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SS - Tere Khusboo Mein Base Khat- EPILOGUE Pg 13 (Page 17)

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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
the epilogue is excellent dear........
u are superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrb writer..........
just loved to read it..........

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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 3:02am | IP Logged
awww...thanks re adeela....

i do hope the CVs explore this relationship and romance in this track...Sunil and Madhavi are potrayed by such fabulous actors it would be a waste to not see them in their full potential
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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
I am starting to read this one. I don't know how I missed this!!Angry My bad!! Tongue
 
But the title alone is ek dum dhaansu!! Shall get back!!Smile
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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Oh my God saaaz!!ClapClapClap
 
Part I
 
Sigh bahut bhaari bharkam bhaasha hain. Took my time to read teh poetic stuff and understand it. Depth is the only explanation or adjective I could come up with!! beautiful saaaz. Lovely.. mind blowing. Yes I too feel that sometimes love is lost after a few years of marriage has passed and it needs to be revived.. Guess that's why they go on a second honeymoon!!Big smile beautifully written dialogues so suitable to Kuttkutt and Raqsmalai. Can picture Sunavi clearly.
 
Part II
 
Aahh.. yaadein... golden memories.. always stashed away for one to remember and then... sigh..
 
those 3-4 lines in the end..
 
yaadon ke panno mein
ek haseen yaad hain tumhaari
jiski khushboo ki mehek se
zindagi ho jaati hain gulaabi...
 
beautiful..
 
brought tears to my eyes too.. madz in tears!! very well written...ClapClapClap
 
Part III
 
Teen shabd, kitne simple hain but ufff.. so difficult to say them out loud.  And even more difficult after you have said them to someone and keep reassuring them.. OOoooh saaaz.. woh dhai akshar prem ke!!
 
Lovely khanka and adaa moments. So tender and understanding. Sigh Madz!!
 
Part  IVA
 
Oooh la la ShaNak promise!! *Swoooon* Main I am like a blushing gubbaara!!Blushing So sweet. And SunAvi so mature. Can feel the urge from both sides their love, hesitancy.. yes.. love certainly is alive in between them... and to end it a la typical Khanak shy style mein peck!! Embarrassed loved it!!ClapClap
 
Part IV B
 
Awww SunAvi loved it.. ClapClapClapClapClapClap Ideal and well dealt the whole situation!! The end is how the track should have been...Smile
 
 Not like the stupid brushing under the carpet, and the viewers will derive from the situation type of ending!!OuchAngry
 
Epilogue
 
Mwaaaaa loved loved loved it!!!! Superb!!! Chaat ke kya kehne!! Loved this prem bhare prem patra!!
 
arz kiya hain aap ke liye
 
Hum ne khat mein likh diya
Aur tumhaare dil ne padh liya
Humaare dil aur jaan ne
Pesh kiye tumhaare liye
 
Yeh Dhai akshar prem ke
 
 
loved it saaaz!! Beautiful.
 
Ooops sorry for the double post. Did not realise that none had posted after me! My bad. forgive me!Tongue
 
 


Edited by jparker - 26 February 2011 at 9:39am
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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
MY GOSH!! Jesss....

your effusive praise did me in....

THank you so much, really appreciate...loved that you loved it...

If not anything shall always be thankful to Golden RBO for giving us such characters that created a place in my heart who inspired me to write this SS...my first ever...

and thank you again for liking what I wrote ... 

when you have a chance read Banwra Mann..its a shanak SS so promise itna bhaari bharkam nahin haiLOL

love and thanks
Saaz

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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by saaaz

MY GOSH!! Jesss....

your effusive praise did me in....

THank you so much, really appreciate...loved that you loved it...

If not anything shall always be thankful to Golden RBO for giving us such characters that created a place in my heart who inspired me to write this SS...my first ever...

and thank you again for liking what I wrote ... 

when you have a chance read Banwra Mann..its a shanak SS so promise itna bhaari bharkam nahin haiLOL

love and thanks
Saaz
aga thank you kashaala?! maitreen na maajhi!! Well I for sure will read your other FF in this week and respond. Please dabba thoda rikaami kar na ga!!Wink

Edited by jparker - 26 February 2011 at 12:28pm
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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
@Jess...me kele ga khaali majha inbox....aani patkan 20 PMs zhaala...sangoo nakos...inbox cha vaat jhaala aahe...LOL

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