Baat Hamari Pakki Hai


Baat Hamari Pakki Hai
Baat Hamari Pakki Hai

Do Dil.... Mil Rahe Hain. ..A new ff(updte pg 62) (Page 17)

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nice update luv u

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 10:42am | IP Logged
awesome update

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
love the update plz contiueee 

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 1:45am | IP Logged
awesome update!!! shravan with the baby in his arms made a real pretty continue soon...

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Chapter 20
It was a cold and chilly autumn that dawned on  Tuesday.....Shravan after a hurried breakfast, dropped by his office, went thro' some papers, made notes and charted  out agendas for his friends and zoomed into Doon on his bike....
With a sunny and cheerful disposition, a stark contrast to the weather around him, Shravan was smiling in anticipation of meeting Saachi...
Yesterday he was everywhere, planning , sketching, reeling orders to his assistants... His staff always obliged him, the concerted effort resulted in a successful event well managed... He had constantly looked out for Saachi, from the corner of his eyes...Eventhough she was busy, she cld have not have missed him, roaming everywhere...He had kept a safe distance from her...  Once or twice she did stop to see whats going on....That brought smiles to his face and approval from Sham too...
Walking towards her class purposefully, armed with a ready excuse just to meet her,he bumped into someone....."Ugh... sorry, are you hurt"..." nahi, koi baat nahi.. you, new here young man"... asked Gopally. "Am Jaiswhal, ur annual day event manager"..." Am Gopldas Yadav , the math prof"....After the initial exchanges and small talk, they went their way...
Shravan,not finding Saachi in her class, enquired at the staff room and found the reason for her half a day off...A cold chill filled his belly...he felt an inexplicable uneasiness in his heart.. Shrugging himself and trying  to hide his disappoinment,he immersed in his work....
Gopally, smiling and whistling softly, knew the reason  for Saachi's absence,as he had overheard her asking for permission.. well, he thought, things seem to move fast.. need to go to Delhi next week and chalk out the next stage of programme... probably after the annual day...lets see..mmm..
Meanwhile at Saachi's house, the whole atmosphere was one of charged excitement and anxiety... The house was spruced  up clean,decked with flowers and filled with aromas of the kitchen and the soft tunes of instrumental bhajans and fragrant smell of agarbathis emanating from the puja room.. All were eagerly waiting for this wonderful Mishra family,lavishly praised by Naana and Naani ji...
Saachi, dressed simply, sitting with her fingers crossed, was like a yogi... Nothing much in it for her.. afterall this was one more bride seeing..All her initial apprehensions,goose bumps, butterflies in stomach were things of the past...She had become so immune to her  previous rejections, these days this kind of ritual was only a minor pinprick...She was now mature enough to handle it and take things in her stride... 
The Mishras arrived sans their son Ranjan... His parents, sister and another relative were all in attendance, except him...After the initial shock and disappoinment, maama and maami, enquired abt this.."Ji plz hume maaf kijiye.. kya hai ki Ranjan ko ek bahut important call aaya office se..urgently aaj subhah Delhi jana pada.. he cld refuse or postpone it..We feel embaressed to be here without him.. but agar hum nahi aaya toh yeh abshagun hoga na .. So we decided to go ahead and come here"..said his father..." behenji,plz aap galat math sochiye..first we will see Saachi and am pretty sure Ranjan will like our approval and see her later on"..said the mother to mammi...
After the initial pleasentaries and small talk, Saachi was welcomed into the room.. "baito, beta hamare pass... dont feel shy.. there is no need for any formalities.. thumare bahren mein bahut suna..ithni kubsoorthi, hum pehele nahi dehka.. our Ranjan is very lucky"...said the mother....Indeed Saachi was already making a very big impression on them, without even opening her mouth...She was disappointed that the boy didnt make it.. how was she going to meet him and ask and clarify her doubts before anything concretised...
As if reading her mind the father said " Inder ji agar aapko ethiraaz nahi hai toh, ek baat poochun...My son wants to meet her later casually either at the coffe shop or park, either with your permission or in your presence.. will you oblige him"...
"Jaan jaye par lachan na jaye.. kyun nahi Mishra ji...aaj kal, zamana toh bahut badal gaya..  we also need to move along with the change... ladka aur ladki kho ek dusrese milna chahiye, woh bhi akele mein.. we are modern in our outlook, koi problem nahi haiWinkLOL.. wherever and whever your son wants to meet our Saachi, we will gladly send her"Tongue.....Nanni hits sixers after sixers, a full six sixers in an overROFLClap...
All except the Mishras, were spellbound and speechless.. Naana and Inder open mouthed, Mammi, her son and daughter in law,wide eyed, shreya and sharmilla  in disbelief, Rajeev jiju shocked.....
Saachi stoically watched this great drama enacted before her... She knew in her hearts of heart Naani always had a soft corner for her.. Rough  on the outside she was all honey and sweet inside..It was not in her nature to hurt anybody wantedly.... Her words sometimes spewed venom but it was harmless and Saachi knew that deep inside Naani cared for this orphan....
So it was decided that Ranjan Mishra will meet Saachi at a later date  and place and  at a time convenient to both...After Mishra's exit, the house was filled with cacophony of sounds; discussions abt the family, its members, naani's self goalLOL etc..etc... 
While saachi got ready for school, two people were eyeing the whole scenario differently...
Sharmilla, seeing the wealth and upbreeding of the Mishras, was openly jealous;..
Rajeev, noting the absence of Ranjan, was glad, as it gave him a breather..
Saachi, unaware of these thoughts and aware that she was getting late to school, hurriedly wished all and left for school......  

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Loved d update. Do cont soon.

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
pls pls pls continue!!

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