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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
excellent poem Mr. shayar..Thumbs Up that was gr8  Clap
 as Tanya Di said  it reminded even me of manavEmbarrassed


n yes exactly the dharmesh track is going old way . as we hav seen in lots of others shows..nthng newThumbs Down
it wuld b pleasing to watch vandu's track....but Ermm....it wuld include RasikaStern Smile

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 10:09am | IP Logged

great shahreyar.........i thnk they hv to focus on armann instead of vaishu vashili...or that fatty dharmesh

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 10:53am | IP Logged
@sanu
thanks yaar,for liking my shayari,
yup now its clear that PR is following the principles of  KZK

@piya
thank u for calling my shayari's as beautiful,

@jhanvi
thanks for liking my this effort,

@sonii
thanks for experiencing the all shades of emotions in my this shayari,

@usha ji
thanks for reading my shayari

@saffy
thanks for enjoying my shayari,
its also not that easy for me to write such long one stanzas

@nycsweetie
thanks for liking my work,

@trupat
i m  really honored that u still remembers my last two shayari's & also for liking this.

@prati
first of all thanks for appreciating my work,
yup u r right,there is nothing new in the dharmesh's theory,
btw people will manage rasika alsoif they get a chance to see their fav vandu

@beautycool
thanks for calling it great,
yup the makers of this show has to focus more on the leads,
rather than dharmu,

@nadz
thanks its my pleasure that u have like my work,
its totally wastage of ur time to expect creativity woh bhi from ekta,
she has now become masters of fooling the audience,

@monica
thanks for liking my shayari,
i will definitely try that i will stay here long,

i m here becoz only of my friends,

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 11:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tanyaz

Beautiful  poetry Acre .Looks like you really put your heart into it .. ClapClapClap
 
This part was as if Manav  was saying , before he got married to his  love .
 
Dard-e-judaai main unki shehan nahin kar sakta
Halaat aise hain mere ki main unke bina na  jee sakta aur na hi mar sakta
Meri duao mein bas ek paigam hoo,
Jab bhi unke aashiquo ko zikkr hoon us mein mera bhi naam hoo,
 
 
OMG, that is so Manav ......

tanya di,
first i m thankful to u that u have liked my work,
u can say that i have put my heart in my this poetry,
after all if i doesn't put my heart in my work,
that shayari will never be complete.

but i will be more happy if manav will say those words to archana which was written by some renowned shayar'sSmile




Edited by acre - 09 January 2011 at 2:36am

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by carpe-diem

Shikhar BabuClapClapClap

very beautifully written.  It was a delight to read and pulled at the heartstrings.  very apt for the show, but if we were to look at it just by itself, it shows the confused state of mind...and this indefinite stance is very appealing.  i like the following lines

Har ek baat par woh apna rang leti hain kyun badal
Unki isi ada ki wajah se aur bhi khoobsurat ho jata hain mere sapno ka mahal
Is khamoshi bhari zindagi mein thodi ho jaye agar chahal
Kash kabhi to woh bhi is mohabbat ke silsile ki kar de pahel
Badnaseeb waqt kabhi to mere liye thoda sa ja samhal
khamosh shabd bhi bana lete milkar ek khoobsurat gazal


but why is it always one sided.... lolTongue

di,thanks for applauding my work,
i m so happy that u have mostly enjoyed all my works,
which i have presented on this forum,
really u thinks that my shayari's is apt for this show,
think again di,LOL
i think u have forget that i m a romantic shayar,
so u will find some amount of romance in my work,

now coming towards ur question,
yyup,those words had said by that young man,
he is very confused whether he loves her or not,,
neither he express his feeling nor he hide his feeling
who haven't  shows his guts infront of that girl,whom he loves very much,.






Edited by acre - 08 January 2011 at 11:19am

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by koolsadhu1000

shikhar dearest ..................bahut zyada khoobsoorat shayari likhi hai is baar
.
Looks like u poured ur heart in it . I havent seen u but I thought of a young man on a terrace , wrapped in a shawl , looking at the moon and stars and penning down these dreamy thoughts..........
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Keep it up young man . Thumbs Up  I am so proud of u .
.
This was especially my favorite part
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Dil ko na jaane aaj kal kitne bharam ho gaye hain,
Log kehte hain ki hum unke pyaar ki wajah se bade besharam ho gaye hain
Unchahe halaat mere liye bade beraham ho gaye hain
Maine unke dil se puchha ki aap se pyaar karke kya itne bure mere karam ho gaye  hain,
Unki yaadoon aur khwaboon mein khojne ki wajah zindagi se bade laparwah hum ho gaye hain,

This was ULTIMATE . I hope u get chance on some creative platform or for lyrics in HIndi movies .




kool di.......... shukriya aapko pasand aayi meri shayari,SmileBig smile

u also can say that i poured my heart in it,
its true that u haven't seen my in real life,
but ur imagination is not bad,LOL

although i haven't wrapped any shawl,LOL
btw here temp is below 1 degree,
yup sometimes in the night,i have seen the moon & the stars,
those things which i have experience at that time,
i had write down in my diary,
after all that feeling can't be expresses in any forms of words,
but i will tried to share those feeling in the form of my words
kool di,
i m also proud of u,
this PR forum incomplete with u & ur magical,creative work,

i wont make my career as the lyricist in the hindi movies,
but there r already two legends gulzar & sameer serving this industry by their beautiful works,
unke rehte i don't have any chance at all,





Edited by acre - 09 January 2011 at 2:33am

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by acre

[QUOTE=carpe-diem]Shikhar BabuClapClapClap


di,thanks for applauding my work,
i m so happy that u have mostly enjoyed all my works,
which i have presented on this forum,
really u thinks that my shayari's is apt for this show,
think again di,LOL
i think u have forget that i m a romantic shayar,
so u will find some amount of romance in my work,

now coming towards ur question,
yyup,those words had said by that young man,
he is very confused whether he loves her or not,,
neither he express his feeling nor he hide his feeling
who haven't  shows his guts infront of that girl,whom he loves very much,.






Shikhar, lol, its apt for the show in the sense that Kekta and CV have us all hooked...Wink
romantic? ok i thought you were badnaamTongueTongueTongue

it is very romantic.LOLEmbarrassed
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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 3:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by acre

Originally posted by carpe-diem

Shikhar BabuClapClapClap

very beautifully written.  It was a delight to read and pulled at the heartstrings.  very apt for the show, but if we were to look at it just by itself, it shows the confused state of mind...and this indefinite stance is very appealing.  i like the following lines

Har ek baat par woh apna rang leti hain kyun badal
Unki isi ada ki wajah se aur bhi khoobsurat ho jata hain mere sapno ka mahal
Is khamoshi bhari zindagi mein thodi ho jaye agar chahal
Kash kabhi to woh bhi is mohabbat ke silsile ki kar de pahel
Badnaseeb waqt kabhi to mere liye thoda sa ja samhal
khamosh shabd bhi bana lete milkar ek khoobsurat gazal


but why is it always one sided.... lolTongue

di,thanks for applauding my work,
i m so happy that u have mostly enjoyed all my works,
which i have presented on this forum,
really u thinks that my shayari's is apt for this show,
think again di,LOL
i think u have forget that i m a romantic shayar,
so u will find some amount of romance in my work,

now coming towards ur question,
yyup,those words had said by that young man,
he is very confused whether he loves her or not,,
neither he express his feeling nor he hide his feeling
who haven't  shows his guts infront of that girl,whom he loves very much,.

Hmmmmmmmmm WinkLOL
So the weather is apt for the Shayar in DelhiLOL
Gr8 going.....

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