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SS - Tere Khusboo Mein Base Khat- EPILOGUE Pg 13 (Page 15)

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Saaz

Brilliant!


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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 9:05am | IP Logged
OH.....I love itClapStar.....I absulutely loved!!Big smileBig smile......What an awesome family, you write them so well SaazClap....Kash aisa show mein bhi hoon.....
 
What wrong with the CVs....Don't they know they have a goldmine with this family..... 

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 9:06am | IP Logged
OMG!! @saaz
 
I felt the whole scene in my eyes and mind e to be honest..
This is excellent keep it up...

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Saaz ..that was awesome ..couldnot be a better way to wind up the story ..Glad you kept all of them and so beautifully  done...
 
Just brought a smile to my face y the letter reading the way it was addressed to priye beti and all the childrens reactions:)

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Itna wowwww epilogue likhne ke baad...................u pm me now !!!!
not good saaaz....not good !!!

it was brilliant.......loved every bit of it..........
loved Shaan's "bhajjiwaala bana diya hai mujhe" and him blowing kiss to her when she reads.....
loved Khanak's - excus me.....mera khat hai....
Akki's and khushboo's in character cuteness and Sunil's letter.......this family has something with letters............lol.........
Superb !!!

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
Dear Saaz!!
 
What can I say? I'm so happy that I got to read this after my long break..I was floundering not knowing what to do...!!
 
And no one word or string of words can say what I feel about this short but very sweeeeet rendering from your part!! Well the least of them is............ its just Brilliant!!!
 
First of all Kudos to you for taking up this topic and trying to put a decent conclusion to it!! It seemed rather odd that the CVs had brought up such a serious track and just ignored it at the end!!
 
Secondly, the way you have gone deep and dug up the emotions of Sunil and Mads and at least given us a glimpse of what goes on there was awesome and sooo real that I could see and feel it all...you have a way with words my dear!!
 
Third, by involving Shanak and making them an integrel part of the solution was a stroke of genius..the mark of a great story teller!
 
Thankyou so much for sticking around and enriching this forum with your words...please, please do continue. Would love to read more and be stimulated in a positive way!:) again...
 
Simi

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
@Simiv - Great to see you here Smile....Was thinking about you FFs just the other day....Please continue, would love to read moreBig smile....

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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
Saaz: WOW!!
saturday night, made a warm cup of cocoa, and read your complete Tere Khusboo Mein Base Khat... and you know me, I imagine each and every scene with the background score, clothes, etc etc...

I have never read anything like this before, so simple yet so beautifully layered...
seriously I have no words to describe how amazingly you have written this piece which shows that love is not bound by age... and you don't need to gift fancy expensive things to show your love... you don't need to be poet or a shaiyar to express your love...

once again Standing Ovation... seems like golden RBO is your passion as much as writing... Clap

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