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Lily/Abhay/Piya - OS. (Warning- Angsty) (Page 3)

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 6:53am | IP Logged
That was naaiiicee! :D

Are u like going to continue?...or is it ..THE END? LOL

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Humaira-

That was naaiiicee! :D

Are u like going to continue?...or is it ..THE END? LOL
Thank you Humaira !Big smile
 
Nah. I think I am ending it there. I am planning to write something like a sequel to this one though, where Abhay finds himself in front of Maithili's grave again when Piya's attacked by a vampire or something like that. Dunno why. I love angst ! Lol.
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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 7:42am | IP Logged
i loved it buddy...
Originally posted by 0o.Leah.o0

Originally posted by pRaTiBhA.1990

plz try. .nywaz u r a gud writer. .m luking forward 4 ur nxt OS
Aww..Thanks sweetie !
 
Originally posted by kaushiki9

heyyyyyyyy
thats not fair....
u ended it so soon...
 
i was like dreaming while reading......
 
bt any ways it was 222222222222 gd....
keep posting plsssss
You liked it that much?
Thank you SO much for reading it!

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 9:25am | IP Logged
wow! dud simply awesome yar ! 
i am touched Cry and so beautifully written u r great !
LOVE U .....................Smile 

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aromal

wow! dud simply awesome yar ! 
i am touched Cry and so beautifully written u r great !
LOVE U .....................Smile 

You think so ? Thank you so much !
Aww...Love you too. Lol.LOL

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Kanky-

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Babe, you could continue!! But leave all the cheesy stuff to the show, please. :P

It's magnificent, and you write beautifully. Really! Your version of the rapport between Abhay and Maithili is the highlight - it is like friends, like Maithili understands him more than anybody else. In front of her, he's anything but a monster - so is it with Pia, but erm - here it was altogether something more intense. Beautiful piece, maybe I should try AbhIya too. :D

-Kankshita
Cheej is not my thing. LOL
Aww...You think so? Thanks Kanky !
Yeah thats what I wanted to show. I wanted to show how much Lily cared for him, and no matter how much how much she loved him, she was willing to let him go, for his happiness.
 
Thanks for reading!Hug
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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 0o.Leah.o0

Originally posted by -Kanky-

*Edited*

Babe, you could continue!! But leave all the cheesy stuff to the show, please. :P

It's magnificent, and you write beautifully. Really! Your version of the rapport between Abhay and Maithili is the highlight - it is like friends, like Maithili understands him more than anybody else. In front of her, he's anything but a monster - so is it with Pia, but erm - here it was altogether something more intense. Beautiful piece, maybe I should try AbhIya too. :D

-Kankshita
Cheej is not my thing. LOL
Aww...You think so? Thanks Kanky !
Yeah thats what I wanted to show. I wanted to show how much Lily cared for him, and no matter how much how much she loved him, she was willing to let him go, for his happiness.
 
Thanks for reading!Hug

Thats an institution am naive and nearly ignorant about, lovey dovey shit! Though, if I am entitled to read love, I look for such things first. Things close to some feeling, no hormone activation. You get that, right? LOL

Well, you're welcome bud!

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