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Life partner Maneet FF Climax (Page 9)

VSai2008 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
short n cute update
pls make it longer next time
thanks 4 pm
do continue soon
take care

_darklove_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
Aww nice part
blueopal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
hey  soooooooooooooo   sweet   update  dear.........i  loved  it................
looking  fwd..................

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 1:53am | IP Logged

Life partner Part 4

Maan:I heard that you are a dancer.
Geet:Not really.I love dancing.That's all.
M:I would love to dance.Will you teach me to dance? 
She giggles.
M:Your laughter sounds nice.
G:Thank you.
MShall we meet one day?
MWe will meet outside.
G:I have to get my parents' permission.
M:Sure.Even i have to get my parents' permission.
"Geet!"Bhumi calls her.
Shesmiles:Ok...Bhumi is calling me.So bye...
After putting the phone down Maan tells himself:Bhumi interrupted our conversation.Stupid girl!

Geet goes to the room where all are there.
B:Where were you? 
She is shy:Krishna was on the phone.
They all smile.
G:He said he got my number from dad.
Om:Yes.I gave him the number.
G:He wants to meet me outside.
O:Why not?You go..
She smiles.

Maan tells Mohini:Mom,i'm planning to meet Geet outside.
Mohini:No way.
Mo:Because you both are not married yet.What will others talk bout you both.It will harm the reputation of our family.
M:But she is my fiancee.
Mo:Even the engagement is not over.
Maan goes inside his room.
Geet rings him up.
G:I'm Geet.
M:Hi Geet..happy to hear your voice.
G:I got permission from my parents.
M:But i did'nt get permission from my mom.She is totally against the concept of dating.I'm angry with my mom now.
She becomes dull.
M:Don't be angry with your mom.She is your mom.We have to obey our elders.
Ronit enters Maan's room.
Maan sees him.
K:I will call you later.
He puts the phone down.
R:You are so narrow minded.Who will ask their parents to give permission for dating?
You go brother.Make your lady love happy.Have fun with Geet.
Maan smiles:Yes.
He calls up Geet:Hi Geet...i'm Maan.We will meet.
G:You got permission?
M:No.But we will meet.
She smiles.


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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 1:59am | IP Logged
wow loved it sweet maan and geet... geet got the permission but maan dint get ?? do update the next part soon !!Smile
ambbiha IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 2:00am | IP Logged
i loved itWinkWinkWinkWink
cute conversation bet maaneet so maaneet on their 1st dateEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
namita25 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 2:03am | IP Logged
superb update....
I am happy Geet agreed to get marrried to Maan...
loved their phone convo....
hate Maan's mom...hope she doesn't trouble Geet
looking forward to their meeting...
update soon....

Edited by namita25 - 08 January 2011 at 2:04am
VSai2008 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 2:16am | IP Logged
lovely update
thanks to ronit 4 giving d gr8 idea
maaneet conversation was nice
cant wait 4 next part
do continue soon
thank u so very much 4 pm
take care

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