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Do Dil.... Mil Rahe Hain. ..A new ff(updte pg 62) (Page 6)

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 7:20pm | IP Logged
Chapter 9
 
Thara   who  was sitting at Shravan's office waiting for him was fidegting her fingers and glancing around the small room; noting the  carton boxes piled hapazardly on one side,the files and papers all over the desk,the artificial flower pots lying in a heap on one side, she cldnt help suppressing a suffocating feeling...
Shravan breezed in hurriedly and stoppped in his tracks seeing Thara..." hello, what are you doing here early inthe mornin? office nahi hai kya?he asked..."Hello ShravanBig smile... long time no see... khahan kho gaya tha... Patha hai mujhe bahut mehsoos hagaya.. Cry.. no phone calls , no hai..so isiliye mein aaj office se chutti lekhar yahan aagayi..kush nahi hai kyaDisapprove"
plastering a false smile  on his face Shravan said " thara yeisa koi baat nahi hai; kaam me busy tha;  mein kyo thum ko avoid karun.. waise bhi thumara office jane ka sawalhi nahi hai.. thumara Baap retd merchant navy officer tha.. paisawallah hai thum kyon ek computer co. mein kaam karthi hai?
Thara replied "what you say is true, par mera Baap bahut strict hai, isiliye mein ziddhi karke yeh  kaam kaarrahi hoon.. Jab thum mujhse shaadhi karonge na thab mein yeh sab choddoongiEmbarrassedmein bhi kush ;Papa bhi kush..."
"Dekho thara kithni baar thumhe kaha mein thumse shaadi nahi karsaktha..thumare liye kaam ek timepass hai; par mere liye mera zindhagi hai.. understand this plz.."  ..... "Par shravan mein thumse pyaar kartha hun; shaadhi kar chatha hun"she poutedLOL 
"Thara mein kabhi yisa nahi socha tha aur yeh baat thume patha bhi hai.. Ek saal se mera peeche padi hai.. is baat kho patha bhi nahi kya? Unhappy .. Hamesha mujhe is baat se thang karthi hai..".... "thume mujhse pyaar nahi  tho kya hua Shravan.. mera pyaar hum donokeliye kaafi haiBig smile Dekho mein hamara  pyaar ke baare mein ek poem bhi likha...
Our love is Key Board;
Insert our happiness we will cntrl of life;
Press esc and w'll be free from home
pgup and pgdown w'll scroll our life;
dont shift ur loyalty,
dont del my love
enter my heart;
our love will never end 
"thara very nice poem.. but Iam sorry I dont love you"..Shravan then felt sorry for her and just to cheer her smiled wickedly and said " do you know Thara; 
My love will be dressed in white,dancing and coming out of white mist,with flowers welcoming & showering on her and then pop a sound that triggers my heart will be heardLOLROFL;.... This is how it shld be only then I will think abt love.. okay .. ab jao ghar aur mujhe kaam karne de..
Thara gave up her attempts to entice him walked out like a hurt puppyOuch, thinking one day or other she will make him fall in love with her..
Viren entered the cabin hearing shravan words and said" bechari why r u hurting her, u cld marry her & settle; and all this bakwas abt ur love";..".Arre yeisa kaisa ho sakth hai" interjected Shravan" yeh sab filmo mein hotha hai.. I wanted her to leave and so said the first thing that came into my mind.. chal ja kaam karthen hein"
 
Little did Shravan know that his vision of love will come true shortly.......
 


Edited by maris08 - 09 January 2011 at 7:20pm

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
hahaha... Maris that was a really fun poem...ohhhhh u have created an anticipation of how SS r gonna meet..........can't wait.....hope u will update soon...thanx for the PM

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Thanx 4 pm. I loved d way shravan brushed tara off. His idea of his ms right is beautiful. Cant wait 4 saavan to meet.

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
What a nice twist! So Taara is going after Shravan like a puppy Tongue
 
Good to read he doesn't want her Maris, enter Saachi Wink
 
Well done Big smile
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Chapter 10
 
Saachi was riding to school the next mornin, her spirits bright and sunny like the glorious sun that was beaming on its earthly subjects... she was thinking abt the fairy tale ballet.. all the children were very enthusiastic and willing and eager to learn their parts.. this feeling rubbed on her and she felt the show wld be a success ...
 
