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Do Dil.... Mil Rahe Hain. ..A new ff(updte pg 62) (Page 16)

maris08 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
Chapter 19
Sunday saw the arrival of Saachi's sister, Sharmila and her husband Rajeev from Delhi....Rajeev an army man had quit from  The Service and wanted to search for a suitable job in and around Mussorrie...After the initial greetings  and pleasentaries, Shramila's biting tongue cldnt help commenting.."toh tues saachi's ladki dekhna is going to happen.. na kabhar na chitti na phone... aap sab bhoolgaye, we are alive and kicking and no maryadha for this damadh?.... strange, people only see the wealth and forget their relations."..She spewed acid, hurting and dampening everyones spirits....Naana ji and naani ji had to cool her and after much cajoling and pleading she became calm....
" jaan jaye par lachan na jaa"..said naani to her when they were alone..."beta bhurra math maano... the sooner Saachi gets married and goes out of this house, the better it will be for Shreya and you; for afterall you are my real granddaughters  na'..somewhat happy and pleased by this comment Sharmila grudgingly agreed to extend their  support  and help to Saachi...
Saachi, who overheard this felt sad; but more importantly she was very uncomfortable to be under the same roof as her jiju...It was a fact that given any little chance Rajeev never misses to leer and ogle at she needed to be extra careful and diplomatic in handling him... Poor saachi....
The whole family then sat down together and discussed the prepations and Saachi's attire for tuesday... The house was filled with gay and laughter, reflecting the mood of its inhabitants....
Sunday night saw Shravan playing with his nephew Apurva in his room...Shravan was narrating the toddler the fairy tale of Rapunzel.... Entered Nidhi and Neetha, watching this heart warming sight of a  baby being huddled closely, gently rocked by Man,( still a child in their eyes) telling  a strange story.. A tale totally beyond its understanding, but the way it was said, Apurva, enjoyed it so much and acknowkledged it with his typical baby sounds and gestures....
It was a sight any photographer wld have clicked constantly, any artist wld have painted on the canvass, any mother wld have always etched it in her memory...
Nidhi's eyes were on her baby,watching it with pride and love... Neetha's eyes were on Shravan, watching him with wonder and new thoughts...
Ever since Apurva's arrival, Nidhi's attention and focus was always on him...
A natural phenomena which every new mother has...Even though she was treating Shravan as her own child all these yrs,her late pregnancy and delivery had shifted her affection towards her own... A dilution of love that was expected in such a joint family system...
Neetha, on the other hand who was always busy with her work,slowly got attracted to the baby... It kindled her motherly affection and love, a feeling new to her...So it was natural that she started treating Shravan as her child and showered him with her motherliness...
Indeed Shravan was triply blessed, to have such motherly affections bestowed on him...Dadhi, Nidhi and Neetha ;apart from his own mother....
" yeh kya hai shravan , Rapunzel fairy tale to a 6 month old...where and when did you learn it?..Even during your study yrs you never believed in fairy tales? why this sudden interest? and how can you narrate it so beautifully?"asked Nidhi.. with Neetha nodding her head in acknowledgement..." kuch toh hai didi...apna shravanko  kuch hogaya.. Do Theen din se lunch bhi miss karraha hai, patha hai'...."mmmm, baata, kya chakkkar kya hai"...
Shravan just smiled and said that the was nothing in this matter... its just that Doon school Ann Day and as he had to event manage it, he must be aware of their programmes...
" okay, we believe this  excuse now .... but we'll see how things shape up in future"..saying this Nidhi smilingly kissed his forehead goodnight and took the baby in her arms..Neetha just affectionately patted his head and followed in suit..
Shravan settled down for the night....thinking, why for the first time this fairy tale has affected me... is it the tale or the teller...slowly he closed his eyes and slept a dreamful sleep.......

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Davi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 12:07am | IP Logged
As always an absolutely awesome update. I can just pic d scene with shravan and a baby. He'll make a really good dad. So evil jiju makes an appearance. Thanx 4 pm nd waiting for ur next update

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kchitra77 Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 12:35am | IP Logged
so cute Maris...the scene with baby n Shravan.....i had a nostalgic feeling...same happened with my son when he was small with his dad narrating some story n he was cooing....thanx. So u r bringing another character ...Sachi here seems to be attacked from all sides ...only one being a loving one that of Shravan!!  plz continue...gr8 story so far.

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ChocolateChick Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Beautiful Maris! So sweet written about the motherly feelings Nidhi and Neeta have, especially Neeta. This is another view and I like itBig smile 
Thanks for PM, and eagerly waiting for the next updateWink

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..-Niru-.. Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 4:11am | IP Logged
wow !!!loved d way u described d scene between shravan n his bhaabhis !!
waiting for ur next update !!
thanx sooo much for d pm !!

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momma1128 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
ewww, a stalker and jiju - double creepy!

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nycsweetie IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 10:42am | IP Logged
awesome update

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sash10 Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
love the update plz contiueee 

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