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Do Dil.... Mil Rahe Hain. ..A new ff(updte pg 62) (Page 11)

..-Niru-.. Goldie

Joined: 06 October 2010
Posts: 1460

Posted: 13 January 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
maris !!
i eagerly wait for d next update which turns out 2 be even better than d best !!
love them all !!
thanx for d pm
n pls continue !!

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ChocolateChick Goldie

Joined: 13 September 2010
Posts: 1437

Posted: 13 January 2011 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Maris, Maris, everytime you amaze us with your beautiful chapters, well written and so sweet!! Shravan is so mesmerized after seeing Saachi that he forgot his bike!! Typical a thing he would do! Also talking with his conscience LOL, I already see him walking like that and mumbling to himself!

And Saachi and her Rapunzel sweet Tongue I have to get used to Shravan calling her Saachi-ji LOL

Both your characters are the ones we're familiar with from the serials, but they're yet so very different. Shravan is already responsible and knows how to handle his business, while Saachi is passionate about dancing. I lik this very much Tongue Shravan also doesn't go around like a puppy after some other girl, no he's completely from the very start intrigued by Saachi. 

Keep entertaining us Maris, thanks for the PM and can't wait to read the next chapters.

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sangeeta9 Goldie

Joined: 05 November 2010
Posts: 1611

Posted: 13 January 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged
very nice update maris.. shravan as hanuman with a tail???ROFL

and shravan mumbling to himself, lo i can imagine that.. 

please update soon...

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kchitra77 Goldie

Joined: 18 August 2010
Posts: 1296

Posted: 13 January 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Sheila u wrote whatever i wanted to say......good no need to double postLOL
But Maris u excel everytime from the prev chapters....i absolutely love both Sachi n Shravan in ur FF....God in Anki's FF...anthar aathma in urs?? nice touch!! yea reminded me of that Rapunzel performance they lovely. thanx for the PM....keep going

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ash91 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 18 April 2010
Posts: 8970

Posted: 13 January 2011 at 8:53am | IP Logged
awesome update Maris!!!! i was so unhappy after today's episode and ur updates cheered me most of the ppl here, the narration of the fairy tale reminded me of SaaVan's performance...also loved the concept of the Indianised version of the fairy tale....shravan's  mumblings were too funny...he seems to be totally besotted by saachi...eagerly waiting for ur next update...thanks for the pm!!!

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shobrakapooor IF-Rockerz

Joined: 29 November 2010
Posts: 6958

Posted: 13 January 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
maris i juz have one suggestion abt ur ff u wrote this rapunzel story on the basis of shravan and sanchi performance in inbdj rite so ma suggestion is dat when shravan was dreamin himself of the prince and sanchi as princess u can just paste their photos of inbdj performance then this will add more colour 2 ur story and our suggestion u can reveal the secret guy of this story as soon as possible cz if u extend it for too long the readers would fynd it borin its juz ma suggestion 4 u improve more keep rockin story goes well till now and one more suggestion u can add more chapters on holidays then it will be gud can u?

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sash10 Goldie

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 10:24am | IP Logged
lovely, breathtakinggggg update just love itttWinkLOL

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nycsweetie IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 08 March 2008
Posts: 11383

Posted: 13 January 2011 at 6:10pm | IP Logged
awesome update....thx for the pm

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