Baat Hamari Pakki Hai


Baat Hamari Pakki Hai
Baat Hamari Pakki Hai

Do Dil.... Mil Rahe Hain. ..A new ff(updte pg 62) (Page 42)

shilparoxx IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Great update!
Can't wait until Nov.30th.........Wink

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Chapter 36

The  intervening period between the engagement and the marriage was filled with fun and gaiety; laughter and merry; anxiety and worry...A typical contrasting sets of emotions, any family undergoes, before a wedding in their midst..
Preparations were shared and responsibilities equally divided between the  two families... It brought about an easy camaraderie and a new closeness, among the members...


The news of their wedding, spread like wild fire in the Doon School campus...From Dean Shastri ji, to her assistants, to all her students; the wishes started pouring in from all quarters...For after all, Saachi was a rare gem of a teacher, the school had ever come across...Only Gopally's wishes didn't come by as he was away on some personal trip to Delhi...

Rajshri was so eloquent in her happiness for Saachi and even danced a jig expressing her joy... After all she was not only a close friend and neighbor, but also a sort of sound board for Saachi...So both Saachi and Shravan had to treat her first even before they, could plan an outing...

" When are you going to give us the good news" asked Saachi..."Arre mein kya bataun; Amit is very noncommittal; I think he wants to finish this training and after a subsequent posting, he may propose...See,even now he away, with his school friends on a tour, leaving me fretting like this"...she said good naturedly...
Shravan's friends, did not allow even a single day of peace for him...Always ribbing him, mocking at how he spoke to Thara and subsequently fell for Saachi; they left no stone unturned in embarrassing him...He being a good friend took all this fun, in his stride...But true to being the best buddies and partners; they toiled and sweated, both at the office as well as in wedding preparations...
The young lovers somehow managed to have time for themselves...In between  the busy wedding trousseau, shopping, which they did together, they stole moments, snatched a few kisses, when no one was about...It was a sort of mingling of anticipation of discovering each other and apprehension of the D day...


Once they went on a long drive from Mussoorrie to Kempty falls, situated on the Yamunothri road... This wonderful waterfalls, the biggest and prettiest one of the whole valley, is surrounded by the high mountains... Standing at a vantage point overlooking the falls, Shravan hugging her from the back they watched the rushing waters...

 The beautiful rainbow it created because of the refraction of water by the Sun's rays, the swirling mist created near the bottom of the falls was a scene straight out of GOD's portrayal of Nature's wonder film...


Both felt like sitting on the rainbow, side by side, holding hands and legs dangling,  and lording over the gushing waters, being  enveloped by a cloak of whitey mist...It  seemed  as though they were, the Maestro conducting an orchestra,  of the Kempty falls... Its  gushing and rushing  and tumbling  sounds  of water  producing the music of Love... Sighing  deeply at the picture they  painted   themselves, savouring the  sweet taste of it,  both left with light and  floating  heart, dreamy eyes and  sense of living in an utopic world...


On an auspicious Day, that week, Saachi and her family were invited to the Jaiswal's house...An imposing  edifice, built  magnificently  and large enough to hold two  houses within it, the house radiated only the warmth and affection towards all its  guests...Like the house the people living  inside also welcomed them  with opens  arms and genuine love and affection...


Shravan  showed her  around the  house , narrating  anecdotes about his childhood; his  adventures  within the walls as well as outside in the huge garden;  He was already  making her feel so  comfortable , like as though she had  been l iving there since ages...Then he showed her his room...

Magazines and books were stacked  haphazardly on the shelf at one side...A television  and stereo  set was placed on the  wall inlaid cabinet,with a thin layer of dust on them... The furniture inside  included a  wardrobe,a couch,  a bean  bag, a huge double  bed  and a  computer console with matching table and chair...Saachi  noted the walls, instead of art work , were  sporting posters of football stars,  movie stars  posters on one side ...Above  the bed on the wall was a poster  collage of  inspirational words  and quotes  of famous  personalities...

All in all she noted the  room reflected  his eclectic taste of life in general...She was getting to see the other facet of his personality; A person well read and  knowledgeable and equally  interested in sports and entertainment...
Standing in front of her and  holding her hands , shravan kissed her palms and said  " Sacchi, this house is built of cement and stones, brick and wood and nothing else... Making it your home,  filling it with love and affection, integrating  with others  and feeling  a belonging sense is entirely in your hands... Promise me to help fulfill this dream "... in an emotional and pleading  voice...
"Shravan,  indeed your, no, our dreams, will be fulfilled as long as we are together until our last breath"... she said solemnly, promising him taking his hands and kissing it back...
Dadhi  who had quietly watched this scene was very happy and came inside and hugged them both...  "Bacchon  thum dono hamesha kush raho, sada sukhi raho...Let God fulfill all your dreams and  wishes, May you always be happy and smiling "...she  blessed them whole heartedly...


Within  that week the  invitation cards were  printed and both the  families started distributing  them in  earnest  vigour ... With that  started the problems, one after the other...


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shobrakapooor IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 2:39am | IP Logged
30 nov its too long manStern Smile

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Aanchal15 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 3:14am | IP Logged
Very nice update Maris!!Clap Saddened to know that, problems will be making their way into the young couple's lives. How I wish I could sweep away all of them. Broken HeartCry
Please continue soon. And thanks for the pm.

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ash91 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Wow!!! loved the update!!! ur writing is so descriptive that i could actually imagine SaaVan standing by the water falls and seeing the rainbow...gr8 writing, MarisClapClap thanks for the pm!!!

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kchitra77 Goldie

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 8:49am | IP Logged
very nice update n fast was so beautiful the convo between SS n their palm kiss....awesome writing!! problems r going to start yahan bhi.....lets see...thanx for the PM

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..-Niru-.. Goldie

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 8:55am | IP Logged
maris !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
i adore d way u write !!
pls update !!
thanx for d pm !

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ChocolateChick Goldie

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Problems? What problems are coming in their way Cry

Loved your update, narration and romance in this ff Clap

Tx for the pm Maris, you're a star!

Waiting for the next chapter...Embarrassed

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