Baat Hamari Pakki Hai


Baat Hamari Pakki Hai
Baat Hamari Pakki Hai

Do Dil.... Mil Rahe Hain. ..A new ff(updte pg 62) (Page 46)

shilparoxx IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
What an awesome update!!!!!!!!!!Thumbs Up
ClapThe mehendhi ceremony reminded me of when I went to India for my cousin's wedding..............Day Dreaming
Today's update brought back so many memories to me today.......Smile
Thanks so much for the update and pm, Maris!Smile
Please continue..........
btw..... thanks for the double update......Wink

maris08 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 10:50pm | IP Logged

Chapter 39

Marriage is the beautiful blending of two lives, two loves and two hearts...It is a wonderful, mystical moment when a beautiful journey of life starts...
A new day dawned, bright and sunny, warm and cheerful bringing happiness to all from the cold and wintery season ... The day November 30th ; The day Thursday; The place Sri Ram Ji's Mandhir; The time 10am was to see the union of two hearts and two souls and two families...
Shravan dressed in a beige colured with gold zari thread work sherwani done with a sequin ari decoration...The turban red in colour with matching zari work and a feather sticking on top was in perfect contrast with sherwani....The joothis, off white in colour was handcrafted and embellished with zari work...With beads of pearls forming a necklace, a sword in its sheath, tied to his sides ; He was resplendent in splendor and style and was looking like a Maharaja sitting astride  on top of the horse...The Bharat arrived with a lot of funfare, the welcome equally warm and merry...
Saachi  wearing  a maroon silk saree embroidered with zari work and  embellished with stones..It was a Garchola saree with wide border and rich in heavy needle-work of Zari, mirrors and beads sequins, bearing the heritage of previous generations...The  matching blouse was equally ornamented with zaris and stones...The dupatta , a georgette, red coloured, was beautified with sequence and kundan work, matching the whole ensemble of saree and blouse, added grace and charm to beautiful Saachi...
With flowers tucked in her hair and decked with her mother's traditional jewellery, Saachi was like a Maharani, waiting for her Raja, to garland and whisk her away to eternity...The bridal attire imparted an air of sensuality and sophistication, which best described the mood, it gave to the wearer and the beholder of it...


After the Jaimalas were exchanged, they stood before the presiding Deity, eyes closed, arms folded and prayed sincerely for their happiness in this new journery of life... Seated next to each other, inside the makeshift mandap, Saachi and Shravan, presented a most charming, and beautiful sight of the best romantic couple in the world...

Shravan tied the Mangalsutra around Saachi's neck...applied the crimson sindhoor on her forehead...The Shehnai music drowning any asubh words that might have inadvertently been uttered...A poignant scene that will always remain in the hearts of the people viewing it...


Taking the Saath Peras, they took their own version of the seven vows before the Pavitra Agni...


To promise each other to take care of their families and responsibility of their home;

To stand with each other, letting no harm affect them, providing strength and courage to each other;

To vow for prosperity and wealth and good wishes and love for each other only;

To remain faithful to each other and unite to bring to this world their children;

To accept each other as their best friends and honour each other till their ends;

To wish for everlasting happiness and stand by each other during all times;

To become Husband and wife, promising of belonging to each other till eternity, with GOD observing as witness;


Showered by flowers and blessings from all, they went around, getting aashirwaads from elders...Finally they have become Man and wife; Saachi and  shravan= SAAVAN... Both felt and experienced the essence of marriage which can be summed up as follows; ..

Chains don't hold marriage together, It's the thread, hundreds of tiny threads which sew the people, the families together, throughout the years ... This is what makes a marriage last forever...

Marriage is the union of a greater sum than two in love...Relatives made by rites; regaling in-laws to delight...It brings the families together in a new relationship, changing lives for some...Bringing joy and happiness to all and the lovers get to shape their destinies...
Saavan realized and understood the real meaning of this...They were confident that their love would take them through this wonderful, new beginning; cruising thro' calm seas, choppy waters, and stormy weather...


The evening approached for the reception to take place at the prestigious Hotel at 6pm...A very elaborate glittering affair...The occasion graced by VIPs, politicians, friends, relatives, business associates; and all the near and dear...

The spread was of wide varieties of Indian , Continental and Chinese   cuisines ....The whole Hotel was decked and lighted for the affair , for after all the Jaiswals were a big name to reckon in Mussorrie.... Shravan, dressed in grey suit and coat  and red tie was all elegance and handsome;'.while Saachi, dressed in a shimmering, ornate blue silk saree was all grace and beauty...


HE called Pratap and Inder on their cell phone and threatened, that a bomb would go off....Both the samdhis, knew it was a hoax call, as the whole hotel was guarded like a fortress both by the police and private security agencies...Also each and every member entering it was thoroughly scanned and checked, all done in a discreet manner without hurting anyone's sentiments...

Failing to elicit any response, he tried throwing a petrol bomb (a Molotov cocktail) at the entrance...But an alert and vigilant security guard thwatered his attempt...Abandoning the bomb he ran away, thinking of a plan B... 

He reached the Sharma's house with the intent of arsoning it...But he could even get past the gate as it was heavily guarded...Next he tried the Jaiswal's mansion...Needless to say the whole street was cordoned off and it was next to impossible to even reach their neighbour's house...In desperation he realized it was impossible for an individual like him to create a havoc today...

Dejected and seething with rage, he went back to his room, to chalk a new plan to get even with all of them... The next time he strikes it will be hard and fast and hurt them the deepest and most, he promised to himself... 


Edited by maris08 - 18 February 2011 at 7:00pm

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kchitra77 Goldie

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Oh God Maris...u excelled urselves this time......nice touch was the initial shadi mini pics..then the invitation n asking of our blessings...AWESOME!!
Ahhh...Maharaja n Maharani....the costume description n the atmosphere u created ...i saw them getting married..thats all.
what a creepy dog that fellow trying everything to spoil the happiness...i wish him to be sent to the lowest hell possible!!

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ChocolateChick Goldie

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 1:58am | IP Logged
^^ That would be the 7th layer of hell, how dare he even think of disturbing the wedding Angry

Maris you've outdone yourself. Extraordinary written, touches me to read how beautiful their wedding day is and how good a couple they are. It's like you write and play music yourself Wink

Keep playing Clap

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..-Niru-.. Goldie

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 4:51am | IP Logged
hey maris !!! ur fanfic made my day !!
loved d description !!music ,environment ........EVERYTHING!!!!!

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Aanchal15 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Simply Brillant,  Maris!!Clap The  Baraat pics, the invitation etc - just splendid. You have described the wedding so vividly, that I felt as if I had been a part of it. Shravan and Saachi dressed in their finest , so mesmerising. Day Dreaming
Hope the thorn in their happiness- that pervert,  is dealt with promptly. AngryI don't want any dark clouds lingering above SaaVan.Unhappy
Thanks for the pm.

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shobrakapooor IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 6:34am | IP Logged
oh it was so perfect . the stalker, oh he deserved it. in my opinion he should get a jhor ka jadka on  his head with big stick. itll be niceee

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ash91 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Awesome Maris!!!ClapClap the marriage couldnt have been more perfect than this...loved ur descriptions about their costumes, the seven vows and the wedding atmosphere...eagerly waiting for the next update...are gonna get a C-night??WinkWink thanks for the pm!!

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