SS - Tere Khusboo Mein Base Khat- EPILOGUE Pg 13 - Page 5

OK finished part 2

Edited by -Saira- - 13 years ago

totally loved it... and every scene you wrote was like so true to real life but still had the typical Madhavi Sunil touch...  I was playing the song in my mind while reading it... and the FB awesome...

Yaar tum kyo nahi ban jaathi CV??😉...

Originally posted by: rooj-i

OK finished part 2

so I didn't like it when Sunil asked her to stop her work...sorry am an independent type of person...

however I respected the fact that she did for him and their love. It is really nice to see that both our love-birds fight like that, the cute nok jhok...

there is one thing I noticed: their romance is like Shanak...is that what you were trying to show? that Shanak are a copy of our Mads and Sunil?

if yes then it worked with me!

Good Job Saaz!!!

i really liked it! it's different and I like the fact that this madhavi is shown to go over her past like Sunil did in the show

loved their letter game.

@Rafia'Thanks so much for your detailed comment'I really enjoyed your observations'actually if you notice I am trying to say that Sunil never even asked him mom 'he just assumes'and that used to be the case back in the day'isn't it?? Thanks again'😛

@Krishna'my lady in pink'trust you to pick on all the right emotions, thanks dear 😃

@ Deepali'Haye'mere dialogues tumhe bha gaye'aww I am a huge dialogue fan myself'so this comment was so cool..thanks..😃

 @SYS: thank you ..yes, I was extremely upset when they dropped it'in fact what riled me up even more was the line Shaan says when his father tells him they are not divorcing''yeh sab sam ke wajah se'who meri lucky charm hai''.man they killed the divorce story with that😡'CVs owe us so much'details of the ghazal are on the first page dearie

@ Wooster..screenplay!!!???'aap mera mazaak uda rahe ho na???😉

@zenn..,'idea to vaise emerged becos of my anger towards the CVs'... and tera OS ka next part kabhi release ho raha hai??😛

@Rooj jee'haye haye'2 time comments'haila'oh sweetie, mads giving up her job'this is 35 years ago'women gave up a lot to make it easier for the next generations'how far we have come'havn't we??..thanks so much for your comment esp post torment...😆😆...love you for that..😆

Actually I tried not so much shanak love but more of incorporating some of Shaan in both of them'romance from father, impulses from mother'.

 @Saira'like I said details of the ghazal on first page'one of my favorites'Do read part 2'you may want to hug Madhavi'😃

@Anu'thanks so much..yes the ghazal plays in my head when I write'and I am glad that's what happens when you read'becos that is one of the desired effect'thanks 😛..And spot on the 'like father like son'

@Vandoo @Souma @Gaayu @Aditee'🤗

Edited by saaaz - 13 years ago

Edited by saaaz - 13 years ago

Brilliant Saaz... loveeed loveeed it❤️

very cute Mads chupke se sab baate khanak-sunil convo sunrahi thi.....
haha even mujhe viswas nahi hua like khanak that sunil Mads ko intezaar karvatha tha.....so sweet of Sunil....😆....aur Madhavi kuch jyaada hi loving hai yaar credit goes to saaz......😆
amazing khanak-sunil convo Saaz Loved it........👏👏
abh part 4 ke liye waiting..............😃
Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago

dusht Saaz...yeh to shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho gaya....😆...but really luvved it......and ha next 1 should b twice of it....samjhi...😆

Awww...Saaz...beautifully put dear..loved Khanaks advice to Sunil and indirectly to Madzs too...yes the best way to start is from the beginning again....loved that alot..