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mr shayar's shayari & his nazariya in PR's track (Page 2)

kmh2rockzz IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged
wow awesme
juss superbClapClapClapClapClapClap

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..Sonii.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Bahut khoob Shayar ji...
What a refreshing post, we can experience all shades of emotions, its class Clap

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 9:50am | IP Logged
very nice shikarStar
SaffyFlower IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
very nice acre,u write such long ones with such easeClap
koolsadhu1000 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
shikhar dearest ..................bahut zyada khoobsoorat shayari likhi hai is baar
Looks like u poured ur heart in it . I havent seen u but I thought of a young man on a terrace , wrapped in a shawl , looking at the moon and stars and penning down these dreamy thoughts..........
Keep it up young man . Thumbs Up  I am so proud of u .
This was especially my favorite part
Dil ko na jaane aaj kal kitne bharam ho gaye hain,
Log kehte hain ki hum unke pyaar ki wajah se bade besharam ho gaye hain
Unchahe halaat mere liye bade beraham ho gaye hain
Maine unke dil se puchha ki aap se pyaar karke kya itne bure mere karam ho gaye  hain,
Unki yaadoon aur khwaboon mein khojne ki wajah zindagi se bade laparwah hum ho gaye hain,

This was ULTIMATE . I hope u get chance on some creative platform or for lyrics in HIndi movies .

Edited by koolsadhu1000 - 07 January 2011 at 4:31pm
AlwaysHisJaan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 4:49pm | IP Logged

your shayris r really great .... really loved the first two .....

carpe-diem IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 6:17pm | IP Logged
Shikhar BabuClapClapClap

very beautifully written.  It was a delight to read and pulled at the heartstrings.  very apt for the show, but if we were to look at it just by itself, it shows the confused state of mind...and this indefinite stance is very appealing.  i like the following lines

Har ek baat par woh apna rang leti hain kyun badal
Unki isi ada ki wajah se aur bhi khoobsurat ho jata hain mere sapno ka mahal
Is khamoshi bhari zindagi mein thodi ho jaye agar chahal
Kash kabhi to woh bhi is mohabbat ke silsile ki kar de pahel
Badnaseeb waqt kabhi to mere liye thoda sa ja samhal
khamosh shabd bhi bana lete milkar ek khoobsurat gazal

but why is it always one sided.... lolTongue

Edited by carpe-diem - 07 January 2011 at 6:45pm
coolpratz IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
excellent poem Mr. shayar..Thumbs Up that was gr8  Clap
 as Tanya Di said  it reminded even me of manavEmbarrassed

n yes exactly the dharmesh track is going old way . as we hav seen in lots of others shows..nthng newThumbs Down
it wuld b pleasing to watch vandu's track....but wuld include RasikaStern Smile

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