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One-shot! MayankNupur. Just The Way You Are. (Page 2)

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Too lovely dear

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Beautiful OS
Please do write more
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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
This was a great piece of work...you write really well...please do write moreBig smile
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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Auroni.92

Enjoying thoroughly while reading...Wonderful piece of work...
 
Hey :D
This is Subi here. Thank you so much for the comments :D I will be posting another OS soon ! :D

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 7:49am | IP Logged
hey!!!
dat ws Awesum!!!!
totally luvd it!!!
do write more!!!
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 3:46am | IP Logged
--Edited--

Bete, you dint have to be so cheesy, uh?! Ouch, what do I say? I enjoy reading your works, they seem to me like you enjoy writing every bit of your pieces. If you like them, why should I mind, right? I totally love your skill, and you're creative, somehow. You should try writing other stuff too, you've the conviction - I am quite sure you'd manage serious writing and other topics easily and beautifully too. Approve

And as for this, one - I liked how you wrapped it up. No, not the 'cups her face and kisses' but how he loses himself to her, after all. This strikingly resembles Mayank, you know. And I sorta like it when a man loses his inhibition and displays what he feels. That has an ironic ring to it, and you captured it really well. 

P.S. They are both clingy, I think. Unhygienic people! Geek

-Kankshita


Edited by -Kanky- - 17 March 2011 at 4:28am

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
its awesome dear.Tongue
god jobStar
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AWESOME!!!!
loved it soooooooo much,
plz do write more....Smile

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