Lateral thinking -OS- updated part-2 - Page 4

Originally posted by: knumnum

 

Kisse cheat kar rahi ho????😆 i am sure u ll not update ur FF sooo sooon aur woh bhi in a day or 2??? kaise kaise jhoot bolti ho yaar tum😲😆😆

 

Coming to the OS, Loved everything except that i felt there are too much of speaking and less of action😉😆😆.. I know how naughty u can get wen u write a story or a scene between the couple but i didnt find any such thing like tat  here and i missed tat aspect... I understand tat this has to be emotional and senti and so no complains from me😃

 

This  made me realize how much i miss ur ramblings😆... Loved the OS, it will definitely touch everyone's heart in an emotional and senti way but not in a romantic way😆😆

 

Krishi

Thanks a ton honeybuns🤗 and don't worry about my ramblings its coming ur way anyways 😆😆...

Very beautifully written!!!

Sonia....

Sorry for the delay in comment....I am caught up with exams
Coming to the OS  its always Pleasure To read your Writings 😛
and i loved it how you explained each and everything.....Geet's Reactio..hayee i love this kudi in action 😍😆......Beautiful keep  writing more....

Love
Pari

Originally posted by: -Parisa-

Sonia....

Sorry for the delay in comment....I am caught up with exams
Coming to the OS  its always Pleasure To read your Writings 😛
and i loved it how you explained each and everything.....Geet's Reactio..hayee i love this kudi in action 😍😆......Beautiful keep  writing more....

Love
Pari

Hey Pari 🤗

No worries dear... your exams are any day more important... All the best😳
Glad that you still enjoy them...  I hardly wrote anything after Maahi Ve... but its really to good to know that you still remember it😃

Luv, Sonia

Really awesum OS

nice
thanks for pm.
sorry for commenting late.

and the list keeps on increasing

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

and the list keeps on increasing

oye maine isse padha already....I liked it...but I think comment nahi ki.....tab toh main tujhe jaanthi bhi nahi thi kamini....🤣🤣🤣....ab firse padhke comment kardu kya???🤣🤣

Originally posted by: esha143

oye maine isse padha already....I liked it...but I think comment nahi ki.....tab toh main tujhe jaanthi bhi nahi thi kamini....🤣🤣🤣....ab firse padhke comment kardu kya???🤣🤣