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Reminiscence of Love: A Maaneet Tale :) (Page 63)

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged


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Thank you. Ab kuch likh bhi do. Words of Encouragement. LOL
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normally i cum out n blabber...but u actually left me speechless. i'll have to go back and reread to understand what part not to comment. whn i gave claps more a million times ..is bcoz..so many parts were worth praising...her dupatta stuck to the watch...i was wondering...since he is the one who broke her the news..did he know all the while ..that the dupatta was stuck?? was he in shock that he didn't dare take it off or he realized it later. what did he feel?? 

mohit realizing that ..this is no dream of his, rather, a stark reality that is right infront of him..walking n talking was beautiful. the way blurry geet became a reality was so surreal.
geet is irresistible for him. every occasion he is just there for her help. as if he is constantly shadowing her. is he like unconsciously just lurking behind her voice. following her every which way.
does he evn know what he is doing??
the maang thing was the perfect ending to u'r chapter.
all in all..after u'r update....i was left dazed and very very very happy.Big smile

the poem was so adorable. plz mohit/maan go n read it. what a wonderful writer she isApprove


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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Winkwow  SAAT Phere..... maang main gulal..... ye ha mohit banaam maan ka kamaal....

hey babaji ab aap bhi kuch karo .... maneet ko kuch bhula bisra yaad karado...

inki bhi kuch lift kara do......Wink

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Awesome part.... loved it

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:57am | IP Logged
its beautiful poem
fabulous update
love it each part
pls cont soonnnnnnnn
thanks pm

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:02am | IP Logged
amazing update................i am so happy that god's will can never be changed by anyone............i am so happy that they are bound in matrimony may b a diff way but loved it..............cant wait for the next update..............
well wat can i say abt the poem very meaningful and touching the heart.........

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by basicquestion1



LOL
Thank you. Ab kuch likh bhi do. Words of Encouragement. LOL

normally i cum out n blabber...but u actually left me speechless. i'll have to go back and reread to understand what part not to comment. whn i gave claps more a million times ..is bcoz..so many parts were worth praising...her dupatta stuck to the watch...i was wondering...since he is the one who broke her the news..did he know all the while ..that the dupatta was stuck?? was he in shock that he didn't dare take it off or he realized it later. what did he feel?? 

mohit realizing that ..this is no dream of his, rather, a stark reality that is right infront of him..walking n talking was beautiful. the way blurry geet became a reality was so surreal.
geet is irresistible for him. every occasion he is just there for her help. as if he is constantly shadowing her. is he like unconsciously just lurking behind her voice. following her every which way.
does he evn know what he is doing??
the maang thing was the perfect ending to u'r chapter.
all in all..after u'r update....i was left dazed and very very very happy.Big smile

the poem was so adorable. plz mohit/maan go n read it. what a wonderful writer she isApprove
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Thank You thank you thank you so much. I really love the way you go deep into the details while commenting. This portrays how sincerely you read all the updates. And it really motivates the writer. Thanks again. As far as Mohit realising about the dupatta is concerned, it will come later. That has to be out, since i will tell you how Mohit took the realisation, because he realised it much later. So, wait for that part. Smile

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged

awsome update

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wow dear........it was so dreamyEmbarrassed!!!! i loved it to the core, the way you explained every small detail, i felt as though everything was happening in front of my eyes........muaahhh!!!!Heart....this is for the POEM, as always it touched my heart and do include poems as often as you can......i'll be more than delighted to read them since it's written by my Star!!!!! continue soon sweety....Smile

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