She didnt notice the black clad rider on the bike following her at a discreet distance.. today he had purloined a black bike and had even smeared mud on the lisc.plate so that noone can decipher it easily... He was adept at stealing..no he wont call it that way he was good at loaning diff bikes from diff people.. after all he chose his vehicles carefully from the parking lots.. after seein off saachi at the school he rode back to set in motion his next plan...the mere thought gave him happiness.. if he cld achieve what he had aimed for then ...he cld help feeling his loins tighten with pleasure...mmmmmmm
 
The whole mornin went in a whirlwind;saachi rehearsing with her wards,fine tuning the musical ensemble,the costume designs.. all took her breath and time.. her assistants were helpful but she was the deciding authority as far as the ballet was concerned.. Mr. shastri had reposed so much faith in her and she had to live up to his expectations...
 Just  before lunch(for which she sat down late)she received a phone call.. without checking for the number she picked up and answered"hello whos this"
There was silence on the other side."hello aap khon hai, kya  number chahiye"
still no answer.. after a lenghty silence there was a heavy breathing...
saachi's hands went cold, her forehead filled with sweat and her heart missed a beat...
With shaking fingers she disconnected the line and shook herself with fear...her appetite  killed she closed her lunch box and just sat there  starring a sightless scene... she was  oblivious to the sounds of children back from lunch or their continuation of rehearsals...
Her phone rang again.. with trembling fingers and racing heart she checked the number and heaved a sigh of relief.. it was rajshri her friend calling.. in a small voice she answered her.. sensing something amiss Rajshri enquired.."hello  saachi kya sab teek hai.. You sound hollow, kuch parishani hai?".. "Rajishri mein kya baataun..mujhe bahut daar lagraha hai.. mera last period free hai ..permission leke thumara pass aaungi..will you meet me at you campus".. "teek hai chintha mat karo.. I'll help you".. saachi was biding her time just to get away and meet her friend... her interest and enthu had dampened very much.. and she cld hardly concentrate in her work.. with permission from the dean she asked her assistant to take over and rode...  with a determination to do something she rode to rajshri's campus..
 
 
Chapter 11
 
 
Shravan received a call from the alumini office of the IAS training academy mussorie.. They had wanted him to organise their reunion function.. Taking Viren with him,as Bunty was sick and preferred to stay at the office, He dashed off in his  bike unmindful of the evening traffic.. he had wanted to finish this meeting soon and head for a movie with his  bro Rajat and bhabhi neetha..
 
The  Lal Bahadhur Shastri National Academy Of Administration(LBSNNA)  is where the future Babhus, the IAS,IPS ,IFS aspirants who have cleared the prilms and main exams  are trained,  It is an imposing building and  students of varied ages and walks of life and from all over India come  here for their final training before being released into the Bureaucratic world of Indian Administration,either inland or foreign...
 
Into this edifice saachi rode in to meet Rajshri who was training for her IAS... They met in the lush green lawns of the college..Rajshris two other friends were there to greet Saachi.."this is my friend Uma shekhar and this is Amit vohra' introduced Rajshri.. 'I had already briefed them abt your prob.. so tell me what happened t'day?' she enquired... Saachi relived those terrible moments and narrated her plight...  All three put their heads together to come up with an idea to tackle the situation... Saachi  teary eyed and with a bleek expression was alternating betwn hearing them and pondering herself...
 
Shravan zoomed into this campus with Viren intow... stopping near the main bldg  he asked Viren to park the bike at the parking lot... Glancing at the wide expanse of the campus his eyes suddenly riveted on the girl...Dressed in a sky blue salwar she painted a picture of crying Madonna..though she was far away on the lawns and her face not so clear, shravan cld make out she was sad and in some problem as her shoulders was drooped and her body was occasionaly shaking....
" Sharavan chal lets go inside" said Viren.. "Dekho Viren woh ice cream waalli; aaj woh bahut parishan mein hai".... Viren busy checking his papers didnt notice anything and asked " kya ice cream, you want one now, lets finish this businss and treat ourselves to oneLOL"..." nein nein.. woh  woh bechari.. kya hua unko?... Dekho na"...  still head down Viren asked "arre what r u sayin? khon bechari aur kya parishani?"Confused
 shravan practically had to lift Viren's head up; but lo the small group had already turned their backs and were walking towards the exit gate... " Shravan lagtha hai you have got Bunty's illness..you are blabbering.. lets go"
 
 Shravan's mind was riverted on the girl.. poor miss bechari... He cldnt help comparing  the contrast she painted...the childish delight in eating the ice cream and now all grown up and burdened with some problem...
wondering abt this and shaking his head he went inside with Viren..... 

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
wow maris !!waiting for them 2 meet!!

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
LOL Miss Bechari! Well written and the creep just creeps me out! He better not hurt Saachi..Shocked

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 6:31am | IP Logged
Maris good flow yaar......when r they going to meet..i mean that white magic u described...thats when Shravan is gonna fall for her?? Yea creepy thinking about that stalker!!

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