Reminiscence of Love: A Maaneet Tale :) - Page 56

OH GOD . . . how did I miss it . . . I had bookmarked it long time back but I forgot after that . . . sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry . . . well, I read it and trust even while reading the introduction I was crying . . .  Don't we girls love a guy in uniform . . . I could on n on n on praising them . . . trust me I had butterflies reading the cute little confession . . . I do cry and smile reading stuff but hardly do I feel butterflies . . . I mean yeah the last time it happened was while I was reading the break up  (LIZ is simple awesome, amazing, lovely, she is a darling), then while reading Ripped apart(Don't have words to praise Sonia) and of course Home coming and Ek paal (Jaz, well she leaves me breathless) although in the latter two I cried more but then towards the end I did get those jittery feelings . . . and the list ended there . . .but now new entrant would be this FF . . . I mean the simplicity with which you penned down everything was so touchy . . . the proposal was like out of the blue yet serenely beautiful . . . simple words nothing fancy and absolutely contrary to the general wants of a girl . . . how should HE pop the question . . . but it was absolutely AMAZING . . . and u know what U R EVIL . . . you make us smile and the next moment you make us cry . . . even that small part towards the end where you made her cry made me cry . . . please don't mind but somewhere the after effects of the encounter were not up for ur standards . . . they were nice no doubt but u know I expected something else from you, something more intense may be . . . chapter seven I loved it . . . absolutely loved . . . her outburst at Vicky had me in tears . . . although they were just a few lines but anyway I cried . . . natural spring of water . . . man u cracked me up . . . that was GREAT . . . I absolutely am in love with Vicky (don't take me wrong) but I mean he doing all that for maaneet makes me adore him so much . . . when in chapter 9 he said bhai bhabhi while they slept I was like I love you . . . ok chapter 10 wherein u showed their virtual marriage I was in awe of ur writing . . . 😃

Originally posted by: -jia-

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Geetiye 🤗 Welcome back.. I hope you had loads of fun...

Ok before I comment, let me tell u, if you have any devil plans in your mind, nikaal ke baahar phaink de...u do any harm to my Maneet and I swear, eshu ki bandook se tujhe uda doongi...😡😡😡 😃

😆yesh!!! I had loooads of fun. Sorry ki i am replying so late. just had soo much to do. And dont worry. No having plans of harming Maaneet.. sorry, YOUR Maaneet. Mujhe Eshu ki bandook se bohot darr lagta hai.😲 Aisa mat karna please. Abhi toh paida hui hoon mai. 😆

 

I loved the update 😃 very sweet and heart touching.. I loved the past too..beautiful maneet moments..... I wonder if it was all Vicky's doing to leave the two of them alone. Haaye Maan doing tai-chi... Geet kab tak rokti apne aap ko...I am so loving this.....can't wait to read what happens next...so many possibilties!!! 

thank you yhank you. Ahem. Whether it was Vicky's doing or not, you'll know later. 😃

Will they talk or will they kiss??? 😳 maybe both 😍 u have me dreaming abt the next part...so update soon kudiye....😆

Bacche bigad gaye hain. Kiss chahiye bas. Ashleel bacche. 😆

 

Wonderful hun..❤️