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Do Dil.... Mil Rahe Hain. ..A new ff(updte pg 62) (Page 23)

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
You are a excellent story teller I like the way the story is taking shape
Hats of to you .Thumbs Up

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Maris!!!
 
Well done! After the description of Ranjan being so handsome I thought 'NOOOO, what about Shravan'? Wink But you made him gay and wrote him off the story just like that! It's nice to read how well you bring out the characters, the developments in the story and the moral part: Saachi just told him to **** off and face his problems. Now I hope it's just Shravan and Saachi Embarrassed
 
Haven't got anything for this story so far than a bigClap
You have amazing writing skills, keep it up and thank you very much for the pm. Can't wait for the next update Maris..Tongue


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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Awesome update, Maris.Clap
Your portrayal of Saachi as a woman of great inner strength is really  making me ride on a wave of euphoria.
Thank you for the pm too.Smile 

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 4:15am | IP Logged
wow !!ranjan .....gay  was a shocker !! good 2 no she rejected him !! apna shravan will get a chance now !!  thanx soooooo much for d update n pm !!

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged
whoa!!! awesome updat!!!after reading so much about Ranjan's appearance i was wondering what would happen next and him being gay was something so unexpected.....and after reading saachi's reply to his selfish proposition,i was like "way to go, saachi!!!"ClapClap love the character of saachi in ur story,maris...continue soon...thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 7:49am | IP Logged
I am so happy Saachi said 'no'!!!  This was a great twist Maris.  Keep going - we are all enjoying.

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Hahahaha he's gay!!! That part made me laugh so much! I was like whoa what!?!?!? Hahaha great job!

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