papa ki zaroorat mehsoos nahin hone di isi liye meine hamesha who kiya jo onhon ne chaha lekin akhir mein kya karoon. Mein apni marzi se kuch din jeena chati hoon.
Madhu- beta(she comes sits next to her) meri manon to is ghar se kuch dino ke liye bhag jao.
We see all 3 brothers stood there with anger for madhu for telling kripa to run away. Then the story finishes.
Madhu-(back to khanna house) aur unhon ne mujhe ghar se nikal diya. Aur who bachi ab tak yeh sab kuch she rahi hai.
Then we see someone come in and take the photo out of naina's hands we can only see his hand and then camera slowly moves upwards and we see a handsome and dashing man stood there looking at the pgto with one hand on his chin( u know wen u think like that)
Naina- kaisi lagi ladki beta.
Dilip- angad beta ab to tum humari khuahish puri kar do.
Angad- well dad as u wish. Mujhe aldki pasand hai.
Naina- beta!! Tumne aj mere man ki tamana puri kar di.
Madhu- beta who bohut achi hai tum dono bohut khush raho ge.
Angad- well who to hai ladki mujhe pasand hai. Mom dad ap beshak bat kar aaein unke ghar se.
Dilip- beta mein aj hi jaoon ga unse baat karne u don't worry at all.
Madhu- par uske 3 bhai bohut ghuse wale hein. Zara khayal rakhiye ga.
Dilip goes to sharmas house and wen he enters all 3 bros are cumin downstairs.
Dilip sits down and all 3 bros just start asking questions and really stupid 1ns too. Dilip is getting annoyed a little. He gets up.
Dilip- are mein aldki ka rishta mangne aya hoon. Mera beta koi mujrim nahin kea p aise sawal pooch rahe hein.
Prithvi- are ap ki himmat kaise hui humse aise baat karne ki.
Dilip- lekin ap log…
Rishi- dekhiye ap bethiye…
Sujal- nahin. Koi bethne ki zaroorat nahin hai. Woh hai darwaza u can go.
Dilip- dekhiye agar mujhse koi batamizi ho gayi ho to mujhe maaf kardijiye…
Prithvi- dekhiye hum aram se keh rahen hai to jayie warna humein.
Dilip-(he gets angry now) are jao jao mere bete ko bohut si ladkiyan milein gi.
Sujal- just get out!!!
Dilip- are jar aha hoon mein.
Dilip is going out wen at the door he meets kripa.
Kripa- err.. hi uncle..
Dilip is about to put his hand on her head wen sujal pulls kripa inside and close the door and kripa looks back wondering hu it woz. Dilip comes home. angad, naina and madhu come up2 him.
Dilip- kya samajhte hein. Enquiry to aise ki ke mera beta koi mujrim hai.
Angad- dad kya hua ap aise kyon.
Naina- dekhiye akhir baat kya hai.
Dilip- are photo dekhne se pehle enquiry aur phir jab meine kaha ke aise enquiry kyon to kehte get out.
Angad- aise kaha unhon ne apko. (and hes about to go out wen dilip holds him)
Dilip- mein janta hoon beta ke meri beizati(insult) hui hai are dil to mera kiya ke ek ek ko maroon lekin kripa ko dekh ke mera sara ghusa chala gaya. Beta agar tu chata hai ke tera baap jite to tu use mere ghar ki bahu banae ga.
Angad- kya is se ap jiten ge.
Dilip- han beta yeh meri sab se badi jeet hogi.
Angad- t dad mein wada karta hoon ke ap ko ita ke rahooga.
This is it for now thnx for reading. Preview:
Kripa runs away from home!! Why? How? Does ne1 help her? Find out in the next part of Dulhan Hum Le Jayenge!