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Do Dil.... Mil Rahe Hain. ..A new ff(updte pg 62) (Page 32)

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
g8 work...thx for the pm

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
mera dil bale bale kar raha hai!!!! DancingDancingDancing
Great job maris!!

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
great job Maris!!!!!Thumbs Up
Thumbs UpCannot wait until your next update!!!!!!!!!!
I'm eagerly waiting..........Big smile

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
Mesmerising Maris!!Day Dreaming.I could visualise Saanchi and Shravan together  in each other's arms vividly.HeartWow what a Scene!! Wished that plate had'nt  broken Unhappy.
Thanks for the pm and please update very very soon.Getting very impatient.

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Chapter  31

 
Shravan called on her cellphone on Tuesday morning,only to get a switched off reply.... The day before he had a sudden work at Deradun town, which kept him busy the whole day....Since Sunday he felt that even a single day cannot be passed if didn't talk to her...It wld be even better if he was able to see her daily... Such is the intensity of a Man newly in love…
 
Figuring out a plan, he thought that he wld be able to catch her before she left for school... This infused a new energy into him and enthusiastically he hopped downstairs, only to be stoppped suddenly in his tracks...
 
He saw  an eagerly  waiting Dadhi and Madhura, all set with pooja things, ready to leave for mandhir along with him... "Aap dono subah ithni jaldhi kahang jana hai? Koi  special day hai kya aaj?"...
 
"Bittu, yaad nahi hum phele kya kahag tha, if you had successfully organized Doon's events then we will offer special prayers to Bahgwan  Ram Ji… Ab tho thumne back to back two events  successfully manged kardhiya... So  Bahgwan thank karna chahiyena... chalo hamare saath mandhir"....said Dadhi.. "Mein,  ermm mein kaya karun vahan, mein thoh mandhir janewalah aadmi nahi hai.. Aapo patha hai nay eh ghar hi mera mandhir aur aap sab log toh mera bhagwan hai.. Aap dodno jayiye, mujhe office kuch zyada kaam hai, isiliye mein aaj jaldhi jana hai"...said Shravan deftly trying to avoid them..
 
 
Refusing his excuses, taking no for answer, both of them practically dragged him with them.. Mumbling that all his well laid plans get upset, Shravan had no choice but to go along with them… Reaching the mandhir, he put his foot down and said  "Lo aagaya, ab mujhe andhar nahi aana hai.. Aap dodno, jayiye, pooja kijiye, aarthi mein paat lijiye.. Jo bhi karna hai kijiye…. Bus mein yahan  inthezar  karunga, teek hai"…. Shaking their heads, thinking when this fellow will grow up they went inside the temple… Shravan, waiting outside tried once more Saachi's number, without any luck…
 
Saachi was inside that temple, with her mama, mami and nannu.. It was her parents death  anniversary, and she had come there to offer special prayers and do shardh for the departed souls..Every year, this day was a poignant one for her, reminding her of, what and how much she had lost in her life…She usually gave annadhan for poor and destitute  and rounded the morning with  bhajans at this mandhir… She and her relatives finished the pooja and started the aarthi...
 
Dadhi and Madhura saw some people conducting aarthi and also participated in it, intending to do pooja later..A CD of lata Mangeshkar's 'Thum Aasha vishwas hamare' song was flowing mellifluously thro' the speakers of the mandhir.. All of them were very intimately and intently involved with God; the sanctity felt in that atmosphere…
 
As soon as the aarthi was finished, mama, mami and naanu, helped Saachi in distributing the Prasad- the Annadhan for the poor and needy.. When it was over they left for their home leaving Saachi, to finish her bhajans…By this time dadhi and madhura had finished their pooja and were resting in the corridors…
 
Shravan who was waiting outside, cursing his luck,was thoroughly irritated..No contact with saachi and his dear ones were taking a long time to finish their poojas… Suddenly he heard a divine voice singing soulfully the song Gana shyama sundhara, from Amar Bhoopali, followed by a heart rendering of Tulsidas's Bhajans from Ram Charit Manas…
 
Like toddler running towards its mother, like an iron getting attracted to a magnet,Shravn jumped with joy and raced to the mandhir, stopping just behind Saachi, breathless, heaving and face filled with unexpected joy of seeing his beloved there…
 
 
The exceptional words of beauty, humility and exuberance in praise of the Lord evoked a sublime, endearing, most intense feeling in him..It was coming from her inner core with the sole motive of pouring out her soul….He didn't realize that it was a solemn feelings of not just a devotee, but an aspirant seeking the goal of devotion and love.. That of an Orphan pleading with God, to fulfill the role of her parents…
 
Dadhi and Madhura, who were listening with closed eyes to this heavenly music, were suddenly wide awake with Shravan's  hurried entry.."kya hogaya is ladke kho?..Andhar aanekeliye phele mana kardhiya, ab toh dowdkar aarahai.. koi bhoora khabar toh nahi"..they were wondering concernedly…
 
Saachi finishing her Bhajan turned around and around and almost bumped into him…With wide eyes and  instant  delight to see him  there, she asked, "shravan Ji aap  yahan kaise"….. "Ji…Who  mein aise hi; ermm just passing by, mmm thought I will thank God for all my success, so here Iam ..…Yep my thanks for all that has happened these past few weeks''..he said cooly without beating a miss…Madhura and Dadhi who were behind  him, were silently listening to all this and exchanged knowing but curious glances…" kuch toh mamla hai" they thought…"errr  hrehmmm" dadhi cleared her throat, bring the two to their senses…
 
 
Feeling  suddenly  embarassed, like a child caught in middle of its silent naughty act, Shravan  blushed and  introduced Saachi to his family and  explained a little  about her.." Beta very  nice song and  even nicer divine  singing...
"Kya khaaz baat hai aaj ya hamesha thum  mandhir aakar bhajans ghaathi ho?"…they  enquired…  Bending  to touch their feet to seek  blessings ,Saachi replied "Ji , today is  my parents death anniversary, so here  Iam paying respect to their  departed souls by prayers,  pooja and  annadhan"…" Jeete  raho beta, let God grant  all your wishes,  prayers  and always  make you happy..Sada sukhi raho, har khamyabhi  mein safal ho"...
 
With that they started towards the exit..A speechless Shravan, now  understood her inner soul seeking for fulfillment of her orphaned self…He thought that it was indeed destiny or rather Ramji who had brought them together in his presence to signal a new beginning in the next chapter of their lives...

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 10:06am | IP Logged
lovely update maris.
sachi is getting drawn to shravan.
can't wait to see them together.
thnx for the pm

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 10:10am | IP Logged
awesomeee

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Clapawesome  update!LOL loved how his Mom and Dadi were easedropping,  On  serious note mandir is nice place to meet people

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