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SS - Tere Khusboo Mein Base Khat- EPILOGUE Pg 13 (Page 11)

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 4:28am | IP Logged
wow saaz what a concluding part, im seriously satisfied lol but knowing there's more with the epilog just makes me even more happy.
kya kahoon it was fab, loved the final stand off btw mads and sunil never seen mads soo animated, and i loved her point thats there's not always a solution sometimes just by talking things through helps- SO RIGHT.Smile
I know this one wasn't based on shanak but haiiiiiii shaan kisses Khanak's pic in his wallet- lol back to sunil and mads. Also loved the fact sunil showed he felt guilty and bad for the sacrifice mads made but what i loved more is that mads didnt keep throwing this in his face during the convo which she easily could have.Smile
and finally sunils khaat, awww now we know where our shaantanu gets it fromWink
Loved it cant wait for future ff's/ss's

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-Deepali- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 5:45am | IP Logged
saaz dear...awesome and emotional update and beautiful endingClap
A beautiful hug for you for this amazing part..Hug
and last pera was awesome....Star
She looks at him with tears in her eyes, realizes she cant see him properly through her tears..runs towards him'he is just few steps away'hugs and falls on his chest 'and whispers Haan'Haan'haan'. He hugs her back and asks ..(holds out the brown envelope from the dresser) 
you are a fantastic and genious writer..all emotions are their right placeClap
please give your small epilogue as soon we are waitingLOL

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destinylove IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
saaz seriously u have thought of an unexplored relationship(madhvi-sunil) the divorce threat  track which ended improperly  
Very good job dear..now if possible please write full ShaNak ones...

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-SYS- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Emotional and brilliant conversation between Madz and Sunil.Hit all the right notes.Liked how you added the dimension of Sunil's guilt at Madhavi's sacrifice being a major factor in making him draw away from her and keeping himself busy with work.

I loved the scene in the backseat!! Brilliant how you showed the contrast between Khushboo and Khanak and how Shaan realizes that and kisses his wife's picture because he is so grateful for someone like her being in his life.Someone who cares for his family's happiness as well as his.

Lastly, after all the pages full of effusive praises for your writing you still need to ask about the epilogue?Give it to us!

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rooj-i IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged

Kya baat hai! I loved it how you have explored the situation so well! I mean generally divorce happens due to one feeling suffocation or something like Madhavi and sunil felt...

you have handled the situation well. finally they talked...Thank God for that!

I felt both their pain...

Great SS Saazy-Smaazy!

I loved the little Shaan touch. that was cute...

Ok you shud write another OS or SS on Shanak now...lolLOL


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saaaz IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged
thanks guys Hug

you are the best...
saaaz IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
thanks adventure gurl..appreciate it!! Smile

Guys, does anyone know if snehapatro is back?
-Manita- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 3:33pm | IP Logged
OMG......saaazLOL..............am still laughing at your tormentor commentLOL........

no you won't have to be one.......I read this final part a while ago and was about to comment when I saw that avatarLOL.........omg.....still laughing......

anyways, coming to point......this final part was icing on the cake that you had baked previously......

loved Sunil and Madzy discussing their feelings......behaviour and expectations......
could understand Sunil's POV..........so clearly you have written that it makes you feel for the character....
like I wrote previously....they had not got their due on the show....thanks for making it up here......
and Shaan kissing Khanak's photograph was so Awwww !! nice touch......less is more !!

the whole SS was a treat for someone who wants to read QUALITY !!
( omg....caps +bold = am I shouting??......I guess, yes i amLOL)

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