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mil gaye hum tum-(sajan/mayur FF) UPD. PAGE 13 (Page 3)

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
nice concept dear..pls continue soon....................

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Sound interesting.
Do continue soon & pls add me in pm list.

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 8:45pm | IP Logged
Beautiful start do continue soon

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
Loved the CS and story plot..
M always in for sajan n mjht ff..
So add me in pm list..
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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged
OHK GUYZZZ I AM FINALLY ON WITH MAH FIRST PART......I HOPE U ALL LIKE IT......


PART 1: (MJHT S3) "ACTION"
(SINCE IT IS A PICTURE TYPE SOMEONE IS NARRATING THE STORY LET US TAKE IT IN THE VOICE OF RANBEER KAPOOR)

LOCATION:MUMBAI
(AS THE CAMERA SHOWING ALL THE PLACES OF MUMBAI THE NARRATOR IS NARRATING)

NARRATOR: MUMBAI.....SAPNO KA SHEHAR HAI......YAHA LAKHO LOG AATE HAI APNE SAPNE POORE KARNE KE LIYE....UNHE 
JEENE KE LIYE....AUR JO EK BAAR YAHAN AATA HAI WOH BAS YAHI KA HO JAATA HAI AUR UMNE SE EK HAIN YEH JANAB JO MUMBAI SIRF 3 MAHINE PEHLE AAYE HAI...APNE LIYE NHI APNI MAA KE LIYE YEH HAI KOI AUR NHI MAYANK SHARMA......

SCENE: SOME ONE IS SLEEPING IN THE BED HIS FACE IS NOT SHOWN HIS ALARM IS CONTINOUSLY RINGING ...HE IS CONTINOUSLY SWITCHING IT OFF...SUDDENLY HIS PHONE RANG........."TRING TRING TRING TRING"
GUY: AB ITNI SUBAH KAUN PHONE KAR RAHA HAI...........(HE SEE HIS PHONE TO FIND OUT THE CALLER N AFTER SEEING IT)
OMG. MAYANK BETA AB TOH TU GAYA...(HIS FACE IS SHOWN HE IS NONE OTHER THAN MAYANK SHARMA)
(HE PICKS UP THE CALL)
M: HELLO!!!!
CALLER: HELLO...MAYANK....
M: I AM SORRY I AM SORRY MUJHE MAAF KAR DO....
CALLER: MAYANK YEH GALAT BAAT HOTI HAI AAJ HUMARA EXCEL COLLEGE MAIN PEHLA DIN HAI AUR TUM ABHI TAK SO RAHE HO???
(A SWEET GIRL IS SHOWN WEARING JEANS N TOP SITTING ON HER ROOM'S WINDOW....HER LIPS R SHOWN WHILE SAYING THIS DIALOG...)
M: I AM SORRY GUNJAN
(THE GIRLS FACE IS NOW SHOWN SHE IS NONE OTHER THAN GUNJAN BHOOSHAN)
TUM TOH JAANTI HI HO....MAIN RAAT KO DER SE SOTA HOON AUR PHIR SUBAH UTHNE MAIN KITNI PROBLEM HOTI HAI.......

(GUNJAN IS NOW SMILING)
(THEN AT HER FACE THE SCENE IS PAUSED)
NARRATOR: EK MINUTE EK MINUTE AAPKO IN KE BAARE MAIN BHI KUCH BATA DE ....YEH HAI GUNJAN BHOOSHAN..YEH BHI MUMBAI APNE SAPNO KO POORA KARNE KE LIYE AAYI HAI ......JO YEH POORA KARNA CHAHTI HAI EXCEL SE GRADUATION KARKE)

(SCENE CONTINUES.....)
G: MAYANK AB BAHANE MARNA BAND KARO ....JALDI SE TAYYAR HO JAO......YAAD HAI NA AAJ HUMARA EXCEL MAIN PEHLA DIN HAI........
M: HAAN HAAN BABA PATA HAI MAIN READY HO KE TUMHE PICK UP KARTA HOON OK
G: OHK....
M: BYE......
G: BYE.....

(BOTH CUTS THE CALL AND THE SCENE SHIFS TO EXCEL COLLEGE)
NARRATOR: YEH HAI EXCEL COLLEGE....MUMBAI KA SABSE BADA AUR EXCELLENT COLLEGE....KNOWN FOR ITS  STANDARD.....ACTIVITIES,,,
KNOWLEDGEBLE TEACHERS N ACADEMICS..........
AUR YAHAN KI SABSE ZYADA HAPPENING GIRL HAI.......AAP KHUD DEKH LIJIYE....

