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Poem: An ode to Jasoos Jaiswal

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
An ode to Jasoos Jaiswal

Jasoos Piya Jaiswal
Is up and about
My hottie Abhay Raichand,
You better watch out!

For when Jasoos Jaiswal
Is on the watch
She's a regular Uncle Podger
Expect some hotch-potch!

She'll use the internet
For she's a girl of today
But instead of Google
She'll Loogle away!

Loogle, I tell you!
Have you ever heard of it?
Me neither! But I googled it
And really, it exists!

And before you go on
With Loogling Nosferatu
You might consider this
You have a secret too.

How would you like it?
If Abhay went around
Telling tales of your daddy
To everyone in town!

Please Jasoos Jaiswal
Use that pea-sized brain
Don't insult our sensibilities
Don't invite our disdain!

Oh my dear Jasoos Jaiswal
I wish you would
Put your time to better use
And do as you should

Go to class, study,
And get good grades
And if Abhay asks you out
Go out on a date!

And if he doesn't
Don't sulk and pout
Find a way to get your man
There's more than one route!

The ways to a man's heart
Are many, my dear!
And none of them involve
Invading his sphere.

You can coax and love
And trust and give
You might even try
Letting him live!

True love, dearest Piya
Is about selflessness
Its about giving all you have
Not knowing what's best.

You build houses of dreams
And hope for the best
If those dreams fall apart
You rebuild, with zest!

My dear Jasoos Jaiswal
He's yours for the taking
Open up your heart
He's yours! Asleep or waking!

But spare us the jasoosi
Its beneath you, you know it
Just be there for him
If you really love him, show it!


NB: Uncle Podger, for those who don't know, is a character from a book called "Three men in a boat" by Jerome.K.Jerome.


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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
awsome poem yaar!!!!! loved the google loogle stanza..ROFL
actually loved the whole poem dear Clap...full of humor..LOL
btw good you mentioned who is uncle podger...i had never heard of him..
you should write more...Thumbs Up

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
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Sorry for being late,
Hey Cool title!..Jasoos Jaiswal LOL
Loved your compilation totally, awesome rhythmic content Thumbs Up
Again I could hear the foot taps crystal clear,
Piya is getting real nasty, hell bent on discovering the truth,hate her like thisAngry
Bichara Abhay LOL
Good work Smile

Loogle ROFL



Edited by cutemug - 07 January 2011 at 10:13am

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 12:30am | IP Logged
hey... i luved the poem...
specially the loogle part!!!
awesome!!

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 12:38am | IP Logged
Nice poem.
Modern version of "ode to the west wind".

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 2:59am | IP Logged
LOLLOL the google bit LOLLOL
nice carry on making m  ore poems Hug

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its extremely cute and funny !!! 
Well done dude !! =D

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