Originally posted by: basicquestion1
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Thank you. Ab kuch likh bhi do. Words of Encouragement. π
normally i cum out n blabber...but u actually left me speechless. i'll have to go back and reread to understand what part not to comment. whn i gave claps more a million times ..is bcoz..so many parts were worth praising...her dupatta stuck to the watch...i was wondering...since he is the one who broke her the news..did he know all the while ..that the dupatta was stuck?? was he in shock that he didn't dare take it off or he realized it later. what did he feel??
mohit realizing that ..this is no dream of his, rather, a stark reality that is right infront of him..walking n talking was beautiful. the way blurry geet became a reality was so surreal.
geet is irresistible for him. every occasion he is just there for her help. as if he is constantly shadowing her. is he like unconsciously just lurking behind her voice. following her every which way.
does he evn know what he is doing??
the maang thing was the perfect ending to u'r chapter.
all in all..after u'r update....i was left dazed and very very very happy.π
the poem was so adorable. plz mohit/maan go n read it. what a wonderful writer she is
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Thank You thank you thank you so much. I really love the way you go deep into the details while commenting. This portrays how sincerely you read all the updates. And it really motivates the writer. Thanks again. As far as Mohit realising about the dupatta is concerned, it will come later. That has to be out, since i will tell you how Mohit took the realisation, because he realised it much later. So, wait for that part. π
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