Reminiscence of Love: A Maaneet Tale :) - Page 63

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Posted: 13 years ago
when are you updating :)
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: SapphireFlames

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Posted: 13 years ago
That was a really great update, yaar. 😊 The scene where she was decorating the house and she was getting this 'feeling' was a bit scary...I kept saying to myself...I hope Maan doesn't die...I hope Maan doesn't die...and yet, that is exactly what happens It was to be expected but still it hurt to read that scene. Then, she wakes up and the kiss...WOW, that was written beautifully. 😳😊 I'll be getting to a kiss part eventually in my story and I hope I do justice to the scene. It won't be half as good as yours and other FF writers on this forum but how can I possibly compete with the experts?👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Is it too early to Ask rather beg for an update. I'm dying in anticipation. Maaneet r alone in he house, they've just broken away from the kiss n r ready to dive in the past... Geet's memories n then if all fails at mohits end but his dreams n the girl infront of him. ... Ahhh save me plzzz. Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Is it too early to Ask rather beg for an update. I'm dying in anticipation. Maaneet r alone in he house, they've just broken away from the kiss n r ready to dive in the past... Geet's memories n then if all fails at mohits end but his dreams n the girl infront of him. ... Ahhh save me plzzz. Update soon.


My Dear Sweet Aarzoo. I really want to give an update right now, but i have an exam tomorrow. The update is ready written, i just have to type it. Give me a bit more time. And this update is going to be REALLY LONG. So, just a tad bit more patience needed at your end. I love you for being so curious and eager and interested. 😃
Posted: 13 years ago
hey . . . battling my eyelids and making a puppy dog face . . . can i request an update . . . pweej . . . pweej . . . pweej . . .  but only if ur exams are done
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

hey . . . battling my eyelids and making a puppy dog face . . . can i request an update . . . pweej . . . pweej . . . pweej . . .  but only if ur exams are done


If you'll be so cute, I cant help but not give you an update. But, right now, I'm just soo busy with things. 
Till then, I think I'd give you a poem. One which i wrote. I hope that would do. 😛
Its nothing great, I just wanted it to share it with you guys. 😊

I wrote it very recently, the title is:

All In A Day's Hope...

Of all the things i guess,
my life's a total mess,
and an emotional turmoil,
i cant decide, and i dont want to recoil...

What do I do, when he comes
to me and holds me with tender care,
And when he makes the promise
that he'd always be there
standing right by me, here beside
on the edge where i stand
ready to save me from the fall,
With a whisper he calls
onto me, such gentle love,
In a hope, that some day i'd rise above
the agony of my past,
and perhaps, this time, it just might last...

But i find myself retreating 
back into my shell, cuz i'm afraid,
Though a million times he's said...
He asks me to place,
my failed trust on him..

And I assure him that it aint he,
For i do not want to create a whim...
I might lead him to nothing,
cuz its myself, who i lack faith in...

But when he hugs me ever so lovingly,
All I can do is melt into his arms,
and give into his charms...

And when he looks deep, so deep into my eyes
I cant not look away, I shy..

Its as if he can read my soul,
like one watches a fish, 
through the water in a bowl...
I cant help but feel butterflies,
each time he warms me with his touch
And its then that i come to realise,
That he means so much...

I wish there comes a day
when i dont have to push him away
because of my antagonist, my darned fear...

I hope there comes a day
when the lost trust upon myself, I regain,
And I'll have him near
without any doubts, without the scare
that i might, just might cause him pain...



So, how's it? 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi i just read all the parts of your ff and liked it very much,plsss add me in your PM list and PM the next updtae.plsss continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Any chances of updating soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hellooo my Itsy Bitsy buddies. <dunno why i wrote that> 😆

OK, now to the toughest part. I have my final exams for the semester. And the chances of updating any sooner are very slim. Please please bear with me. Though I dont say that I wont update at all, neither do I say that I'd definitely give you an update, but I'll try. These exams are real important cuz my score sucked in the previous sem. So, I hope you guys support me and dont forget me if I dont give an update for sometime. I hope you understand. 😊

Love you all.
Here's bidding you a temporary and a small adieu. Take Care guys. I'll be back. 😃