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mil gaye hum tum-(sajan/mayur FF) UPD. PAGE 13 (Page 13)

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Posted: 01 March 2011 at 3:04am | IP Logged

diiiiiiiii the part was really good

 

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
lovely.........awesome updt
do cont soon...thanx 4 d pm!
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Hey dear
beautiful update
part 3 was awesome
loved mayur a lot
plz do pm me ur next update
Take care
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Hi sweety, when r u updating this ff? Do cont soon.
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
nice part
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Winkhey guyzzBig smile this is surabhi back atlast updating my mjht ff again "phew" as u all know i am buzy in studies n all but since my vacations started so i thought of updating all my ff n os ryt now only ...so i hope u all lyk it!!!

here is a quick recap as its been ages since i updated this ff n i think u all must have forgot itLOLLOLLOL

Recap: excel college first day first class
mayank nupur silly fight
samrat gunjan cute talk
abt their respective friends n n decided to make them from 'so called enemies ' to "gud friends" bt they themselves didnt knew the answer of the BIGGEST question HOW???


after sharing their pov samrat made way to the canteen as WARNED by nupur and gunjan made her way to the library as SUGGESTED by mayank

EXCEL COLLEGE~~CANTEEN~~

in a corner nupur was sitting with her gaze on the table n murmering abt someone or rather u can say planning smethng big abt SOMEONE

"hmph samajhta hai kya hai apne apko mr. Sadu naya naya college main aya hai aur ate hi apne apko hero samajhne laga  abhi janta kaha hai woh mjhe main bhi nupur hoon NUPUR GUPTA aisa sabak sikhaongi us idiot ko akal thikane lag jaegi ek minute main" nupur thought with an evil smile on her face


on the other side as samrat entered the canteen he experienced the sight of the scene which made his inner feelings arouse

"aaj toh tu gaya dude zara as pas dekh le kahin koi helmet toh nhi hai abhi miss toofan express ka dimag garam sorry sorry garam nhi kuch zyada hi garam lag raha hai"


unbelievable to his eyes he saw nupur beating a totally geek guy with her purse n shouting

"SAMAJHTE KYA HO APNE AAP KO U IDIOT ~beat~ SHAKAL DEKHI HAI APNI AAYENE MAIN ~beat~ CHAMPU HO TUM POORE KE POORE ..."


As she was going to say further samrat with a ~soon to be killed ~ look kept hand on nupurs shoulder
 Where nupur raised her hand in the air n turned

"teri toh..."

n samrat kept both of his hands on his face


SCENE SHIFTS


EXCEL COLLEGE ~~LIBRARY~~

AS gunjan entered library she moved her head n x-raied each n every corner of it n thex FINALLY she found mayank sitting their in a corner table with book in his hand behaving lyk he was lost in book bt the truth was he was lost in someones thoughts bt with threatning looks

seeing him gunjan smiled n quitely went n make herself seated besides him

"ahem ahem " asking fr attention

"thank god gunjan tum yaha agai agar tm waha us pagal ke sath rehti na toh tmhara bhi dimag kharab ho jata"

"awww dnt be so rude mayank she was so sweet u cnt call her pagal"

"sweet aur woh hah duniya main jitne bhi pagal honge na sbse bdi wali pagal hogi one n only nupur gupta shaitano ki maharani "

"dnt be rude mayank  nupur is so beautiful so cute so darling haye kash woh meri gf hoti" one of the boy sitting besides mayank retreated his thoughts

"hello mr. Tm yaha book padhne aye ho ya doosro ki batein sunne ae ho agar ek shbd bhi bola na toh samajh lena bura anjaam hoga chup chap apni buk padh " mayank warned him with a ~u r going to be dead dude ~luk on his face

"yeh sb kya hai mayank? Aaj humara college main first day hai aur tmne ate hi ladai shuru kar di?"

"tm mjhe janti ho gunjan main kaisa hoon par us so called nupur ne mera dimag kharab kar ke rakh diya hai yr main kya karo"

"dekho mayank main tmhari situation samajh sakti hoon yr bt please try to frgt everythng n use frienedship karo please dekho agar woh tmhe kuch kehte hain aur tm use reply main kuch kahoge toh usse achcha nhi lagega dekho mayank hum sb jante hain ki sb kuch jispe fight hui hai sb ek silly topic hai toh cmeon yr usse extend karne se achcha hai ki finish it ryt here n ryt nw"

"bt y me gunjan woh bhi toh sorry keh sakti hai "

"mayank yeh jo so called question hota hai y only me this is the main cause of all this fight  ek sorry kehne se tm chote ya bade toh ho nhi jaoge ryt? "

"yeah u r always ryt" mayank said with a cute face

"woh main janti hoon" gunjan said patting her shoulders n both laughed keeping in mind the silence as it was library n a big banner was there
"KEEP SILENCE "

"nw chalo ab utho n lets go to canteen" gunjan said in demanding tone

"canteen y canteen?"

"nupur se mafi mangne"she said smiling

"but... " mayank revolted bck bt gunjan glared at him

"maine kya kaha chalte hai na canteen"mayank cmpleted cutely n led his way to the canteen leaving behind a smiling gunjan


SCENE SHIFTS

EXCEL COLLEGE ~~CANTEEN~~


"samrat tum??" nupur shouted

"uffo nupur main yahi hoon kahi bhag nhi raha itna chilla kyun rhi ho?" samrat said with his hands on his ears

"nhi woh bs yeh champu.. " as she turned she saw the retreating figure of tht guy

samrat smiled n held nupur by shoulders n made her sit on the chair making himself sitting besides her

"tmhe nhi lagta nupur ki tmne over react kar diya?"
samrat asked

"kaun woh champu samrat u knw woh..."

before she could speak further samrat cutts off

"main mayank ki baat kar raha hoon nupur aur yeh tm bhi achche tarah se janti ho
"

"samrat tm ..."

"samrat tm kya nupur yeh tm bhi jante ho jin reasons ko le ke tmne fight start ki woh bilkul galat tha blki galti kisi ki bhi nhi thi thi woh mistake kisi se bhi ho sakte thi tm bhi janti ho ki tmne over react kiya ryt ?"

"hmmm " nupur went silent

"toh ek good girl ki tarah mayank se maafi maango aur friendship karo ohkkk aur haan tumhari yeh nose jab red hoti hai na tab tum aur bhi cute lagti ho " samrat said in a flirty tone n pinched nupurs nose n nupur smiled n both hugged each other...Embarrassed Embarrassed

precap-  nupur and mayank friends Wink
-samrat,gunjan,mayank ,nupur party time LOL
-n something fisshhyyy going onLOL

so guyzzz finally i updated sorry for the late update but i was buzy!!!Confused
but i hope u all like this part n please do leave comments ...
i will be very glad
n dont forget to hit on the lyk tab!!!!!!

love
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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
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awesome upt bhukad..LOL
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loved it soo much..
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specially sam
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thank god u updted...otherwise
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u were-
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perfect updt!!!!
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but bohot chhota tha...
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par still bohot acha tha..
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Edited by ambikamuskaan - 02 June 2011 at 10:54am

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reservedEmbarrassed.. Will read from the beginning and then comment!Smile

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