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Do Dil.... Mil Rahe Hain. ..A new ff(updte pg 62) (Page 21)

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Loved the update Maris ji

thanks for the pm!!!

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
It is 12 clock in the night. I am going through chapter 21 that means how interestingly you have written???Thumbs Upwell  written Thumbs Up

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Chapter  23

The next three days were the most significant ones in both their lives ...Shravan consciously aware of it, while Saachi was yet to realise the importance of it...Day in and day out he was there at the school.....sometimes discussing with her, sometimes meeting staff of other depts and some other times working with his own staff..

She saw him diligently going through each and every aspect of the task assigned to him... He climbed on trees and on walls, holding on to drain pipes just to get the right angles for his light fixtures and decorative pieces...He sat with her other staff and religiously noted down their inputs...Sunshine or chilly wind of this Autumn,didnt deter him from roaming around in the school, grabbing a bite whenever he could..A thorough professional he was; she saw him in a new light...
 
He saw her dedication to her work,her tireless energy and enthusiasm rubbing on to all others around her...Almost every staff he met had nothing but praises for her... A few years in the Doon, she was one of the most popular staff...The children,he saw were in awe of her, friendly with her and even idolised her.. A kind of medely of emotions they exhibited according to their ages...Never in his life he had seen or heard a music and dance teacher being the most favourite and popular among students of different classes...He saw a new facet of her personality.... His respect and regards for her grew leaps and bounds...
 
He heard her singing the songs she had composed for the ballet....Her melifluous voice was so divine.. he closed his eyes and let himself be carried away; far away into the deep space where everything was black and filled with vaccumn,except for the two of them and the soul stirring music and the heavenly voice....He saw her singing for the first time; a sight he wld always engrave deep in his mind.. Eyes open,sitting on chair, with students dancing around and watching them correcting their pose,her voice was drowning everything else...The rendition of raag Dharbari Kanada,( when Rapunzel sings to describe her separation from her parents) evoked a strange feeling of sadness,heart clenching emotion..Shravan felt as though she was reaching out to him, asking him to hold on to her tightely and never let go...He was lost in a different world never wanting to be back here...
 
For three days Shravan was in and out of his office...Though he had taken primary responsiblity of this project, he didnt forget his other commitments... He was also giving final  finishing touches to the IAS alumini party,scheduled right after Doon's annual day...At nights his thoughts and heart, were filled only with the sights and sounds of Saachi... A new feeling he cldnt pinpoint what it was; but very pleasing and soothing like a feather on his cheeks...
 
On the evening of that third day, a Saturday,Saachi's house received a call from the Mishras... their son Ranjan, with due permission wld like to meet Saachi next day at a coffee shop or at the famous Mussorrie's municipal gardens... It was decided with consensus that mama and mami will accompany  Saachi to the park and leave the young ones to meet after due introductions....That night Saachi slept a dreamless deep sleep, like a child without any care or worry about this troubled world....

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 7:34pm | IP Logged
ur narration skills, the beautiful words u use makes us enthralled n feel each n every scene u describe Maris....thats an amazing quality to deliver chapter after chapter. Along with Shravan i too enjoyed (imagined!!) Sachi's singing and her melliflous voice!!! thanx dear....

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
Wa Wa Kai writing hai ShabashClap 

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
awesome update!!!! loved your descriptions about the feelings shravan is going through about saachi...continue soon....thanks for the pm!!!

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Woow, well done Maris. I don't have anything but praise for your writking skills Wink It's a beautiful start of my morning, thanks to your dreamy narration Tongue

Tx for the pm and continueBig smile

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 3:00am | IP Logged
wow !! loved d description of their emotions !!
pls continue !!thanx soooooooo much for d update !!n d pm !

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