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SS - Tere Khusboo Mein Base Khat- EPILOGUE Pg 13 (Page 4)

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
Part2 -haha mads playing game with letters was tooo funny.....i loved the flashback glad that Rasmalai gave time to Kutkut aur both meeting at chat place and  Mads instead of shopping like she does in the show flashback mai kuch jyada hi betaab hai.....LOL
the love story of mads-sunil and their convo toooo gudddddd...
Rasmalai ko rasmalai khane ka mann kar raha hai.....so sweet.....
asusual ghazal is rocking....saaz ur ss is rocking...ClapClapClap
now im waiting for part3.........Smile


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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
Gosh! Fantastic display of emotions...
 
Really really loved it. I never thought I would like ..forget loev..anything that is not Shanak on this forum.....
 
Its superb.....Please do continue!

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
wow Saaz...i m really amazed 2 read this...bohot hi romantic hai...isi liye main kahu how our shaan is so romantic Wink

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snehapatro

Part2 -haha mads playing game with letters was tooo funny.....i loved the flashback glad that Rasmalai gave time to Kutkut aur both meeting at chat place and  Mads instead of shopping like she does in the show flashback mai kuch jyada hi betaab hai.....LOL
the love story of mads-sunil and their convo toooo gudddddd...
Rasmalai ko rasmalai khane ka mann kar raha hai.....so sweet.....
asusual ghazal is rocking....saaz ur ss is rocking...ClapClapClap
now im waiting for part3.........Smile



Thanks Sneha....as always...first to comment...becos of torment...
you know I completely forgot the shopping angle...I just wanted to concentrate on the whole 'modelling job' angle...maybe shopping ka angle nxt time...Wink
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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:48am | IP Logged

Wow saaz this was really really good, by the way thanks for the pm
Aww Sunil doing suduko I love them
Seriously love the confusion mads is going through and te guessing te chiti game genius how sweet sounds like something a girl may have done in thy zamaana as there was no mobiles/ txts emails.

Loved there whole chaat meeting i was going to sunil doesn't seem like a person who will turn up late lol

I like the way you incorporated mads past career acting/ modelling but gave it up for sunils sake as his mum I'd conservative.

And mads lines in the end was supberb

Xxxxx can't wait for the next part
Sorry for any mistakes Am reading this on my way to work n it's like 7am here and I slept at 3 lol so don't know if whatever I've written makes sense

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Lovely !! U have converyed the emotions soo well...
So the letter indeed said 6:30 !! LOL !! Madhavi came half an hour early !!

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 2:06am | IP Logged
Saaz darling once again brilliant writing dear...loved the blend of past and present....loved her smiling knowin Khank brings Sunil happiness..loved the letter game cute..but what had me emotional was Madzs..and her reminesing and the Stanza in the end...perfect really...was perfect for all that you described....ClapClapClap That stanza said it all.

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 4:24am | IP Logged
@ SAAAZ  both part was brilliant   and imotian between sunil and madhvi are look like  very natural and fantastic  and some line are amaezing  like "bahut man kar raha hai'of course tumne yeh nahin likha tha ki tum itni soondar lagne walli ho
Mad:  Wrong!! Maine 6:00 kaha tha aur yeh bhi kaha tha ki late mat hona..aur s oondar tho main roj lagti hoon isme likhne ki kya baat hai'(smiling a little) .
you  are a great writer and i am waiting next part.Clap

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