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Proud-BrownGirl

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
Part two was just superb, can't wait to read what Bani decision will be about going to India.

Update part three soon please.

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:25pm | IP Logged
Just read both chapters, and I must say, very interesting. Love the development of Jai's and Bani's characters. Please continue soon.

ksasi

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
nice part.

pooks

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Another beautifully penned part. I am so glad you shaped up Bani's character in a strong manner. The slap she gave Jai was so due and deserved. But I think, Bani's love for Mausi will compel her to go back.

Even if she does go back, please do not let her falter in front of Jai. I want that dumb*** o grovel to her.

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 8:07am | IP Logged
GR8! But pls update "Incomplete life" now yaarr! hehe, Keep up the good work! (:

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 10:42am | IP Logged
beautifully written. just loved it esp da slap he deserves another. If bani goes dack 2 india 4 mausi sake pls do not make her fall 4 jai so soon. I agree he grovel to. Keep up da good work also waiting 4 an update on incomplete life

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Good part...........Hope Bani goes to met masi.But alone...

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
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