SCENE: A GIRL WITH SEXY N HOT LOOKS WEARING MINI SKIRT ABD A TOP IS SHOWN IN ONE HAND HER PURSE IS THERE N FROM THE OTHER HAND SHE IS ASKING SOMEONE TO FOLLOW HER N THEY R NONE OTHER THAN BOYS...... AS SHE IS WALKING BOYS ARE FOLLOWING HER ....EACH N EVERYGIRL IS FEELING JEALOUS OF HER......N THEN HER FACE IS SHOWN )

NARRATOR: AUR YEH HAI...NUPUR GUPTA....... EXCEL KI SABSE ZADA HOT AND HAPPENING GIRL ....INKE PEECHE HAR LADKA PADA HUA HAI..........SHE IS INTELLIGENT N HAVE SHARP MIND........

N: OHH....COMEON BOYS.....
BOYS: NUPUR CAN U PLEASE COME ON A DATE WITH US PLEASE PLEASE.......
N: COME ON BOYS EH HO TO BAAT KARO...INTNE SAARO KO KAISE MAI BICHARI HANDLE KARO......
B: PLEASE NUPUR PLEASE.....
N:OHK OHK .....NOW U ALL LISTEN...TUM MONDAM TUESDAY TUM WEDNESDAY TUM THURSDAY TUM FRIDAY AUR TUM SATURDAY....OHK
(POINTING EACH N EVERY BOY)
ONE OF THE BOYS..: AUR MAIN SUNDAY
N: (LOOKING AT HIM) SORRY SUNDAY I M ALWAYS FIXED WITH SOMEONE SPECIAL....TUM PHIR NEXT MONDAY.......OK
B:OHK THANKS.....

(SHE PASSES FLYING KISS TO THE BOYS N AS SOON AS SHE TURNED SHE FALLED ON SOMEONES ARMS.....SHE WAS FEELING SECURE AT THAT TIME....SHE CLOSED HER EYES THE BOY IS NONE OTHER THAN MAYANK N GUNJAN WAS STANDING BESIDES HIM N WAS SMILING AT THE SCENE)

(AS SOON AS NUPUR OPENED HER EYES SHE SAW MAYANKS FACE N STARTED SCREAMING....)

N: TUM TUM DEKH KE NHI CHAL SAKTE THE......
(COMMING BACK ON HER FEETS)
BY GOD POORI DRESS KHARAB KAR DI.....(LOOKING AT HER DRESS)
M: MAINE DEKH KE NHI CHAL SAKTA THA.......EXCUSE ME.....GIRI TUM HO AUR NAAM MERA LAGA RAHI HO.......
N: TUM KEHNA CHAHTE HO KI GALTI MARE HAI......(SHOWING HIM HER FINGERS)
M:OF COURSE......(PUTTING HER FINGERS DOWN)
 N: BY GO TUM JAISA SADOO INSAAN MAINE AAJ TAK NHI DEKHA....
M: SADOO MAIN SADOO TUMHARI HIMMAT KAISE HUI MUJHE SADOO KEHNE KI....
N: TOH KYA KAR LOGE TUM???
(IN  A MOOD TO FIGHT  WITH HIM......)
G: OHK OHK GUYZZ PLEASE STOP IT....KITNA LADO GE.....
N: (TURNING TO HER) TUM?? TUM DONO KO PEHLE BAAR DEKHA HAI YAHA.......ARE U BOTH NEW....
G: YAA HI I M GUNJAN WE ARE NEW IN THIS COLLEGE.....
N: OHH  HI I AM NUPUR.......NICE TO MEET U
G: SAME HARE...
N: WAISE GUNJAN,,, YEH SADOO KUCH BOLTA BHI HAI???
M: TUMNE PHIR MUJHE SADOO KAHA???
N: AB SADOO KO SADOO NHI KAHOONGI TOH KYA KAHOONGI????
G: OHK OHK U TOO  PLEASE STOP FIGHTING......

(SUDDENLY A GIRL COMES TOWARDS THEM N STATED SAYING)
GIRL: NUPUR NUPUR SAMMY AA GAYA.....
N: KYA SAMMY AA GAYA???
GIRL: HAAN 
N: CHALO.... JALDI
G: NUPUR...
N: HUH????
G:YEH SAMMY....
N: SAMMY SIRF MERE LIYE TUMHARE LIYE SAMRAT....
G: SAMRAT?? YEH KAUN HAI??
N: TUM SAMMY KO NHI JAANTI ????
G: NHI.......



(SORRY GUYZZ ISKE AAGE NEXT PART MAIN TIME NHI THA I AM SORRY I HOPE U ALL LIKE IT DONT FORGET TO POST UR COMMENTS.......)

NEXT PART:SAMMY INTRO N MUCH MORE

LOVE
SURABHI


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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
great start surabhi , its just awesome do continue............................Clap

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gr88888 part yar.....
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great start dear.............

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