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Reminiscence of Love: A Maaneet Tale :) (Page 84)

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 4:00pm | IP Logged
update ASAP

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That was a really great update, yaar. Smile The scene where she was decorating the house and she was getting this 'feeling' was a bit scary...I kept saying to myself...I hope Maan doesn't die...I hope Maan doesn't die...and yet, that is exactly what happensOuch It was to be expected but still it hurt to read that scene. Then, she wakes up and the kiss...WOW, that was written beautifully. EmbarrassedSmile I'll be getting to a kiss part eventually in my story and I hope I do justice to the scene. It won't be half as good as yours and other FF writers on this forum but how can I possibly compete with the experts?Clap

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Is it too early to Ask rather beg for an update. I'm dying in anticipation. Maaneet r alone in he house, they've just broken away from the kiss n r ready to dive in the past... Geet's memories n then if all fails at mohits end but his dreams n the girl infront of him. ... Ahhh save me plzzz. Update soon.
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Originally posted by basicquestion1

Is it too early to Ask rather beg for an update. I'm dying in anticipation. Maaneet r alone in he house, they've just broken away from the kiss n r ready to dive in the past... Geet's memories n then if all fails at mohits end but his dreams n the girl infront of him. ... Ahhh save me plzzz. Update soon.

My Dear Sweet Aarzoo. I really want to give an update right now, but i have an exam tomorrow. The update is ready written, i just have to type it. Give me a bit more time. And this update is going to be REALLY LONG. So, just a tad bit more patience needed at your end. I love you for being so curious and eager and interested. Big smile

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Lovely updateBig smile

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Originally posted by 7thHeaven

hey . . . battling my eyelids and making a puppy dog face . . . can i request an update . . . pweej . . . pweej . . . pweej . . .  but only if ur exams are done

If you'll be so cute, I cant help but not give you an update. But, right now, I'm just soo busy with things. Ouch
Till then, I think I'd give you a poem. One which i wrote. I hope that would do. Tongue
Its nothing great, I just wanted it to share it with you guys. Smile

I wrote it very recently, the title is:

All In A Day's Hope...

Of all the things i guess,
my life's a total mess,
and an emotional turmoil,
i cant decide, and i dont want to recoil...

What do I do, when he comes
to me and holds me with tender care,
And when he makes the promise
that he'd always be there
standing right by me, here beside
on the edge where i stand
ready to save me from the fall,
With a whisper he calls
onto me, such gentle love,
In a hope, that some day i'd rise above
the agony of my past,
and perhaps, this time, it just might last...

But i find myself retreating 
back into my shell, cuz i'm afraid,
Though a million times he's said...
He asks me to place,
my failed trust on him..

And I assure him that it aint he,
For i do not want to create a whim...
I might lead him to nothing,
cuz its myself, who i lack faith in...

But when he hugs me ever so lovingly,
All I can do is melt into his arms,
and give into his charms...

And when he looks deep, so deep into my eyes
I cant not look away, I shy..

Its as if he can read my soul,
like one watches a fish, 
through the water in a bowl...
I cant help but feel butterflies,
each time he warms me with his touch
And its then that i come to realise,
That he means so much...

I wish there comes a day
when i dont have to push him away
because of my antagonist, my darned fear...

I hope there comes a day
when the lost trust upon myself, I regain,
And I'll have him near
without any doubts, without the scare
that i might, just might cause him pain...



So, how's it? Embarrassed

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Hi i just read all the parts of your ff and liked it very much,plsss add me in your PM list and PM the next updtae.plsss continue soon.

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