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SS - Tere Khusboo Mein Base Khat- EPILOGUE Pg 13 (Page 7)

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
dusht Saaz...yeh to shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho gaya....LOL...but really luvved it......and ha next 1 should b twice of it....samjhi...LOL

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 12:59am | IP Logged
Awww...Saaz...beautifully put dear..loved Khanaks advice to Sunil and indirectly to Madzs too...yes the best way to start is from the beginning again....loved that alot..
 
And you got me all emotional again with Madhvi and what she feels and is going throughCry and those Stanza's....that you used .............brilliant...brings to the fore her feelings brilliantly..Cry.ClapClapClap
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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 2:15am | IP Logged
CLASSY indeed!n want Shanakism aso..
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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Awww...& .beautifully written saaaz and bring all emodion & fillings of sunil with madhvi..... khanak sunil conversation looking natural..brillant job..well doneClap


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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Liked the fact that Sunil understood what had gone wrong and where.

Khanak: kabhi kabhi aada humein waha se shuru karna chahiye jahan se shuruwat huyi'.ek choti si shuruwat bhi baat ko doobara aage badhati hai'phir chahe woh..  --->Awesome possum! Clap
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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:27am | IP Logged
wow- i think thats my new favourite word seem to use it all the time especially on this forum but kya kare you all write amazingly well.
 
as always loved it such a good continuation of the first two parts.
loved this line
Khanak: Kya? Aada, mujhe vishwas nahi hota ki aap mummyji ko intezaar karvaate.. LOLLOL
 
Lol love the way Khanak is trying to reunite them. make them fall back in love again in this ff too
 
Great to see that Sunil aknowledges the fact he couldn't give mads time before as they so say its hard on any relationship when you dont get to see each other- shows that this is where the distance of their relationship may have started from.
 
And Mads internal turmoil great
 
wow what lines again, kaha se lete ho Clap
 
Cant wait for the next part x
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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snehapatro

very cute Mads chupke se sab baate khanak-sunil convo sunrahi thi.....
haha even mujhe viswas nahi hua like khanak that sunil Mads ko intezaar karvatha tha.....so sweet of Sunil....LOL....aur Madhavi kuch jyaada hi loving hai yaar credit goes to saaz......LOL
amazing khanak-sunil convo Saaz Loved it........ClapClap
abh part 4 ke liye waiting..............Big smile


Sneha...sweetie got your PM...thanks so much nahin yaar...have not yet figured out the next part....hopefully by Monday morning???? THANKS always for your comments
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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Ok Saazy am here!

so I read it...it is really cute the way Sunil was describing. but im mad at him like Madhavi...he should've realized it and should've talked to her.

anyways I hope madhavi doesn't take their convo wrongly....

looking forward to see what is in store for us...

continue soon
rooj

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